SM 6: Hollow Sorrows - Deleted script/scenes pt2

HIH IH IHI HIHIH sorry for the late heres some deleted scenes!!!!!

Last time I showed you 2 intros that were not used because they were not strong/impactful for the episode!
Today and the next days I will show you the first script and explain why I did not used them (Even voice actors want to know, they recorded a lot ahahah) and I will show ya some doodles for fun! BTW! sorry for any "language error" in the script, it was the first one + english is my secondary language!! I am still trying ahahah.

The first one is Lila talking to Skid (after the phone call with Jaune). The first idea was Lila letting Skid go out by himself, showing her negligence because how she grew up, but one of my friends pointed out something important; Skid's Dad, which is a BIG REASON why Lila let's Skid be as free as she can let him be, so this was deleted, brining the personal struggles of characters into the story.

In the "9 Cicles" or the kids having fun scene, I wanted to show the kids throwing EVERYTHING in the mall, but these scene is ment to show the kids being chaotic and innocent like always, so it was changed to something quick.

The same thing happend in the Kevin scene (the part with Radford) I doodled the kids 4 times as examples and the rough animator made their own creation, at the begining I liked it but then I didn't saw the kids as "scribble-ish" as I wanted, so I changed it. And that last part with Radford, when Kevin says no, was deleted to make the scene fast! (and I dind't like the "no?" thing lol it felt weird) I will be putting it in attachments!

Here's the scribbles for Skid n Pump

And the last change was the "meeting" with Moloch and Patty, I wanted to make it a little bit of a paranormal way, like in movies, where there is something in the back and then it's not there, but it was changed to keep it as misterious as possible.

And thjat's it for the momment!!! Sorry I've been gone for this month, I was making an animation (shitpost) and sadly lost everything I got, I am working on it while working on the short for this october!!!! I hope I can get things done fast and show ya more!!!!

k bye bybeye