March 29, 2023

Weekly Status Report Chapter 11 (5)

This week I've been dividing work between several tasks:

Revising and polishing Ian's part of the script. I still haven't play-tested it thoroughly since some art still has to be finished, so I also focused on that. I'm trying to include more animations in lew scenes, and Ian's part has 13 of them.

I've been editing and finishing colored art, as well as drawing line-art and sketching and preparing the scenes for Lena's part of the script. I also commissioned 2 new scenarios, and will probably comission 2 more for this chapter.

I've been working on the final structure for Lena's part of the script, and also started writing some scenes. I've known what scenes I want to include, but sometimes it takes time to flesh out the general idea and concept I have on my mind until I develop a good structure for the scene and how and where to implement it in the script. At this point in the story I'm trying to avoid generic lewd scenes and make them somewhat original, so that they advance the plot and serve to develop character relationships (as well as being hot and sexy).

We've been also working on something related to Lena's song writing, and I'll share it with you in a couple of days. Other than that, I'll keep moving forward with the tasks I mentioned before during this week, and I'll keep you posted!

Comments (7)

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Lascivo · April 4, 2023

It’s nice to see things are going smoothly and without creative blocks, even if the writing is getting harder as the plots progresses. I also like the effort you put in sex scenes for making them hot but also important for character development. And even if you haven’t mentioned him especially, I’d like to tell you that I love what you have done with Stan after the revision of the whole game, giving him depth and more development that being just the weird nerd flat mate.

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Armando Antunez · April 1, 2023

Oh! I wanna say something! In one of the earlier chapters there's a scene in which Ian can do drugs and if he does, the result is freaking hilarious! I don't know if anyone here caught the reference to the Portal game but I thought it was brilliant 🤣

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Charles S · March 30, 2023

More Holly! 😁

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Ken J · April 3, 2023

Yes, can never be too much Holly!

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Dennis · March 29, 2023

Ian has got 13 lewd scenes planned? I definitly play him too tame ;) . Good to hear you work goes on steadily.

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Brother Bethor · March 29, 2023

Not lewd scenes but 13 animations. A scene could have few of those.

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Brother Bethor · March 29, 2023

Thank you Eva for the heads up. It's a very good news that work is flowing at satisfactory pace. 4 new locations? Wow! I wonder what it will be. Holly's room, perhaps?