Transform or Command 18 - The Final Dylan Chapter
Hello, Hexxet here,
This is the third and final chapter to the Dylan Endgame and it will deal with Liz and Nicole's fate. We've already seen the result of Liz's transformation in chapter 16 -> she is shrunk to fit Dylan's preferences in women but she actually likes it cause she's been into Dylan from the beginning. And Nicole... well I guess you can tell from the cover... she speaks french now! ^^
The full comic is ~75 pages + 2 extra pages long and available to Enthusiasts or higher on the homepage in the comic section.
I hope you enjoyed the series so far! It kinda turned out more complicated to make than anticipated, cause I invented some rules of the game at the beginning and I swore to adhere to them. I think I managed to do just that, but still, the omnipotence of the game quickly turned this comic into a "Who moves first wins" kinda scenario. Originally I would not have minded to have more up and downs int he story in terms of changes and power struggles but as I created the story it seemed unrealistic considering the personality's I gave the players. so Dylan and Nicole quickly switched to conquering mode ^^. I hope I still made the story believable (under the premise of an omnipotent board game of course) :).
Comments (6)
Hey, love this series! Have a missed anything that reveals the other girlfriend adjustments that were made to Liz and are references at times? Very curious.
Nope. This chapter is told from such a point of view. The only thing we see is Liz getting smaller (but it's part of this chapter). :)
Awesome end for an awesome story! I Loved the game setting with all the fun and competitive back and forth between the different characters and all the resulting transformations and controls. You adhering to your self set rules was really appreciated – Noting is more sad as randomness in a otherwise “plausible” fantasy story. PS: Liz turned out just perfectly cute!
Thanks! Glad you liked it, and I too think that Liz turned out super cute :)
Can you please do a small alt version where Vadim is transformed into girl to join Dylan's harem?
I think it would be a fitting ending to the story, but sadly with all the content creation already I have no time for any additional workload. So, this "Alt version" would have to take up a regular comic slot. -> I've created a poll to find out if more people would be interested in such a TG-flavored chapter and if there are I will work on it in the coming months when the schedule permits.