1st Goal Reached!

This needs female romance options pretty bad. The female characters outshine the male characters by far. I'm not talking one-off scenes either. I feel it would be more inclusive to make them full relationships just like with the guys.

Then let's start. 1. First scene. "Pleaseant" instead of "pleasant". 2. Scene with Iris and Eric. "yo pick up a book" instead of "to" . 3. TV scene. "Thank kind of body" instead of "that". 4. Gym scene. "Allways cheer me" instead of "always". If you greet Dave, Ashley says "mopre often" instead of "more". After, first choice "I didn,t know" instead of "didn't. In choice "I'd prefer to be with Dave" "he his my" instead of "he is my". And "obviuous" instead of "obvious". 5. Jessica scene. Third choice "you arew not" instead of "you are not". 6. Gift choosing, scene at clothing store. Second choice, Eva says "you can allways" instead of "always". If you try the dress, second choice "stays on the store" instead of "in". 7. Scene with Jessica and Jack. First choice "bofyfriend's" instead of "boyfriend's". Second choice, Jack says "Ahley". 8. Scene with Eric's dad. Second choice (bad girl path) "yo like me" instead of "you". After, first choice "almoust devoured" instead of almost. Third choice "slidind" instead of "sliding". Scene with Eric. "couldn't get yo" instead of "you". After, second choice "insde me" instead of "inside". After third choice in bad girl path, "relase it" instead of "release", "yearing for" instead of "yearning for", and after second option "allright" instead of "alright". 9. Scene at gym. "well equiped" instead of "equipped". After, in bad girl path "could,nt" instead of "couldn't". "sings of blushing" instead of "signs". 10. Spa scene. "Swiming trunks" instead of "swimming". In the good girl path "cointinuing" instead of "continuing". At the bad girl path, first choice "inappropiate" instead of "inappropriate". Second option "definetly" instead of "definitely". Second and third option "af is nothing" instead of "as if nothing". 11. Scene with family. "Comitted" instead of "committed". "responibility" instead of "responsibility". First option "commom" instead of "common". Second option "scolarship" instead of "scholarship". Third option, "Dad" talk as "Eric's Dad" at first. I probably missed some mistakes. And patreon likes to delete my comments. Don't know why.

Thanks a lot! I'll check those mistakes right away. My intention is to include a variety of options that the player can choose, and see what the comunity likes and want. For example, Eric's Dad seem to get a lot of love from you guys haha. And there will difinetly be girl+girl content if you guys want it :)

Great art, story seems interesting too. And first version is pretty long. Found some mistakes in text, like "he/his" about Eva in the first conversation with Eva and Dave. But nothing too major. I have one question - is there gonna be girl+girl content? Loverslab forum have some awesome community, so you can promote game there.

Tried it out today, very nice for a 1st version. Really enjoy the variety of options that spring up as you become nicer/naughtier and how you treat others. Keep that up. Would like to see 2 things, one would be a guide at some point and secondly I'd love to see Ashley look/act naughtier. She's told several times she has great legs, would love to see her in tight leggings or stockings. Live on the baaaad side! Keep up the good work, looking forward to the next release.

Love your style hope you keep growing support, can't wait to see the next updates. :D

Keep up the good work. <3