WIP. WaB. Astra's anal scene. Sketch

Кстати, мы тут обсуждаем сюжет, но можно ли дать коментарий непосредсвенно к илюстрации. У меня нет притензии к автору, так как это выбор голосования, но не кажется ли тебе, что это не самый удачный выбор позы (или по крайней мере ракурса) для секса с Астрой. Да лицо у неё, конечно ангельское, но не все достоинства Астры раскрыты в полной мере. То есть, на мой взгляд, поза должна подчеркивать характерные черты внешности персонажа. Или я не прав? Ну вот например, если глазомер меня не обманывает Астра невсокого роста. По крайне мере так кажется. Это можно было бы подчеркнуть. Ну или если обратить внимание на руки - У Алисы она прямые и худые, у Карлы полные, У Фины угловатые, а у Астры немного подкаченые и округлые. И тоже касаеться всего остольного: форма грудей, изгиб бедер и так далее. Ну я думаю тебе это всё и без какого-то меня известно, возможно я просто занудствую, и зря сужу по наброску. Просто пока кроме лица, ничего не выдаёт Астру. Вот сцена с Карлой довольно удачная на мой взгляд. Не знаю. Извиняюсь, если слишком докапываюсь.🤐

By the way, let's not forget about Eric's mother's jealousy.

I can only assume that Astra in this scene is consoling her ego by proving to Krowly that she's better than Fina. Well, she comforts her longing for Eric. This can happen for example after the scene Juliette and Fina. An excited Astra can visit Krowly in the morning. By the way, if we're talking about ego, Astra can take advantage of the fact that Krowly did not have full sex with Fina. I think that the Krowly first sex with Astra shouldn't happaen in tavern, as usual. But repited sex can begin (happen) in tavern, as usual.

Since there is already a flag in the game that Astra notices you having sex with Eric if he has cum on his face, maybe you could use that to tie in and have either Krowley or Astra bring up that if eric has gay sex he must like anal, and this then leads to krowley suggesting Astra get some "practice". of course several people would be upset that Astra's scene is locked behind fucking a dude, but its an idea XD

"Your mom does anal"

Продолжить сценку где Астра приходит с претензиями, что Кроули ей приснился?

Since Astra can't have love sex with Eric. She's having friendly sex with Krowly) But we hope Krowly will help these two connect in the future.

Я думаю, Астра очень хочет, что бы её трахал Эрик. Но так как Эрик не делает этого, Астра позволяет это делать более решительному Кроули, которому она доверяет. [Я не уверен, что корректно перевёл это на английский((( ] I think Astra really wants Eric to f*ck her. But since Eric doesn't, Astra lets the more determined Krowly, whom she trusts, do it. [I cannot correctly translate this into English((( ]

I could see a sort of mimikri spell or potion, where Eric asks Krowly to play his role because he wants to do something his mother or Astra shouldn't know about. Krowly transforms into Eric and plays his role when Astra snags him away and Krowly tries to talk to her but she doesn't listen / or he simply plays along cunning as we know him and midways in the action the potion/spell wears off and Astra could either let him finish (high affection) or threatens him with dead or worse if he ever talks about this to anyone else. It could be the beginning of something between them

I hope it has something to do with what Astra said to Krowly at his house at night. It's also possible she's keeping her pussy for Eric so she lets Krowly get in her ass only. It could also be due to Astra telling Krowly next to Fina's portrait.

I was thinking Krowley could convince her she needd to practice for Eric. "Imagine how disappointed Eric will be if you can't take his dick on yiur wedding night". So Astra agrees to anal to get her used to big dicks. But her pussy is Eric only.

Perhaps the scene can be available once Krowly reaches a VERY high affection level with Astra. For example, maybe after Krowly helps her out or goes dancing and the affection level reaches the required amount. At the end of the event she could think to herself "Hey, maybe Krowly isn't that bad of a guy after all." Not sure what would trigger an anal scene between them though :D