OBCD Page 8
And so, it begins. Feedback appreciated!
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You should colourize all the feedism related scenes, I like that. (and/or one larger "cut-scene" or "centerfold" included with the more feedist-oriented panels that's colourized & has more 3d depth.) Gradually adding more depth/shading/colour & elements to the female characters &/or to the world in general as the story progresses & feedist action accelerates might work as well. The female characters in this style lack the "Cinnasticks rendered sexyfat look", (lolz) which really sexes up your style. I know they're not fattened up yet, but the characters are still kind of bland in this style--it would be cool if the world came "more alive" as the weightgain action continues--vis-a-vis the "toon world" becomes real trope, only in this one it's "generic punk-zine girls blossom into real world sexy bbws/ssbbws twisted-fairy-tale style" if that makes any sense, lolz- like you could gradually morph this world into your signature E-Claire-esque world style.
I can't guarantee that I'll transition from one style to the another in this, buuuuuut, I will be using color as a means of emphasizing important things, ideas, people etc. So, I will have color splash pages and things like that of important moments, as well as using the color splotches and things that you've seen already. The goal artistically of this project was to use the Toon/Anime style 3D for more of a manga look and feel. 1) I grew up reading manga and have always enjoyed it, and I've never been talented enough of a drawer to perform in that way. 2) it's much easier to pose and render out and doesn't take 30-60+ minutes to render out a single frame. Sure, I spend a little extra time on details like the dot-matrix half tone stuff, but for the most part it's a lot faster. I hope people can see the vision and enjoy the works for what it is, I'm not trying to shift 100% either direction, but it gets stagnate if I only do the fully realistic rendering etc.