SM 6: Hollow Sorrows - Deleted script/scenes pt6

HI HIII!!!

I know it's late!! but for anyone who owns Splatoon 3 KNOWS AND UNDERSTANDS!!! AHBAHBAH

ok! Let's talk about the last part of the deleted script and you will probably will grind your teeth~ (btw sorry for the english again ahahah it was the first fast script)

Ok, first idea for the death of Moloch was dumb and anticlimatic. He enters Skids house, makes a mess and Gregor gets inside and vanish him... no Skid and Pump possesion!!! NOTHING!!!! of course we needed to change it to make the final fight with him more cool!

The next part was Lila vs Gregor, the first idea was (Drunk) Lila becoming irresponsible and not caring about what a stranger says, it's common that parents do not like to be scolded by others about their children, even tho it can help them for the future. Jaune was not going to take Pump with her, ethier she was going to be drunk as well or something. Separating Pump from people he knows (friend, sister, parents) will make him vulnerable and listen to someone else. Obviously this part was changed because drunk people are more vulnerable to their insecurities and also to make the scene more important, rememger; Gregor is the antagonist.

Ok!! first of all, we changed this because I CAN'T SHOW THE KIDS WITHOUT A MASK UNTIL LAST EPISODE. This was going to be a win for an antagonist. Pump, with his insecurities and alone, finally breaks character only to have someones acceptance, and also completing the goal of entering the church. If I let this scene then Jaune and Susie wouldn't be as important to the story.

 

Now that Pump broke character he feels confident and open to talk to Gregor, he let's him know about a "Lord" in the sky, but Pump, beign a kid, thinks he talks about someone else. Pumps goes back happy and Gregor wins ( I mean he wins in the episode as well but yeeeh).

Same reason as before! also feels like a really short conversation when Pump can talk about EVERYTHING that has happened to him, and making the father more curious about the town... BUT THE EPISODE WAS SUPER LONG ALREADY.

 
AND THE ENDING!!! The first script was Gregor trying to fight, but the scene was more intense without words (I forgot to put them when rendering the thumbnails and I loved it ahahah) oh yeah and Eyes will have a new voice... I MADE EVERY SINGLE VOICE ACTOR SPEAK AND DID NOT USE IT TO MAKE THE SCENE MORE INTESE!!! AHAHAHAHHA but yeah!! Eyes has a new voice.... oh and I can't show you what happens next.

And that's all!!.. well not all, I found more deleted scripts! probably the nexst one will be the last one for the deleted scenes/scripts!!! crya in a little for the paid patreons!!! oh and here!!!! have the reason why I posted this late!!

 

cya!!!