Moments from EP21✨
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Playing the ep21 now reading everything without skipping. Personally I would not chosen Jeff or Dave but I admit that you wrote in interesting twists and its enjoyable to read through. + How Lily confronts Naomi + How Lily confronts Goldberg. + All sneaky sex stuff with Jeff (even I hate him) * I consider Lily's body nice after the fitness program but hmm.. I still think that Goldberg or someone needs to pretty much force Lily to get boob job. Because of being over fit Lilys breasts could flatten out and Goldberg could notice it etc.. As Lily now confronted Goldberg her worth it could be that Goldberg accepts and once Lily starts working Goldberg then forces to Lily take the worth. * I think the hair is not good pick for several reasons at the time its introduced. It does not fit the jogging and forest sex scenes. However It does fit the club scene. If its not big change the novel would be better if Lily still had her previous hair in the forest/jogging scene. + I like the "classier" Lily that doesnt do the gloryhole stuff and hobo sex. Even I found it really amusing and laughed about the endless gloryhole stuff. I think the slut route went too quickly to the deep end. * As I have played the different routes now I feel that the "lillith" stuff is more fitting to the nympho route as Lily is really not caring about Dave and she is truly acting like sociopath just "my joy" "my money" "me" trying to twist everyone to her will. Right now there are so much similarities aka cross paths that could be done between the nympho route and the slut route that would be nice to see some stuff connect he nympho route. Like the event that starts the slut route where Lily joins the group at the club and finds herself in the hotel room. Actually right now at the ep21 end of nympho route feels like its start of the slut route. Again sorry about the stupid raging. You did really good job with the story even I dont like Jeff at all.
You probably have some good stuff thought and this is kind of mixing and complete mindstorming. At the end of the nympho route ep1. Lily has been bitch to Dave, Naomi, hag, Bobby. Because she has been bitch to everyone she would gain the nickname of "Lillith". Story wise it could be that Lily finds out only later what that means. Alternative end? The hag would curse Lily with the spirit of succubus and she would fuck Jeff to death because her greed to get off. She would do this because of how she treated Bobby. Other village people and the fair could play into this. Before killing Jeff she could accidentally or intentionally kill the hobos. This could start manifesting similar to slut route where Lily is stuck in the endless glory hole scenes. She would be total bitch for this end. This route could also have some kind of healing end aka how Naomi manages to save Lily from the curse etc. This route could have the femdom stuff etc anyhow sorry for extensive ideas that would take months to do :D
Fit Lily Is gorgeous, even if i think that innocent Lily Is a goddess