Sanguinity - Chapter 7.5 (Interlude: Miss Militia)
Uuuuu...
It's finally done.
Sanguinity - Chapter 7.5 (Interlude: Miss Militia)
Chapter was way longer than I wanted, but... It all felt good to put in. There's tons of reveals, character moments, lore, canon changes, plot point hints, and more packed in there, and while I could have cut down the content, the beauty of a web novel is that I don't really need to. My only real concern is that if it worked or not.
Feeling overwhelmed by the amount of characters introduced? That's okay, don't worry! This was very much a cold plunge into the wider world of Sanguinity, and I plan to fully introduce characters slowly as they appear. So if you forget who they are, that's absolutely fine, this is more of an ice breaker approach.
Hopefully you all enjoy because I stressed over this chapter something fierce trying to get it to a state I could be satisfied with. For those who don't like interludes, no worries, next chapter we return to our bumbling vampire.
Last thing to note: For publicly available chapters, I've started adding epub and pdf uploads on both the Patreon post of the chapter and in a Discord channel. Hopefully this will make the story more accessible for those who don't care for either Google Docs or Spacebattles formatting. Best wishes, everyone, and I hope you enjoy Silksong's release if that's your thing!
Comments (13)
Decided to finally check in on this Might be some of your best writing yet, honestly.
One more (hopefully funny) comment. If you're familiar with the YouTube channel "Zac Speaks Giant", you may have seen this one. But I am now imagining Gwen trying this... https://youtube.com/shorts/6JopC2n2p64?si=TnYsLVm-dXdjJhsk
Just doing a reread and had a possible grim thought wouldn't alabaster make a great blood donor/captive
Sorry, one more comment. A question actually. Why do you post the Google Docs links instead of posting directly onto Patreon? Nothing wrong with doing it that way, I've just not seen it done that way before and I'm curious if there is a reason why?
Formatting issues with copy and pasting directly to Patreon make it a pain and would add an annoying amount of time for me to fix each chapter mostly. Although, Patreon has had some updates since I last tried it, so maybe I'll give it another look.
Great chapter, reminding me why worm was a story that caught me
🔥 🔥 🔥 awesome chapter!
What a great chapter, and a massive relief after the previous one. The drama really amps up the feels and I have loved everything that’s happened so far, but I was starting to get a little worried that this story would be like Worm, only ever having things get worse. Some real stakes and real feels are great, but a little relief is needed to not just become depressing. New Wave being blatantly blamed for their massive F up was very cathartic and enjoyable, even if the damage has already been done. Hotshot is going to show up and cause problems isn’t he? Well as long as he gets his proper comeuppance as has been teased… Poor Gwen’s sister. Learning her parents were killed and her sister is now amnesiac and evading authorities is probably rough. Hopefully they meet soon. Amazing writing and I’m looking forward to more!
I'm wondering from panacea reaction if she worked often with her mom
Love the chapter and don't mind waiting for ones like this, im hoping that one of the independent heros find Gwen and can talk to her or hearthlight as they are not in the cannon she remembers maybe they can talk her thru some of the differences. I can see her signing up with either the rogue association or hearth light if she joins a team but why do I get a bad feeling about hotshot
Amazing chapter! If she joins Hearthlight, I want Megaladon to be Sanguine's honorary big brother. He seemed like a good dude.
What a FANTASTIC chapter! Thank you so much for that! Also, I am relieved to see some reasonable adults and some comeuppance for the ones who had been acting unreasonably. I just hope Gwen stays safe and away from the really dangerous villains.
Loved it! Thanks for the chapter! Truly a massive one.