Progress Report July I

It's interesting to note that Feren's (and to a lesser extent Baraka's) philosophy deals primarily with the behavior of the ruler -- seeing that as the most important factor in the wellbeing of society. This makes sense given the socioeconomic conditions of Nareth (not to mention the literal magic artifacts granted to people of certain bloodlines), but I wonder if the MC with their knowledge of Earth history and philosophy might posit a more systemic view of society. Plus I want to see how Feren and Baraka would react to the heir of an absolute monarchy starting to spout ideas of democracy and the inherent equality of all people.

I see Baraka is a supporter of the principle of the "Rule of Law". In any case for the phisical trait i agree with the general consensum. So far what matter is the height, but i can see the musclar/athletics can be relevant in the squire path, in combination with the fighting style. However it's also true it will add some heavy work which may turn to be unecessary along the line. You can partially follow the approach of wftw MC, where what matter there is just the combat stat and sometimes equipment + the choice during the middle of the battle, even if there are still some hints about the MC (for example they aren't a giant neither are a Robert Baratheon in term of phisical strenght).

As many have said don’t worry too much about how long it takes between updates I think we all care a lot more about the quality when it arrives not how fast your able to give it to us. Excited to see what you come up with in the squire route. Also as many have said the physical trait stuff is a good addition flavour text is the best text makes your character feel personal to what you’ve created. Good luck in your progress and hope the journey to the states is a comfortable one!

I mean, MC is only 14. They're still a growing lad/lass. Hairstyle and stuff could stay. But maybe height and build could be later? They're a young teen, not a young adult.

I voted to keep the features, but like many I think you should keep them generic. At 14, nothing is set in stone, you'll have time to develop them in more detail later. I'm sure you've already made up your mind by now, but I wanted to take part anyway. As for the rest, come to France, we've got 🍪? 🤣 no seriously be careful, take your time writing, no pressure. ( I'm returning your own advice 🙂😉)

I think keeping the bare bones of physical traits works for now. You can try them out and implement the rest over time or at a critical point like the birthday or academy. Also having a body that's over/under weight work as a secret option if you choice that specific outcast back story. You could even have it as an early cohesion check, negative shows self loathing at not escaping your habits even in a new life. Positive they grumble about it being a cruel cosmic joke.

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Just take your time. I personally care more about the quality of writing, so I'm willing to wait as long as it takes if it means getting the best story possible.👍 As for the physical traits, I think that at 14 years old, it would be better to do basic stuff (like height) and add more descriptive features (such as muscle build) when MC is older. I did vote to keep the physical traits, but in regards to height, I prefer the GIANT, NORMAL, GREMLIN system you suggested. I really want to make my princess a shorty. Makes it easier for people to underestimate her and let their guards down.😇

How long is the squire route supposed to be?

Considering MC is only 14 at this point, I don't think it's too important to focus on the physical traits as so much can still change, and with the fact that MC is fit either way. Height can matter at 14- and ngl the idea of being short at 14 and then shoot up later is a hilarious thought, or MC being tall at 14 and never growing another inch and ending up short as an adult- but somehow make it simple for yourself. Just short or tall for a 14 year old and then you can go more in depth when MC becomes an adult. And then you can also (if you want!) have fun reactions of people responding to the change. The philosphy aspect is interesting and does feel like it matters in this kind of story. MC's that have a philosophy they like vs how they act, or MCs that strictly follow their philosophy. The two options too, I can already see how my MCs will go (I have 2 and one is gonna want the Open Palm, tho unsure how it will last in practice, and the other is ready to just Iron Fist their way through because somebody has to make and shoulder the choices). Thank you for the update! Hope you stay safe and well, and dry.

I agree with the others to a point like now we as mc are starting to get known so we need it now. But definitely if not now at 18. Plus at 14 these traits could lead to fucking interesting interactions if you write it right.

I voted to keep the physical traits, but I think that only the height is needed at this point. Muscular/lean seems fairly irrelevant most of the time. And we can get more details when MC is fully grown.

I feel like it’s kinda relevant in the route and maybe prince route just cause MCs going to be doing a lot of fighting so like you said people commenting on their build BUT definitely not a lot or often (since they have bigger fish to fry and MC is still a kid). Honestly KaE has been so amazing written both this version and the last I never really paid attention to any physical traits (never even crossed my mind) besides the hair and eyes since they play an important part and still even now didn’t think about it before this post. I think the physical traits are going to be more important when MCs older and actually start interacting with their peers and the ROs. I feel it’ll be important when you’re writing the interactions with the ROs more than anything especially the more intimate moments for example; height difference when kissing ROs and flings (will MC have to look up or will they be doing the tilting the chin move like a true fuckboy 😎, descriptions of MCs body when they’re putting that thang thang down on an RO or fling especially since they’ll most likely have scars you will have to describe about). So overall yes I think it’s something to think about and implement but I don’t think you should be stressing about it just yet Flame, at least not too much.