Magical Girl Gunslinger: Chapter 18 - Duo

Boss fight beat down!! As it should be! So fun to read!! TFTC

Minor edit: "...and I quickly changed courses in a full right-angle turn. " i think "courses" should be "course", singular not plural. Bloody web app can't do new lines on mobile.

Speaking of edits: "I landed on my backpack, cushioning my fall marginally even as the few objects stored within stabbed against into painfully." I think the end of this sentence was supposed to mention the contents of her bag stabbing into her. That was the only thing I saw that needed a touch up, it reads a lot smoother than before. Good work!

Thank you for continuing making this story. It's been a wonderful read and I think you're doing a great job with the edits!