Magical Girl Gunslinger Chapter 24 - Death Wish: Part II
Magical Girl Gunslinger Chapter 24 - Death Wish: Part II
Patch Notes
-Error's mana regeneration was incorrect in Chapter 22, it is now correct at nearly fifty-nine mana regeneration per second.
-Mai states she spent all her points buying thing in preparation, but I did my math wrong and missed 20 points. She has now spent it on buying an enhanced shirt and leggings to go underneath her other enhanced clothes and provide her the slightest bit more protection.
-Changes to some sentences to make paragraphs read better.
-The amount of ammunition Mai has for her Umbra changed slightly due to a miscount earlier in the story. She now has more filled magazines, so during a later part of the battle, it was emphasized she was going very quickly through her ammo in an attempt to stem the Anathema tide.
-Small addition near the end to show Mai's building pain/exhaustion/shock
Comments (5)
I just...I just really love everything about this damn story and it's heart wrenching, eye watering ridiculousness! So F'ing good!!! TFTC
I really like the additional armor addition.
The sequence from Revelations to death wish part 2 is incredible writing. Some of the most emotional, gut-wrenching, edge of the seat reading with its reveals, action, cliffhangers, and more. I sometimes go back once a month just to reread errors speech at the end of the war chapter just to feel something. I'm so glad you're sticking with the story.
whelp, time to cry again
When will you post the edit that lets Mai be happy?