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Wholesome… can’t wait until it gets steamy again :)

just stick to Klein and Asuna. and stop this about him not knowing. a good ntr the main character finds out, about the NTR. the toy puppy thing was good. give us a full shot. forget the build up. its there. let it happen.

bring back the banquet to do ntr with that man

Bro where is the old man

Need more of the hidden camera scene of the last chapter ngl but more spicy

You already got it successful with Klein and Asuna already, a lot of your viewers waited the most anticipated build up of their relationship, for months. So you don't have to push yourself too much regarding plot, your viewers read those already.. what we await is the scenes, the spicy ones, and you can integrate those scenes anywhere.

It is very nice to starting see some lovely couple moment between asuna and klein, she starting to be very comfortable with him, she also called herself his wife so she starting to open up with him not only physically but also mentally

Yea, at this point it’s hard. Before it was good because you showed that asuna likes kirito and the only reason Asuna and Klein happened was because Yui got her memories changed. And that’s how all the NTR happened, but now it’s not the same because now it clearly shows that asuna just can’t get enough of Klein game and her feelings for kirito is not even there making it not really a ntr anymore. At this point I agree with if she starts to be more open to showing off to strangers and such. Like she enjoys cheating.

在多来点上一篇的番外😀

Maybe something modeling dragon ball? Videl with sharpener Also unsure if this was another point of this chapter, it’s clear asuna is very comfortable initiating with Klein now. Off the ending scenes it would be nice somehow asuna went from straight ntr with one person, she starts to be more open to showing off to strangers and such. Give her a sense of “for everyone’s enjoyment” a good corruption