August 31, 2018

Predators of Denali - Page 21 HD

Page 21! Tala seems entranced by the Aurorae, and feels an effect coming over her, that apparently is enough to motivate a sudden departure and change of character. Bailey is confused~

I don't know why I struggled to like, and finish, this page. I think part of me worries I've interrupted or cut short the sexy parts for some story stuff that isn't explained yet, so perhaps feels odd or forced right now? I've sketched(very, very loosely) many pages in advance, so I'm fairly confident in the story's pacing and overall feel when read all at once, but it's also impossible to go -back- to previous pages and change too much if it -doesn't- seem to work. Maybe i'm over-thinking it. Or still learning about sequential storytelling in this form. Fingers crossed I guess!

Link to current HD/Web-size pages and previous pages, valid for 30 days:

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/j52vbqjb1bg0nov/AAAOxTzjEVBjrsPS1xntKBCra?dl=0