Magical Girl Gunslinger: Chapter 21 - Origin
Magical Girl Gunslinger: Chapter 21 - Origin
Patch Notes
-The personal shield a Guardian has in their Astral Shift has been renamed from "Aura" to "Astral Barrier," which is often just shortened to just "Barrier." Later uses of Aura will be fixed as the edited chapters are posted.
-There was some rewording about the explanation for Darks, mostly to help emphasize courage as part of what they represent.
-Various other small tweaks and fixes.
Comments (5)
This chapter hurts! It really does, and I don't often read a story that envokes that kind of emotion. You are absolutely amazing at this!! Thank you for what you do! TFTC
I just love the way Mai has been influenced by Keanu Reeves work. Drawn to FPS by John Wick and now quoting Neo. :-)
Hahaha seriously each time a reference to Keanu is made I get the biggest shit eating grin!!!
Typo: > Trust me, if it was, I would be all for it, but even a if all the officers in your shelter wen with her, it wouldn’t make a difference.”
Damn if this chapter doesn’t get me every time. You can almost feel the emotions from everyone.