Predators of Denali - Page 8 sketch

Page 8's first-draft dialogue and sketchwork! 

This page mainly deals about Tala and Bailey meeting, and their contrasting attitudes, or at least the start of it. Page 9 will have a bit more of a focus/intro on Bailey/Bae'li. I know one thing I need to add in the first or second panels here is Tala with a "who are you?" statement; these characters have not met before and Tala just thinks she is a random slutty bear interfering with important stuff that's weighing on her. That's my goal anyway. I always prefer feedback early on! Enjoy!