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Thanks for the novel. It has interesting twists. Here are my thoughts of the story up to ep19. Character design/stories: + Characters dont feel flat but unique and charistmatic. Sure most are perverts but.. they have other interests too. - I love the charismatic aka edge characters in your story development. It makes rememberable and unique characters. However Bobby steps over the "good bad charisma". HE would be enough yucky simply because the cellar and weird acting. Looks bit too monstorous. Then the weird bus guy.. Which I most likely still will see. Espcially the over dirty hands just makes it bad. Also the bus grey man is just too grey which leaves questions. - One difficult thing about the charismatic picks is that some of the Daz3d cheap or free characters have been used in many other Novels so the side characters can easily push you out of the story because "I saw that character somewhere" "Ah that guy was in xxx". I know its difficult to make charismatic unique characters but especially for that reason dont use those that really stand out that been used in many other novels. + I like the twist in many of the character relation developments for example Dave is complete dick but finally he turns a good man. Also its nice that Bobby has twist so you never can exactly know what is going to happen. Overall story stuff probably includes stuff that is too late to do anything about anymore... + I like the Lily clothing in the nympho route so I am bit sadly that the fuck toy route dont have the sweater or tasteful clothes even when Lily is outside the club not selling herself. - First clothing store visit. Sabastian could have asked Lily to wear heels for the photo shoot that was not included to the deal. Which Lily maybe liked but she was bit let down that she did not get them. - Club fuck toy route. Its good but personally I think the anal in this route is too emphasized. I imagine that after the glory hole stuff Lily could have broken most of the cock yuckiness and she loved being fucked so. Fitting punishement for her had probably been like order her to some entertain duty with another girl aka lick her tits and clit with some double dildo scene inside the club. That could have had some weird psychological impacts and maybe Naomi would she her doing that which could add some kind of twist to the story maybe Naomi would just ignore the order then from the Mr. Goldberg to talk with Lily. She could be too scared to confront Lily on her own but they could meet during fair or going there and back. For Lily it could be mixed like she enjoys the attention and getting orgasm when the woman lick her in middle of all males. Then again she could think that she loves cock and feeling bad that she doesnt get to enjoy any. - Susan could probably had some kind of more bad witch stuff like drugging Lily with aphrodisiac when she meet bobby. Perhaps first time too that Lily could not understand what makes her appealing to the dirty monster. She could find out later perhaps when she moved out about the drug and figure out that Susan was using her all the time. - I can live with teasing the homeless but that the homeless use lily no matter how she is in gangbang is just cheap. I think the homeless sex scenes should be optional and no those should not count towards any story branches.. Unless its homeless branch. - I wish that the nympho and fuck toy route were somehow intertwined. Nympho has lot of good stuff that would fit well to start of the fuck toy route. - How cocky Lily becomes with smokes doesnt feel fitting that she just take the smoke from the Tattoo Master for example. - I think the Lillith nickname / identity in end on ep 19 is either too early or completely misleading. Lily did not want bad for Bobby even when he tried to rape and she never tried really to get back to Susan and she never killed but she was always used. This new identity even she is suggested to get nickname is just bad pick.Actually the story part where the name is introduced actually suggests she is in identity crisis which would lead to seek new identity aka get such bad name pick.The Ep19 could just ended to that Lily called herself slut or if she had many vp session puppy. Requests/Suggestions for future content - I am not sure if you plan to save it for later but in the content out now I did not believe there was really any spiking. Spiking could be psychologically interesting because Lily could loath her customers doing it, but then again enjoy the tips and getting pleasure and she might feel nervious at her job. It could happen 2-3 times and on last time she was unable even taste it then she just give and let it go or something. - Generally speaking I would like that Novel creators would not use much or at all thought or lines like female:"Oh she is hot." Rather approach it bit more carefully like: "Oh my. She is feisty one. *smile*" "Her hair is amazing. I would love to meet her hairdresser." "Her chest is huge! It must weight on her much. *looking around* men are really crazy about her. I wish had such breasts. I would get such good tips. " "Oh my with those looks she there is nothing she can't conquer! " - In the fuck slut branch like every cock is something that barely fits anywhere. This is common issue with novels. Its ok that there is say 1-2 huge cock characters in novel but it kinda ruins it if everyone has huge dick. Then the huge is just "normal". * You do awesome stuff on psychological side of things but I would like to see more of that Lily needed money and she would degrade herself more and more and when men called her slut, cunt... She would get arousement and excitement knowing the next orgasm is coming (thought/line)"Yes, I am am" "I need your cock please.. mmm.. more" "Please fill me". This "self degradion" could be tied to acceptance and attention seeking Lily already does near end of chapter 1 fuck slut route. * I would like to see DLC that would add proper animations. I think its pretty much impossible to do quality animation without professional animator so even I dont really like AI generated stuff it would be one way to go. Its probably niche but it would also nice to hear it voice acted but dont even think of it until you have chapter 1 in the wraps. * You cant really do much about this one but just stating that I dislike the thing about Visual Novels that because they are pre-rendered images. Choosing character hair, nails, makeup, clothing etc inside the gameloop becomes so big workload that you cant really do it. If you would keep creating visual novels. I wish you could take route from pre-rendered stories to realtime rendered stories which would make actually possible that the protagonist choose hair or dress that she would get attention or get raped etc. In the novel there is situation in the fuck toy route where Lily gets piercings and they suddenly disappear for some scenes thats just lame. Perhaps bugs or other weird stuff - There are few renders especially mid/late the novel where Lilys facial shape looks off. Also the ahegao (tongue twisting) so strong does not really work very good. * Getting lag when meeting phillip at the fair. Took long to get over the lag. * Club route start lag. I think there is some kind of web request that completely locks the novel. (Happened twice) After this Novel set: * If you keep doing visual novel perhaps there was like 30-35 year old proud female CEO degradion story that you could create where the CEO would start seeking casual hook ups and eventually run into events where she meets her workers, investors. Personally like more old fashioned worlds so it could also be some lady from some fancy castle that lost her power over pleasure. Say she would somehow get out and she would understand that she lost herself to city or so that she did not know back nor she had money to get back. War could start so she could not get back to the castle and it could lead to lot stuff.

Thanks for all your hard work Ero!💯🈯