Comic Rewards 11-05-2024 (Part 2 of 2)
I want to thank the steering committee for allowing me to take a break from Mistress Theressa and work on this small narrative story about Penelope. It shouldn't be tooooo long but she's cute and I want to cover her predicament as a character. This is just the first page.
Here are the back issues available for download so far. Please enjoy!
https://www.patreon.com/posts/37933824
https://www.patreon.com/posts/37934326
https://www.patreon.com/posts/back-issue-2017-37934369
https://www.patreon.com/posts/37934420
https://www.patreon.com/posts/2020-comic-59546758
https://www.patreon.com/posts/68693963
Thank you all! You're the best.
Comments (20)
Uh, is this page 2 of 2 or page 1 of 2? The dialog implies there's more to come.
Dude this is a whole comic. It's going into next year.
The truth is that I was looking forward to seeing Piper in action, although one question, is she lesbian or bi?
Been looking forward to this. Penelope is one my favourite characters along with lynne. What can I say, I like naturally hairy girls.
So this is where Piper showed up! She and Penelope are both looking great here! A major strength of your artwork is definitely how expressive you make characters. This page is an excellent example! You absolutely nailed Piper's looks especially. Great job making the middle scene feel intense, Piper's look really sells it! Plus the motion lines and panel breaking work well for adding intensity too. The bottom center panel is incredible too! Spectacular work with Piper's face there, superb expression and details like the sweat are a nice touch. It'd be great to see more like that from you! Another thing you did well here was the text, great use of different font sizes and bolding for emphasis. It works well for the "AH!"s and "Right there!" particularly. Penelope's Secret is off to a great start! Excited to see where it goes from here!
Get the feeling the next page is gonna be about Genny and her having trysts from time to time and it's got her thinkin' she might actually be bi, maybe
I am excited for this comic in December.
Ultimate bed and breakfast
Hot girls
Hah I was right about Piper!
MOUSE COMIC! MOUSE COMIC! FUCK YEAH!!! <3<3<3
YESSSSSSS, WOOHOO!
Penelope damn
Don't often see a mouse eating a cat
I love it already. The facial expression of her and the knowledge of what's to come. Great work really. :)
yeah you can tell she's getting kind of tired with eating box and the intrusive thoughts about penises are starting to plant in.
This is gonna be fun
Hooray the first page, with a fun beginning
Top Notch work as always Jay, thank you for this! Penelope is super cute and I love seeing her in this work of yours! Appreciate the great art, smut or not, your talent and happy to be here!
It’s always nice to take a break