Predators of Denali - Page 4 HD
Here's the latest from Alaska! Tala and the wolves, led by Kiga, sit down to discuss some things, which will likely be covered in pages 4-6 before we get down to business and set off. Thanks to you guys who commented on the dialogue and other stuff from before, I like how it flows now, I think, much better.
I'm trying to do the artwork more sensibly from here on out, particularly regarding the word balloons; both in style and placement. Previous pages had the word balloons in 75% opacity, which let some of the artwork show through, but I felt it also made things harder to read, and I definitely don't want that.
So that, coupled with panels and their artwork being placed in a more appropriate composition where the balloons aren't taking up as much space, and consolidating dialogue, this page has %100 opacity flat white balloons, and I'll go back and make tweaks to pages 2 and 3 as well, which will be apparent when I send out the ZIPs at the end.
