Chapter 15.3 Status Report (2)
These past few days, I’ve been making good progress on both the art and writing fronts. I’ve completed around 12 illustrations and have been tackling the script with renewed energy.
It’s funny how reaching the release of a new update always leaves me exhausted, but once it’s out, I usually feel revitalized and eager to dive straight into the next one without a break. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that the first stage of development is always the most creative: deciding which scenes to include, how to structure them, and how to build the spicy scenes.
I’m trying to make sure the new scenes move the different plot points forward and feel meaningful. I’m also trying to stick to the design decision of prioritizing certain scenes that feel key and/or offer something new, investing more time and resources into them while making greater use of ellipses for more routine scenes and keeping them more concise.
I’d love to flesh out every scene as much as possible, but I have to prioritize moving the story forward. That said, I hope to revisit some of these scenes in the future and develop many of the ideas I’d like to include but have to put aside for now.
For example, the threesome scene between Ian, Lena, and Emma in the last chapter almost didn’t make it in, but I’d been looking for the right opportunity to include it for a long time. In a way, I regret not adding it back in Chapter 12, but the narrative complexity I was already dealing with at the time made that impossible.
It felt worth making room for it now, and even then, I felt like what I included was the bare minimum. I had several ideas for extending it further and would have liked to explore the scene in more depth. Still, I think it was pretty well received, and I haven’t given up hope of expanding it in the future.
Which scenes would you like to see expanded? And which scenes do you think work well within the overall story despite being relatively brief?
Comments (55)
A chapter with cindy's pov would be cool
Threesome scene with Lena/Perry/Wade and Maybe Ian convince louise to have threesome with him and stan or someone else.
I like the storyline involving Lena and her ex-boyfriend; I hope there will be more scenes featuring him.
lena descending into porn
Throat train Cindy was a missed opportunity!
Thanks for the info. In addition to blonde Alison's already established/soon-to-be nipple piercings, it'd be neat to see a new nail color on blonde Alison, maybe a longer nail as well. That could be hot at Ian, Alison, and Jeremy's second threesome on routes in which Ian suggests a second threesome to Alison. I enjoyed the tattoo scene at the house party.
Also, Ian doesn't see Lenas OF content if she cheats and does scene with someone else? Wth?
Personally I really liked the interactions between Ian and Jessica we've had so far! Those scenes managed to say a lot of things on their dynamic, and I'm really interested to see where this goes. And of course I can't wait to see how Ian's relationship with Ivy evolves! (I don't know why but I really love these two, they're hot but also surprisingly cute together)
Might be challenging, but I’d love a path with Emma/Ian heading to a real relationship. Or Seymour gives Emma a similar offer as Lena and she joins them in their fun.
In my head canon, Emma conspires with Lena to get dirt on Seymour. If that requires her to go "undercover", then I'm all for it.
Although I detest the character I do have a play through with Lena/Axel (punishment route) so I’m curious about how that might play out depending on variables like Seymour (y/n) or Ian or Jeremy. So to answer your questions specifically, I think the Lena/Axel scene at end of last chapter worked really well in the story despite being brief, but otherwise I’m loving all your editorial choices to date.
Ian should catch Lena at the mansion cheating on him, maybe even gangbang 😁
So far i had the feeling (maybe i did it wrong) that i we couldnt follow a consesual Cheating path. When i chose lena to denie ian but have interest in the Black guy it couldnt develop into a cuckoding relationship. I also didnt habe enough points to choose that he is aroused by her doing the spicy social media posts... se yeah .. on tje parkbench i was not able to choose that they want to be a couple ... i would have loved to see an option where she says shed be open for a relation ship but with certain conditions (fucking bbcs whenever she wants ;D)
More Lena & Holly, particularly with the option of Lena being dominant. And Ian taking Allison’s submission further. And seems like Agnes is positioned to join Seymour in controlling/corrupting and using Lena.
I just hope for any Lena scene that corrupts her more, deprives her of human feelings aside of pleasure and lust, making her delve into bodily transformation towards absolute and ever-growing sluttification. Bigger chest, full lips, heavy makeup and nails, tattoos and piercings, thoughts only of pleasure and being used, smoke and drugs, dirt and depravity...
Lena and Perry, Lena and Ed, Lena and Wade, Bisexual content for Ian
There needs to be a Lena&Holly scene at the lake if Ian is not romanced. As it is he just leaves giving them privacy but we don’t see it as Lena.
More threesomes of FFM would be really great, they are pretty few compared to FMM
The scenes with Ivy are literally hot! I hope to see even more scenes with the queen!
Wade × lena has potential they had good chemistry with their interactions in beach trip it will be perfect revenge on cindy and axel too
Is because its a game you are putting your heart into it, thats why the world, the characters feels alive in the game. Edit: I forgot to mention that i really like the title theme
For me, what hooked me was the dynamic with Lana, Symore, Alex, and Agnes in the first photoshoot with Symore and Lana. It's why its still my favorite path.
I know they're the most work to do, but I'm most eager to see more threesomes. Even foursomes. I'm presuming the Holly Trinity with Lena is back on in the next part of the chapter. Seriously jonesing for more of that. I'm aeager to see Lena and Ian as a faithful but open-minded couple experiment with more combinations with outside people. I'm assuming that's at least partly why Nat is on scene. Also, I'm asssuming threesome with Ivy is coming. Threesome with Ian, Ivy and Holly on her slutty path too? Hope so. Holly's roomates with Ivy now, right? That feels like a bit of a setup. I'm also stoked about Lena's total slut path, where she shuffles sexual partners in all kinds of combinations. I picture a climactic scene featuring Lena and all the dudes in her life at once. Along the way, more MMF action? Please and thank you. I'm hoping there's a path where Lena (along with Ivy and maybe Holly) becomes a full-on sex entertainer -- straight-up pornos, live sex shows. Bring it on.
Hi, Eva! I hope so, Lena, Holly, Emma, Cindy, Ivy - Pregnancy Paths to Ian! Ian will be a good father! I'm so excited for more new scenes in future: Ian x Lena x Cindy, Ian x Lena x Ivy + Wedding Endings (Ian x Lena, Ian x Lena x Holly, Ian x Lena x Emma, also Ian x Lena x Cindy, Ian x Lena x Ivy! Take your time! Hugs!
In my opinion, i wouldnt mind to see a Lena/Cindy path. i think it could be an interessting pair. ^^
I want to see more Lena x Stan and Lena x Perry. Also Lena x Ed and perhaps Lena x Erics Dad
Lena x Stan +1
Yes, it'd be great if you could revisit scenes in the future to polish them and extend them. Some encounters are very brief. I'd say the Emma threesome in Ch15 should be extended, it felt a little rushed and we were waiting for it so long to happen, tho I totally understand why you did it that way. Scenes that need to be extended and polished are the ones involving Ian, Mike, Mark, Robert. Some of their scenes are just a copy paste, so it'd be nice if during the revamp you can make these scenes fit each characters personality and add different positions too. Adding scenes involving Ian with Zarina, Sonia and Nat would be nice too! Also more scenes with Ian and Ivy. Like they could have a scene before and after the tournament second round! The Alison scene before the tournament feeled very rushed indeed! Not sure if you could add more costumization for Ian in the future, such as tattoos, a piercing, etc. Also Ian shouldn't be wearing swimwear at the office, he has that black shirt which would look more appropriate, and maybe you can give him more shirts with different colors, even if it's the same design (I like that shirt actually). Hopefully in the future you can give Mike a cool DJ Jacket and some headphones around his neck, just to make him look like he's more like a DJ. I didn't like his Mansion outfit, I don't think it fits his personality; at the tournament he looked nice tho! Mark, Jeremy and Robert could have 1 extra outfit too; one that reflects their personality and style. As for Ch 15.3 Lena's POV, I'm hoping it's gonna start with a Mike x Lena shower scene at the mansion, and then there's a time jump that takes us maybe after the Tournament second round or so.
An Ian/Lena x Wade/Cindy swinging scene. Edit: Thought of another scene I’d like, a Stan/Holly scene. I’ve even thought of conditions for how it could be triggered. My idea is: Normal Holly will always accept Stan (if she’s single). Slut Holly, if she isn’t Ivy’s student, will accept Stan if he has been convinced to work on himself. But if Slut Holly IS Ivy’s student, she’ll reject him whether he’s working on himself or not.
Id love a proper dedicated start to Lena becoming a BBC addict starting with marcus and his friends slowly corrupting and making her fall for black guys only
I hope to see more scenes of Ian and Louise But what I want most is to see Louise specifically Whenever you are able to add new scenes to it, I will be grateful🙏🏻🤍
I'm hoping that Ian, discovering Louise's submissive streak, orders her into threesomes with other men and/or women full of hot sexual humiliation.
When does the Steam update come out? It's been a while now.
I can’t wait for the next update and to play as my beloved Lena again! After her “I wish I could stay in this limbo forever” line while cuddling in bed with Ian after sex in Chapter 14’s faithful route, I’d love to experience that closeness from her POV again. Faithful Ian–Lena is my favorite route, and I’m hoping for more of Lena enjoying Ian’s dominant side, their love and tenderness afterward, and the two of them taking new steps together in their relationship and lives. Wishing you all the best with your work. Love you, Eva! <3
The intentional or unintentional pregnancy of the female characters and the resulting consequences. For example: To Minvera > Either she leaves her family because she is made to understand that neither her husband nor her son deserve her. Or they slip it to Minvera's (still) husband as a cuckoo egg and decide later whether Minvera will separate or continue her secret affair. Cherry > Their submissiveness and desire for dominance during sex can now optionally extend to their entire life. So that she becomes completely dependent and submissive and does everything she is commanded to do. Including forgiving Lena and later even having a threesome with her. Lena-Cherry-Ian or even Axel. Which is also reflected in her increasingly sexual art. Which then becomes very successful and could make her famous. Emma > Due to the political and environmental situation and her political activities, Emma never really wanted children. But now that she is pregnant, she doesn't care about anything else. She is ready to do anything for the sake of her child and, at times, on the command of the MC, to completely change her political views. She not only becomes sloppier, but she can also turn into a cold-blooded capitalist. Who later even wants to have more children.
How much of the game would you say is complete and when do you see it being finished?
Since next chapter is from Lena POV, maybe Her and Emma Participating in sugar daddy orgy and or Emma/Lena/Axel threesome. Would be exciting to see Holly’s/Lena’s decent/ascent into 🌽industry.
Anything with Cindy.
In my current path, I did not have that much scenes to play. I liked Ians dream about his ex and his friends. I eould have love to see some more action in it. Maybe not intercourse, but some touching, groping, a hand on her butt or her just getting on her knees. By the way, I really liked the surprise of the dream. It felt a little surreal (in a good way) but as it was not teasered, I still had my doubts if this was a dream sequence in the beginning. Just an idea: Maybe put her in closed first and let her say something first and then, like a bad dream that evolves in a bad direction and you cannot stop: She touches and/or gets touched unphased and in a third picture, she is naked neeling down or so. Then I would have been even more unsure if it was a dream or not and the tension would have build up even more. But on an cost/gain aspect, I am glad you included it, it had an impact even though it was rather short.
I think there is one scene for Lena that could really use an overall re-work: The scene where her and Holly become a couple in Ch. 13. This scene suffered because Lena didn't get a full pov portion in Ch. 12 on the beach of course, back when Ian left them. Ideally they should have had their big romantic moment there. It would be nice if there could be some way to go back and pov shift there, like with Ian in the McMansion, or perhaps just have a flashback? The other problem with the Ch. 13 scene is the location, not just that it's taken away from the pretty and romantic scenery of the beach in of itself, but also because it's yet another Lena/Holly scene in Lena's room. Every single scene with Lena and Holly alone take place in her bedroom and it becomes boring after a while. I hope you will consider new ways to take the Lena/Holly pairing interesting places, especially now that Lena and Slut Holly seems to end their sexual relationship, everything between them hinges on the romance having interesting content now. It would be nice if you could include some differences between regular and changed Holly for Lena to make some fun alternatives for their relationship. Perhaps normal Holly could be easier for Lena to pull along for her own kinks and she needs to be suggested sexual situations, and changed Holly can be more assertive and perhaps have her own ideas and be more daring. Perhaps changed Holly in a relationship with Lena alone could get that female symbol tattoo that Lena could ask Ivy for (but didn't get) at the McMansion? ;) It would be nice to at leasty try out some kinks and perhaps changed Holly would be open to letting a third partner partake once or twice too? And now that Lena can have her own slut variable, while being in a relationship with Holly, it would be really fun to see how much that version of Lena could get her cute little girlfriend to agree to go along with ;)
Lena dominating Holly makes sense…
I'm still hoping for a Lena x Cindy path, maybe some day...
Let us pray brother :')
I don't know how many Baby Daddy option are you gonna give us ,could you atleast make it that is the player choice who is the father , I mean getting pregnant by the first guy means we need to skip Cg,that would be not great
Basically all the lesbian content could be expanded.
Cindy falling into Ivey's all-girl harem (after getting torched by Axel) is lining up nicely. Ivey taking dominant role over Louise after being shunned by both MCs, would be an ideal plot twist.
It’s never easy to do justice to every player given the huge variety in the game. As a long-time player, I have the utmost respect for this – because, of course, everyone has their favourites, but ultimately tastes differ and it’s fun to explore everything. To answer your question: yes, the Ian/Lena/Emma scene would have been exciting with more images and choices. That’s a big part of the appeal of replaying the game. Specifically, a wider selection of scenes for Ian/Cindy, Ian/Gillian and Ian/Ivy would be particularly appealing. ⚜️
That is so well put - I second that :)
A Holly Trinity with Ivy depending on Holly's and Lena's relationship with her
Holly/Lena/Ivy/Ian foursome. Why skimp?
I would like to see the interactions between Lena and Emma flushed out more, sexual or non sexual, especially if Ian is involved between them, juxtapose Lena being more traditional in her relationship structure and Emma more free, also if they have shared Jeremy between them
I’d love to see more development on the cuck Ian sub-path and some scenes with Jeremy x Lena or Jeremy with any of the other women.
The scene after the date with Lena before the tournament in chapter 15 feels pretty fleeting. Maybe not expanding it fully, but a bit more than just two images would be appreciated.
Holly, Lena, Cindy pregnancy paths
I like the way you think, my friend!
