Chapter 13.3 status report (3)
This week, my focus has been spread across multiple areas: I’ve kept working on the chapter script, but I’ve mainly focused on smaller scenes and interactions, like texting sequences and internal monologues that add depth to the narrative. As usual, even the simplest scenes come with their own level of complexity, and here’s a perfect example:
I’ve also decided to add an extra spicy scene to the ones I had originally planned, and if things go well, I might even add another.
On top of that, I’ve been outlining the next chapter, brainstorming ideas, and prepping some illustrations to delegate while I focus on other areas. I’ll keep at it this week while continuing to write. I’d say the script is about 50% complete at this point.
Oh, and I’ve given Emma a fresh new look! Want a sneak peek? Let me know in the comments!
Comments (34)
Depending on influences from Lena and Ian—their choices made during music, shopping, club, beach, etc. scenes—I could see Emma adopting a more sexy style or a more rebellious/punk style.
Hell yea! Emma is awesome
Love Emma!! Can’t wait to see the new look!
More Emma? Yes please!
Mas Emma por favor, es lo que mas queremos!!!!
Show Emme's new look please.
I think its time for Ian's ex to return and be available, since Lena and Alex route is so deep already. We also have a shortage of redheads!
As someone who's been pulling for more Ivy content with the guys for a while I can't believe it may be actually happening and just had to read all that 🙏🥵😂, I knew it was all pretty complex but did not have any idea it was THAT complex
I see Cherry’s name YES🙌🏽 love her sm
Fantastic. Love me some Cherry.
It's good to heat you're making progress! Keep it up but keep an eye on your health aswell. Sneak-Peak sounds great by the way.
Yeahhh ! more Emma pleaase :)
Emma is dope so yes
Would love to see an Emma sneak peak! Then again, I am a huge Emma fan! This game is a beast, I couldn’t imagine keeping all the variables straight! Kudos!
yes moar emma
One note for what's in the pic, in the line relating to Cherry near the bottom "they don't get exactly along" doesn't make a lot of sense. It should be "they don't exactly get along".
Anyone else remember buff Emma?
I think it would be nuce to make Ian hotter to, like with tattoos or a new haircut
I'd love to see our best girl's new look
Ahh I love looking through all the variations, it’s so interesting. Show us Emma!!
Your work will always remain impressive and appreciated! And I ALWAYS want to see more of our girl Emma!! 😍
Sounds exciting! Looking forward to the next update! Anything to do with Emma and her cake is welcome on my Patreon timeline 🔥
I hope your recovery will go smoothly. Yeah, I’d like to see Emma’s new look. I enjoyed her shopping with Lena. Speaking of texting scenes, I liked that blonde Alison now has her own texting icon. I hope we’ll see the necklets Ian can give Alison, Lena, Holly, Minerva, etc. incorporated into future outfits of theirs.
Hey Eva, of course we want a little taste. ⚜️
Yes would love to see more Emma
Absolutely I do :)
Omg yes please. Ill take any chance to get an extra look at that gorgeous beauty.
Im excited for the extra spicy scenes and Emma's new look.
Glad to hear things continue to go well. Yes, I know that I for one would like to see Emma's new look. Is this gated behind a particular path, or is this new look independent of Emma's storyline?
Keep up the good work dev, oh yes we need to see Emma's new look!. i'm glad Ian and Lena can have a relationship with Emma.
Hey Eva. Thanks for the update. Hope you are doing well now. Please prioritize your health equally. On the ither hand, would really appreciate Emma's new look's sneak peek. Also, if Jessica, Gillian, and ed's angle with lena can be explored more in the coming chapters
More Emma is better. Don't tease me to much :😜
Always need more emma!
You had me at "Emma"