Chapter 15.1 Status Report (7)
This week I’m continuing to work on both the script and the art. One of the main scenes is now completely finished, with all the illustrations completed, edited, and coded, as well as the music and sound cues fully integrated into the script. I’m now going through the scenes that have already been written one by one, finalizing the artwork and adding the necessary code. After that, the only thing left will be playtesting, which will be the final step.
At the same time, I’m still writing the last remaining scene of the first narrative block, which features Ian and Lena.
Writing this kind of scene, especially when the two protagonists interact, is probably some of the most complex work in the entire game, and it takes a considerable amount of time and mental effort. The hardest part isn’t just accounting for all the possible permutations of their relationship, deciding which past events need to be referenced, and figuring out what information should be presented and in what order. It’s also about weaving all those variables into dialogue that flows naturally and smoothly.
I have to make the conversation topics transition organically from one to the next without inconsistencies or abrupt jumps, which means paying close attention to exactly what is said and how each line connects to the next. I need to account for the variations in tone and content required by the path the interaction has taken so far, while at the same time making sure the player can still interact through menus and choices.
In the end, as always, I find myself thinking that I’m making things far more complicated than they need to be, and that many of these details probably won’t even be noticed. But I suppose that’s the hallmark of a job well done: the underlying architecture should go unnoticed, and it’s only when it’s poorly built that people become aware of it. In any case, I try to give every scene and conversation as much nuance and substance as I’m capable of.
My plans remain the same, and I still want to have the next update ready by the end of this month.
Comments (30)
Will those who purchased the game on Steam receive the update on the same day as the release, or will they have to wait a few days?
i have already play multiple playthroughs of every update and in Steam also i love your work don't worry take time i love ur writing you done my favorite character Cidney , Louise ,lena ,Holly , Alison. so much detail on writing on character its not easy
There should be a story between Arthur and Eva
It would be great to have more content featuring Allison, as well as the option to expand on the idea that either the MC is the alpha or Allison starts cuckolding the MC.
I look forward to seeing more of Alison.
the steam game updates seem to be behind the patreon updates. will downloading the patreon game version interfere with the steam one?
Hello, I purchased the game on Steam but I’m unable to launch it on my MacBook. It seems the game is only compatible with Windows. Could you please address this issue as soon as possible? Thank you.
So I purchased the game but haven’t been able to play it. Is there a version compatible with Mac?
Me gusta ver cómo todos animan el excelente trabajo que hacer pero yo solo vine a pedir una ruta para Ed jajajaja pero seguimos esperando más escenas con cherry
I personally like the effort you have put into the details of this game. Every playthrough becomes much more interesting and diverse based on my in game choices. Not the usual slop some other games provide. Even though I would like for the updates to come faster, I don't want you to rush the game. I simply enjoy what you have done, and am eagerly waiting for the next update. Take care and Keep it up!
I’ve tried a lot of different routes in this game, but once I realized that the corruption and cuck routes really weren’t for me, I just couldn’t continue with them. I can’t handle seeing Lena in a worse light. :) I think I’ve become a little attached to the pure version of Lena. Faithful Ian & Lena are honestly among my favorite couples ever. The love and care they have for each other, and the way they face heartbreaks and life’s struggles together, feels much more genuine and realistic to me. After exploring some of the other routes and then replaying the faithful route five or six times, I’ve come to appreciate just how detailed and carefully written this game is. That’s exactly why I consider it one of the best games in its genre. Our choices truly matter, and the characters and story feel incredibly detailed and believable. I hope you’ll continue developing the faithful route with the same depth, care, and quality you’ve shown so far. Thanks, EvaKiss ❤️
The Ian x Lena scenes are the best in the game, thanks for all the hard work you put in them!
You truly are amazing at what you do Eva, I honestly wish and aspire to be able to craft something even half as good as your game Good Girl Gone Bad and Our Red String. Really amazed at how you are able to pull in so many angles of a story and draw the attention of each individual character which gets us so invested in each of them. I really hope you never stop making these types of games as I feel so many other creators can learn so much from you work and we all truly enjoy playing your games and actually not skipping the dialogue and enjoying the story.
Eva you are building a masterpiece of erotic games! My wish would be that in the future there were more situations regarding cheating, cuck, homewrecking. In any case you are working really well!
I definitely notice when games just ignore the path you're on and have cookie cutter scenes that are always the same. Thank you for the extra effort!
As an audio engineer, I can certainly empathize with the sentiment of good work going unnoticed. As far as I'm concerned, your games are by far the most intricate AVNs out there, and as a fellow unsung hero, I appreciate you. 🖤 🙂
Part of this game's charm is that complexity you mentioned; I don'r know how you do it but you always keep track of every single detail and combination even with all the branching going on; it's admirable to say the least. This complexity makes your game stand out amongst so many other games in the genre and it makes people want to play your game over and over again trying multiple combinations! GOAT! Keep up the good work, Eva!
Damn. Looks like it is going super fast. Can you tease some Emma, Louise, or Cherry scenes
Can you disclose whether you have any plans to incorporate cosmetic enhancement/surgery options like those seen in Good Girl Gone Bad? I seem to recall talk that it would be late-game if included, but I don't remember if it was ever clearly confirmed or ruled out. I would love to see more of this in your games - I can see potential for Lena to head that way depending on the influence of certain modelling options
Since discovering AVNs, I have found some amazing stories, but by far my favorite is your work. The story is great, for sure, but even more impactfully is the dedication and the handmade aspect. In my life I have a lot of jobs and passions, but if I could do what you do, I'd do it in a heartbeat. You're an inspiration.
I agree with Dorian there, I play multiples paths and variations and I enjoy a lot all the subtilities you put in there. GREAT job !!
You’re doing an amazing job Eva and I appreciate the time and effort you put into your craft especially with the rise of people and devs using AI driven shortcuts. Thank you for inviting us into your process and development🙏🏽
Good work, the details can be seen and felt, high level game for this too 👍
Thanks for the update man and great job with the game so far. I am looking forward to it.
Thank you for the progress update. Please remember to take care of yourself. 🤗
For those of us who do multiple playthroughs of every update the attention to detail is definitely appreciated. Even the people who just do one playthrough get a much better experience for it, even if they don't realise it.
That said, I'll completely understand if your next game is much shorter or only has one protagonist! Although I think both the length and complexity of ORS is one of the main things that helps it stand head and shoulders above most other games in the genre
The anticipation is growing! ⚜️
Love your game, Look forward to more Allison content!
Same here with Alison. Looking forward to your AVN as well.