Remedy Chapter Four: Abrasion 1.4 (Complete)
Hurrah! The second part of Abrasion 1.4 is now complete. Sitting at 6.5k words, it nearly doubles the length of the chapter. Originally, I only thought it would be two or three thousand words, hence my ridiculously optimistic thoughts on how quickly I would complete it.
To read the full chapter (Part One + Part Two), click Here.
To read only Part Two , click Here.
To read the full chapter on Spacebattles, click Here.
In other news, I'm doing a full reread of Magical Girl Gunslinger just to get myself back in the mindset before fully immersing myself in the next chapter. As I'm going, I'm doing small edits just to help tidy up a few things. I'm not planning on any major lore retcons or anything, but if there are some things that get clarified/edited, I'll make sure to let you all know when MGG's next chapter drops.
Comments (6)
Great chapter! Loved the reference image at the end there.
Thank you for the chapter. Aide is a cute little trauma munchkin.
TYFC! This made my day
By the way, If I were to suggest an edit to make, in chapter 22 of MGG, the part where Error erases the phone video was kind of confusingly written... I think other people suggested to change it before, idk.
Looks good with some good world building
TYFC, can’t wait for the next one!