Chapter 14.1 Status Report (2)
Hey everyone,
This week I finally got settled into my new place, though I’m still without internet at home (or furniture, dishes, or a washing machine), so I’ve been wandering from cafés to restaurants, begging for Wi-Fi just to get some work done. I haven’t been able to move forward with any new artwork, but I have been doing a lot of writing, which was long overdue.
I’d been feeling a bit stuck lately,between the move and the endless narrative possibilities of the new chapter, but the change of scenery seems to have helped recharge my creative energy.
One of the biggest challenges was figuring out how to structure the chapter: what scenes to include and how to arrange them. It had me pretty paralyzed for a while, so I’ve decided to just start writing and let the script develop more organically as I go. So far, I’ve got the prologue and the opening scenes written, and I’ve also prepared new sprites, both for new outfits and brand-new NPCs.
This week I’ll keep writing while I slowly furnish the apartment and (hopefully) get the internet situation sorted out. In the meantime, I’d love to hear from you:
What kinds of scenes or content are you hoping to see in the next chapter?
What would you like to explore? Let me know, your suggestions might spark some new ideas or reinforce the ones I already have.
Looking forward to reading your thoughts!
Comments (91)
I'm curious what influence Agnes could have further down the game... I really liked how she was presented: only a side character with a few scenes but with a very strong and erotic influence. Also: maybe some more intrigue and other persons trying to seduce Ian/Lena even (or escpecially) if they already are in a relationship and see how they respond...
If possible, I'd like to see cuckoo pregnancy(minerva's husband doesn't know real father) between minerva and Ian.
Would love to see Alison having an unplanned pregnancy with Ian
That could be cool. I like Alison's scenes. Heck, on some Ian/Alison love routes, it might be a planned pregnancy.
I'd love to see continual development of the relationships between Axel, Lena, and Ian. I think the potential drama and conflict there is great and close to the heart of the story. Ian dealing with trauma over a similar situation with his ex, Lena trying to grow past her past self, Axel as the toxic core. Also has 3 potential states I think in the current release with broken relationship, open relationship, and secret cheating which is always cool to see develop.
Would love to see the conclusion of Holly's transformation with a foursome of Ivy,Lena and Ian.
Stan and Ed!
Another pairing request if you're still looking at comments Eva, though not necessarily for this chapter. I think some version of Lena/Gillian would be kinda sweet. Doesn't really matter if it's casual or romantic or whatever in connotation, or how you'd make such an encounter come about. As someone who has very little interest in exes, and therefore won't really give her a chance with Ian, it would be great fun to have her pair up in some form with Lena.
I would love some more smoking content down the road. I thought it was a mssied oportunity to have Lena smoke at her parent's home and not have them react to her smoking again.
Woooo, hope you settle nicely into your new place! I’m a huge Seymour fan so hoping to at least give him a little message or a tease while she’s away. Also looking forward to some more Jeremy scenes, maybe even some more heart options for him? 🫣 Seeing him actually fall for a girl (Lena?) and be committed would be super satisfying considering how he is 😂
Agreed!
I just finished my first play and this game is the best I've played. Wondered if there are any plans for like sexual exploring for Ian, maybe like more ass stuff for him, I really liked the the rimming scene with Lena, so things like that, maybe even pegging, or even like bisexual stuff in MMF threesome, just some exploring for him as well, when it's for Lena.
I would like more group scenes, like those with Ian, Emma, and Jeremy. Ian, Lena, Jeremy. Ian. Cindy and Alex. Ian, Jeremy, Alex and Lena. Ian, Holly, Emma and Lena. Maybe another club scene.
Maybe we can see a storyline between Lena and Ed there could be good potential, also get more out of Ian and Minerva; I like how their relationship progresses.
Always nice seeing more of Minerva.
I'm partial to the gym/writing content tbh, I like seeing Ian work on his writing skills and training with people and fighting people. It would be funny to see more interactions and conflicts that could be resolved with Ian just choosing to knock someone out cold and all the funny ramifications of that. In a general sense, I would like to see more characters without their "masks" on - scenes that allow characters to show their hidden depths. For example, we see people like Ivy and Jeremy, the confident front they put on, but there's a real side to them we haven't truly seen. I always feel like Ivy is wearing a mask with her "slutty free spirit" bravado, and Jeremy tries to project this "BBC alpha male" vibe but there's evidence that it's a front for who he really is - a horny geek like Ian and Wade. Some more Ian/Ivy content would be cool as well. As far as sexual scenes, just more sharing content. More threesomes and group sex please! I like the idea of seeing a confident Ian encouraging Lena to be slutty for Stalkfap and sleep with other people & Lena encouraging Holly to be more slutty with her. The scenes where Lena asks Ian what he's into - or asks his approval to do things, those kinds of scenes are really appealing to me. Personally, the worst thing for me as a player is not seeing characters communicate with each other enough; not being able to give Lena or Ian a choice to discuss their boundaries and problems.
Ch. 13 has content omitted if Lena and Ian brake up, even thoughthings are happening to both, they are left off screen. I'd like to see more Cherry romance.
i like lena and jeremy line
Same here.
I just loved the shower scene in the gym with Holly, Ivy and Lena, so something similar is perfect. And i would like to see some nipple piercings. Some exhibitionist stuff with Holly or another girl would be perfect!
Would love nipple piercings option.
Definitely into slut Holly storyline, hopefully we see more and her going deeper... like a MMF scene at some point.
I wish we could explore her slutty side more in the romances too, both the Lena and Ian one. Would be fun to expand those interactions and with other characters.
Looking forward to finally see Lena with two or more guys, really hope to see more interactions with the stalkfap fans, if ed or perry could get a chance with lena with this would be hot, really looking forward for the content in this episode 🔥
would love to help,as my best wish.
Really looking forward to see more of Arthur. I'd love a path where Lena corruption is accelerated and guided by him. I'd also think a pregnancy scare with Lena would be exciting!
I’d love to see more Minerva and Ian content especially given the recent scene with her and Ian where you can call her ‘Mommy’ would love to see more that and especially if we had a scene at Minervas house and then her husband comes home or something like that. Definitely feet stuff as well imo. Ian and Ivy would be interesting to see how that pans out. Whether it’s Ivy doms Ian or just really kinky sex. Love to see Ian really corrupt Louise like how Lena does and really make Louise his slut. Also why not put some hair on these girls or maybe have an option to toggle for shaved or full.
I enjoy Minerva’s and Louise’s scenes.
More Lena x Stan, Lena x Marcel and Lena x John. And if possible Lena x Ed and Lena x Perry
Would love to see Lena × Marcel or Ian × Ivy scenes. Both would be nice to see
Definitely!
I found the type of content of Alison Jeremy that shared with Ian really hot and would like to see more of it. Hopefully also with Lena. Also Lena convincing Ian on the cuck/open paths to have some fun with Jeremy/Billy or even both :)
Like many others, a MMF scene with Lena would be my top. I suspect Billy and Jermey would be the most obvious, but I’m personally not all that interested in Lena/Jeremy. So maybe Billy + Mark or maybe even Billy + Jack? Would be cool to include Holly and/or Ivy as well. I’d also like to see some continuation with Marcel as well, love him with Lena. On top of that, more pairings of Lena with some older men. Seymour, Ed, and hopefully Arthur. More lesbian scenes as well. Lena/Holly is definitely the one that surprises me the most that I really enjoy. But others with Ivy and Emma as well
Marcel and Lena were hot together.
I'd like to see my guys Perry and Wade get some action from Lena in the Ian cuck route. Especially since Perry can work at her job. Speaking of which, Lena/Ed would be cool too. She's flirted with every one of them and it would be awesome to have her let lose with them. Another thing would be for the MMF scene, have Ian record Lena with Jeremy, Perry, Wade, or Robert but get no action! I swear I don't hate Ian, I just think that's the funniest route lol
i'd like some more content on the voyeur/Allison path :) i liked the eroticism of Jeremy sending vids of how he was corrupting her to a cuck-adjacent Ian, but it's been ages since we've had any of those scenes. Also, maybe more scenes with Ivy and corrupted Holly - possibly involving another male character like Jeremy? With Lena, I'd love to see some more developments with the Seymour subplot after it took such a big step forward in chapter 13. on an unrelated note, glad the move went well and mostly painlessly, lack of internet notwithstanding lol
I hope Alison will show up at the photoshoot.
For me one of the hottest scenes in chapter 13 was Emma and Ian in the bathroom. I certainly would like to see more Emma scenes where Ian can push and coah her into increasing her corrupytion/kinkyness. In my lates gameplay Ian also plays around with Luoise. She becomes a substitute to Lena who broke things off during the visit at the summer house. I would like to keep using Louise a little longer. Also I am curious about Nathalie (Ian's new co-worker), and hope to get more opportunities to flirt and engage with her. As others have mentioned more Alison and Cindy scenes are alsways welcome. I like to push Cindy's limits in more an more hardcore photoshots, maybe leaening towards a possible video. As for Lena I am interested in how she will juggle all her possible love interest. But mostly I am pushing her to be more adventurous in her social media. Taking more private requests, maybe shooting a cam session with Ivy (and possibly Holly now that she's getting more corrupt). Unfortunately the Seymor paths are not doing it for me, but it did spark an interest when Arthur from GGGB showed up. Holly's journey opening up to more lewd adventures are making her more interesting.
I'm a big fan of Louise and Emma.
Would love to see Ivy and/or Lena lead Holly down a BBC route more fully and crank up the corruption angle even more. Perhaps a scene where Lena convinces Holly into a threesome with Jeremy.
Well on the slut Holly route I don't feel like she needs a lot of convincing xD Would be fun if Lena could include her if in a relationship with her and with a BBC kink like Ash could with Eva in GGGB. Worshipping cock together, how romantic! And on that route Holly would need convincing.. xD
I think it would be interesting to see Lena and Jeremy actually start developing feelings for each other. Have Jeremy change his character and become less arrogant as he starts falling for Lena. Maybe a potential relationship option.
I'm looking forward to the highly anticipated MMF scene with Lena! Billy's party is the perfect setup for it to happen! What about a MMFF scene with Lena and Ivy? That would be super hot! I'm also curious to see the new outfits and meet the new characters. Maybe Lena, Ivy and Jeremy could have some fun with them? 👀 Last but not least, I'd love to see more Stalkfap content: Lena doing spicy photoshoots and livestreams, roleplaying/cosplaying, interacting with her fans, playing with her dildos or other toys and having sex on camera! I'm sure she knows a couple of people who would be up for it! 😈
Hi there, I hope the rest of your amenities arrive soon. I believe this would be a great update for Alison. She has shown interest in being filmed and photographed and could be invited to the photoshoot. She expresses continued dissatisfaction with her job and might want to explore other work options. Alison can have had previous sexual liaisons with Jeremy and Billy. It could make for very hot scenes at the house and for sexting with Ian later. Moreover, I see Alison’s attending the photoshoot working with an Alison who is not involved with Ian, an Alison who is friends with benefits with Ian, and an Alison who is in a relationship with an Ian supportive of her bimbo interests. I also would be happy to see Marcel again after his very hot scene with Lena. Mark could be cool to see as well. In GGGB, he said he did some work as a model. Best of luck!
I hope you are getting settled as soon as possible and that you are well. If you where i Stockholm I would offer you my apartment and internet to use until you get internet in your home.
For this Lena update, as others have mentioned, more Jeremy and Axel. Maybe we get some Jack sexting or he makes an appearance? I know you are avoid some of the wilder GGGB scenes but I think it makes sense to for this update to culminate in some mmf action. Jeremy and a friend perhaps? I doubt Axel shares with others.
Jeremy and Billy can already get into a MMF with Alison so I think it's pretty likely we could see MMF with Lena or Ivy or even MMFF foursome. I hope to get content with these new NPC's myself. I don't mind BBC content but I'm not very fond of Jeremy personally.
I've got a fever!! And, the only prescription is more Ed and Lena. Gotta have more Ed and Lena baby!!
100% Cindy scene, also Cindy teasing with another man, like it was with Axel's Polaroids in the last chapter. Maybe something happened to her on the yacht, and we will see it in her phone by accident or on purpose:)).Or, if it's Lena's update, what if Lena sees Cindy blowing Axel picture(in his phone or one of the polaroids). Also, maybe I've already talked about this a long time ago, I think ORS needs more scenes of hard sex, spitting, rimjob (I'm glad that it appeared in the latest updates), slaps, and maybe even, someday, perhaps closer to the end, some pissplay, I understand that this is a very specific fetish for such a game, but I missed it in Arthur's storyline in GGGB(there was even BDSM with collars but no golden shower). Good luck with the update Eva, I am sure it's gonna be another great one!
"I can take about an hour on the Tower of Power as long as I get a little Golden Shower!" *singing* But jokes aside: I am not opposed to the idea, but I can not see it fit into the aesthetics of ORS.
Gangbang, dp, airtight
Well im sticking with the Lena/Holly/Ivy or the Lena/Cindy faction then ;)
Lena/Cindy is my most wanted pairing.
It will be nice to put some spice: Ed and drunk Lena; Boris and Denna scenes (voyeur); Agnes with someone. Ian - Minerva; Ian - Emma content Lena - Stan
Ivy with one of the guys since chapter 1. Hoping for her and Ian at the gym or shower. Implementing the recording aspect to it so Ian can stick it to Jeremy finally would be funny too. Lena / Marcel / Jeremy at the event. Or Lena going all the way with Marcel. The Lena threesome with two guys in general has been teased for a while.
More group sex! More Minerva story please. Some BDSM. Femdom with Lena and Stan. Would love to see Robert to emerge as a love interest Lena; outside of Ian it's slimpickings for her in terms of love from a male.
Minerva’s great!
I'm hoping to see more group action, whatever the romantic cominations -- foursomes, fivesomes, whatever the market will bear. I'm hoping to see more polyamory paths. The Holly Trinity is really sweet, as well as sexy, and I hope that the thrupple has a chance to develop. But with all the side action -- Louise, Holly, Ivy, it looks like there will be future entanglements. I pray that some of the pathways resulting from this will lead to good faith negotiations, not just breakup drama. And just because I don't think she gets enough love -- more Cherry, please. I find myself replaying her scenes a lot.
I'm also hoping -- and thinking of this upcoming chapter specifically -- to see Lena and Ivy transition to full-on porn careers.
Emma being a proper GF or part of a trinity
That would be great.
I posted this on the last Chapter 13 Status Report, but I'll post it again here for posterity, I think a scene for the Trinity path where Lena's on the phone with Holly while she (Holly) is getting railed by Ian would be pretty hot
For this update: For a more Lena she should be more open to either plastic surgery if she is modeling focused like Ivy, and more tattoos and piercings if she is a musician focused like Lousie, or both if she's just having fun. Also, if she is in a relationship, she should still have the option, but more tamed if she's loyal or more submissive (like she will still model, but she has limits, or she will get the surgery, but wants to check with her partner) For future Ian focused updates: More Ian 3somes and more asshole Ian please where he turns into a gaslighter ( he's emotionally abusive like barely hiding his cheating) and/or into just a dude that corrupts his love interests into being ok with him cheating or opening the relationship on his side. Oh, and Ian x Ivy and Ian/Lena x Ivy please, I need it haha. Most important, take your time, your writing has taken u this far, trust yourself, we will all be waiting when u are ready. MUCH LOVE!!!
You're really setting a high bar for other creators, Eva. You can make me hate a "perfect" girl like Lena, when I play a path where Seymour is her guy (or a little less hate if it's Robert, Mike or a couple of others), or when she is denying/cucking Ian. That shows what a storyteller you are. I wish you huge success in the field. I would like to see Lena+Stan continue to develope, or maybe Holly+Stan. Better yet, in my mind, after Stan is somewhat more experienced, maybe he moves on from Lena the somewhat unattainable, to Holly the girl who has much more in common with him. More of Ian+Cherry. Nothing new or revolutionary, as you have got plenty of story arcs going on. Some I grit my teeth to, as I go along that path. But that's so much like real life, as you undergo it, or watch friends or relatives undergo it. So kudos to you again for the way you mirror some of life, in your own prism-like mirror.
We can appreciate the challenge of writing these complicated storylines. Personally, Lena/Jeremy is a favorite pairing so this next chapter should be fun! I'd like to see warmer intimacy or even romantic options during their upcoming scenes.
That would be nice to see.
I'd like some clarity on Ivy actually. Whether she's actually Lena's friend or a snake in the grass. (May change depending on prior choices, I guess?) More Holly content on The Lena path, the corrupted path, the Ian path, and the Trinity path. But imagine that's fairly popular, and will happen. I also want to agree with those who said they don't want it to be like the Tyrone pool party, or at least have options to avoid that particular type of thing. Give Lena a chance to opt out or do something less than what is being asked of her. I'm very skeptical of the whole thing myself, and my Lena (on my main branch) is also skeptical.
I am fine with whatever you have planned for those whose 'choice' was to go to the Billy Photoshoot ... but I would like to speak for those who made the 'choice' in a previous chapter not to get involved with him. As such I would like to ensure there is no 'shoehorned content' to make Lena partake in the photoshoot without a definite choice from the ORS player. To be honest I would have preferred it if you had allowed a vanilla choice for Lena to remain in Baluart and forgo Ivy's invitation altogether.
Yeah, me too!
Lena and Cindy! 😍
Legendary 😈
Keep up the good work dev, looking forward to seeing some FFF, Mff and moresomes, there's loads of potential there
I'm very curious about Lena's trip with Ivy, I'm kind of hoping for an orgy scenario where Lean could participate. Otherwise, very eager to watch Ian go the cuckold route, and see how that affects the dynamic with Holly.
I’d love a scene where Ivy and Lena become true lovers or step towards girlfriends, with Ivy being the dom in the relationship, I’d love her to take control of Lena, use a strap on and take the lead. As for the others, Seymour isn’t in this chapter right? And Ian and Cindy are back home. So yeah just Ivy and Lena, can we have Lena in a fur coat? Furs are literally my favourite clothing, I think women in sable or mink just look incredible, although I imagine that would be a gift from Seymour, so maybe a later chapter.
Some more stuff with Jeremy and Marcel. Even a threesome with those two. Maybe some ways that Lena can take her love for BBC public like some QoS merch or tattoos.
That would be hot.
Something related to Emma meeting with Seymour would be fun
I think there are a couple of things you should consider at this stage in the game and for what a party with NPC's can facilitate. 1) Be careful not to make it too much like Tyrone's pool party in GGGB if that was where you were heading towards. Gangbangs are fine, BBC is fine, getting Lena and other woman involved is fine, but it should not be just those things. 2) Allow Lena to be flirtateous and confident, both with men and women and with showing her body. Lena has spent a lot of time with romantic interests, a bunch of men, getting used to the idea of being in love with Holly so at this point we should be allowed to show direct interest in women too I think, if we meet any new ones. 3) Remember moderating options. Having sex liberally with many characters is all well and good but remember that some players perhaps want something in the middle of being a good girl and a compelte slut. As for content I would like, I would love to see a number of things. 1) Moresomes, perhaps of varying compositions of them even. MMF, FFM, FFF, or better yet those with more than three partners. 2) Sexual encounters that are perhaps outside of bed. Would be hot to get fingered by a girl in a private moment perhaps, or fuck someone in the hot tub or corner of the pool if other people have left. The new place offers plenty of options. Even getting bent over a balchony would be hot. 3) Perhaps some exhibitionism content. I would love to have Lena engage in sexual content where others are onlookers too. Either characters we know or don't know. 4) Lesbian options, and not just Ivy. I already mentioned it, but I would just love some good sexual content and it would be hot with either or both options that are one night stands or someone Lena could meet again like whats implied with Eli. I would love for her to embrace a casual lesbian attitude. Lena can now have a slut backgorund with high lust and she can have a lesbian kink. It's time to make this girl horny for all the cuties she meets! :D 5) Social media. Use it. Let Lena post and have others along for the ride. 6) Sexting. Could be an option with some characters, for example open relationship Ian or Emma, slut Holly. EDIT: 7) I hope to not be too restricted by Lena's romance choices. I want her and Holly, or her and Ian for those who play that route, to be available for lewd directions and the consequences thereof too. 8) Just to add, though I was kinda arguing in this direction in my other wishes, but I hope generally we get to have sexual encounters with new people, maybe even multiple new people, maybe even at once as well. Billy is a new option too of course, but I'm kinda over Jeremy and Ivy personally, so I hope not all the sexual content comes down to doing stuff with those two. May update with more ideas ;) Good luck.
This, this, this!
I’d really like for an opportunity for Ian to reconnect with Gillian more. And either become her cuck or reconcile and have a normal vanilla relationship with her.
Nice idea - I could easily imagine the Ian/Gillian story with just the Chad Ian who completely dominates Gillian or the Cuck Ian who is exploited by Gillian.
More Lena and Ivy!
Threesome with Jeremy and Ian. I don't really care about the girl they do it with. Let them tag team someone.
It’s sounds like they’ll be able to have another threesome with Alison, which I’m excited to see.
You have everything that's needed to succeed!
I hope those NPCs are a bunch of BBCs, priming our girls for a whole lot of DVPs & DAPs
Sounds like fun. I hope Marcel shows up.
Lena & Emma stuff would be cool and maybe Lena with Big Ed or my boy Perry. Ian & Ivy stuff and maybe throw in Jessica for both? I’ve enjoyed the entire game so really I trust whatever you go with.
Guess it’s high time for some big Ivy fun ! Super thrilled by the new outfits and NPCs announcement!
Something that starts with B, has B in the middle, and ends with C. Or an orgy would be nice.
Maybe Lena meeting with one of her stalkfap supporters. That or some fun with Ivy.
