May 30, 2018

Glance of Paranoia (hiagb) (pencils)

I wish I spent today a little more responsibly, but what's done is done. the second good boy for the week will have to be pushed to friday, but I did spend a good chunk of time doing a second pass of the writing on this page and feel very good about it, especially the third panel joke. 

I can't wait to get to the greasy and violent parts of this whole final act. You're gonna have a gross time. 

Comments (4)

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Crotchy Donkles · May 31, 2018

This has went from really good to scary good. Thanks KC.

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orange talc · May 31, 2018

i love this comic. & i love your writing kc, broad strokes and dialogue

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Ami · May 30, 2018

Curious about the earlier draft on the dialogue but yeah, this had a great setup

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KC Green · May 31, 2018

it was about the same, but I added in extra dialogue to make parts of it flow better between moment-to-moment, joke-to-joke