Fan Fiction Story Time - ET x Elliot, My Immortal Chapter 1

God I was trying to eat 😭

That ET story... man. I just hope as I journey through this backlog of fanfiction that we found the upper limit of "wtf?" early on.

17:41 I just noticed that the captions say "limpid dicks" instead of "limpid tears"

Thanks I hate it 🫠

The kamakla ate itself lol

I think that ET story would be a lot more tolerable if it was completely severed from ET and instead was just an original alien love story

I wish I could just listen to the entire my immortal without all the other bits sprinkled in. Like I'll listen to them all once because it's funny but I can only listen to sonic high school once but my immortal is infinitely funny to me. Every time I heat "and I slit muh wrists" makes me cry laugh

Good Charlotte was the second concert I ever went to. That was many years ago, during their tour for their second album. Before their music got weird. (Just my opinion. No hate)

Thanks. I hate this

I am currently rewatching all of these and I... think I blacked out when I heard ET the first time. I really hope I can find that peace once more.

I only joined a few days ago. I have so many of these episodes to go through. And yet, I think my journey ends here, as all must, with pink ass juice

I wish I had the opposite of ears

I. Have never regretted not joining a Patreon right away before in my life. Shame on me and my folly. My pride hath kept me from thine treasures.

me, the second they mentioned "be more feminine": "oh god, please don't be a forced feminization fic."

I grow out of my puberty form...and EAT IT

Her teeth are straight and white. Just like her

I'm rewatching them and ya that ET one has to be like bottom five for me. Not shaming for it, just wow that's rough.

starting to think maybe i shouldn't have chosen this video to be the one i eat my lunch while watching

Why????

Maybe I shouldn't have chosen this video as the first one to watch in this series...

I paid to have that first story read to me. These are the choices I'm making. Amazing work fellas, holy hell 🤣🤣🤣

I cannot FATHOM how the my immortal writer managed to write a sentence that essentially says “I wish I was related to him because he’s hot”. Like Jesus Christ man

Dear gos

Im so glad ive never seen et... But also, how did they not clue into this being a fetish fic? Also bless them for not clueing into this being a fetish fic.

I have family age 17 in my next room im 30. Just no. Money was given for this 🤣

I'm only 4 minutes in and I am in a fugue state. Ive spent every minute since screaming

Being a 22 year old who has never watched ET has never been better. Literally EVERYTHING I WATCHED AS A CHILD IS PORN NOW. nothing is sacred this is why Gen Z is the way we are

It's episode 2 guys

I’m listening to this again and it’s always worse than I remember. How Arin is reading it makes it so much better though.

Somewhere, Steven Spielberg sheds a single tear, and he doesn't know why... But we know. And wish we didn't.

I WAS EATING WHILE I LISTENED TO THIS AAAA

Man I just got here what the FUCK

I was correct.

First episode, “heehee silly sonic” Second episode, “why am I paying to hear this😫”

Well that makes 2 of us who came or whatever

Omg this is the worst

Jesus Christ, I thought I had been completely desensitised by the internet but nope, E.T. fic is fucked

I’m not the same person I was before hearing the E.T fic 🤮

Well, thats enough internet today.

nothing can ever top my friends and i collectively reading my immortal to each other in the hs cafeteria. pls dont flam

I feel like we’re all going to jail just for having read/heard this

Im so glad I subscribed this is gold 🤣🤣

I haven't seen this before, but I checked the description and comments first..I'm gonna finish eating before I press play.

Coming back and relistening to this never gets easier because my brain constantly blocks out all of the disgusting details from my memory.

I had to play Zelda while watching this because giving it my full attention was very uncomfortable ..... but my god am I so glad I am paying for this shit!

(super vague in case anyone new is marathoning these) I came back after the Danganronpa-centered fic to re-listen to ET, and ET is still my personal nightmare fuel champion.

whoever submitted the ET one, I have beef with you now

The stock video is criminal

Was that an E.T. forcefem fanfic I just listened to? Oh my god I just listened to an E.T. forcefem fanfic

that first story....what a terrible time to have ears.

Nothing like listening to two grown men at work read ET fanfiction… that was indeed a

"I'm not related to Gerard Way, but I wish I was because he's a major hottie." Ebony, you are disgusting.

that e.t. story was rough

That E.T. story- That was beyond cursed. Vile. Atrocious. An absolute abomination. 11/10

Nothing could have prepared me for the first story.

I'm torn between saying "Well, that escalated quickly" and "I paid $8 to hear this garbage?? Rad." But I know that in my heart, no words will ever explain the depths of my emotions as I heard that story being told.

Man...My Immortal really brought me back to tumblr days as a kids. Miss them.

We paid for uncensored things like the E.T story. Pretty pissed you stopped it, sadly.

I haven't even gotten to My Immortal... I'm already DYING of laughter and exasperation

Hearing that Dan has experience with My Immortal was like hearing your grandpa say he was there when they found Hitler dead or something

i am truly mesmerized by the et fic. i feel like it's op's journey of understanding their own sexuality. absurd and beautiful...

This alone is worth the price

i just got this patreon for the first time and i’m questioning whether or not this was worth $10. i feel like they owe ME money for sitting through that 😭

I know we consider the ET thing to be a step up but trust me when I say that the rest of that Sonic Highschool story is equally insane EDIT: Just to further prove the point, I'm putting in an excerpt from one of the later chapters (with one of the character names redacted; wouldn't wanna spoil it of course) “ "NOOOO!" screamed [____] as Sonic's balls smacked into his mouth and nose and eyes like a plastic bag full of pudding. [____] looked into the sky and made an asshole face for the last time and then he turned into stone and then turned into dust and was now dead. ”

The ass juice from your pink ass

Grumpy grumpy Literature Club!!!!

what is pink ass juice

The comments were at 299. I needed to make it 300

"Pink Ass Juice" is my next band name

Starting to think it was a bad idea to watch this while eating lunch...

The absolute left turn from “coming of age realizing your sexuality ET/Elliot fic” to STRAIGHT UP HARD CORE FETISH KINK PORN is so violent

Could not finish this 😵‍💫

"I haven't read this, but I would read this for a live audience."

That ET story made me nauseous.

Currently doing my taxes with this playing in the background. I can’t believe this is my adult life.

Me, seeing the warning on the episode: Eh, how bad could it be? Me, 8 minutes late: Okay, what was the timestamp to skip?

nah, the balls being on the inside was the least weird part to me, as I've been designing alien races for a novel, focusing heavily on the idea that most authors arbitrarily decide that since we have it, our anatomy is clearly superior, and thus every alien should also have it, which is dumb. I'm talking literally everything, from having 4 limbs to being born as babies, from needing to excrete waste, to, absolutely, having the balls on the outside, which we evolved to have because the sperm would die from the heat if they were on the inside. Instead of, I don't know, HAVING BETTER SPERM? Nah, let's put the most vulnerable part of our body in the most easily accessible place. Like we weren't a weak ass garbage species enough already So that was a singular good moment in what otherwise was a nightmare I will never recover from.

No fucking lie... as a teenager, I legitimately got into a debate with a boyfriend over whether or not the past-tense of "cum" is "cummed" or "came" LOL. I was on Dan's side; ex-boyfriend was on Arin's.

Here's what I need to know: what kind of fucked up people do you have working for you in order to find this in the first place?

Thanks. I hated this. Absolutely the best $5 I’ve ever spent.

Watched the first episode while making food. Regret eating while watching the second..... Holy shit dood.

upon relistening to the first story i must disagree with dan, that story was written by a girl for sure

Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way saved my worthless life and so did this video.

The first story made mt pregnant wife vomit in front of her mother. Definitely recommending this to everyone

Watching this while eating nutella was a mistake!!! lol

Well... genderbender, yay?

Please Arin, read more wierd shit to Dan.

Fuckin Christ, this was very much a step up for $5! I can FEEL the discomfort and confusion everyone's having as the story just keeps going. Loved it.

Oh my god this is exactly as horrible and amazing as I had hoped, and my $5 could not have possibly been spent better.

Personally I can't really relax properly after work until I've got my bed nice and coated with my pink ass juice. Burrito time!

I feel Dan's pain

Also this music sounds straight outta twilight

I can barely listen to this one.. 🤣

“NO BALLS” “No balls…” “His balls are INSIDE” “Thank you”

Okay so i read the rest of the et fic (its incompete) and it gets so much worse its like a car crash you cant look away

That ET one made me violently uncomfortable what is this 😭

Need more My Immortal

His ass was so sensitive.

worth every penny 💀💀

"came"

What the fuck am I listening to

thanks! time for me to finally pick up a religion because i think that's the only way i can recover from this! <3

Thanks guys, this was a horrible experience 👍

This fucking rocks shit

Some how I made it through the et part but couldn't handle the HP fan fic

So was he really athletic, or pretty athletic?

I just have this picture in my head of Dan coming home from this, and Ashley asking him how his day went and he just said I don't want to talk about it...

Dan rethinking his career choice at 6:20 lol

I'm so glad I decided to pay $5 to see this 🤣😂🤣

Man... That first story almost made me puke but also had me almost crying in laughter...

The part about Eliot's ass juices is a great soundtrack to poo by. You feel less alone

Editor, using that stock footage @7:05....💀 you're bad for that

i hate that I can follow what is happening in the first story. I wish I didn't know. But seeing them laughing and reading fanfiction is really funny. I think the E.T story is my second favorite, only because My Immortal is the top tier story. I'd never heard it before, so experiencing it for the first time, is such a gift.

Dude, I was CRYING so hard my stomach hurt as Arin rattled off obscenities about ET in huge run-on sentences. That shit was art.

did I just hear arin read ET omegaverse?!

this is almost as bad as Rhett and Link reading explicit fanfics about themselves

Sounds like the author of My Immortal is a fan of Harmony Hippogriff 😂

"Pink ass juice" I'll never be able to toss that phrase out of my mind. Thanks, boys. As if childhood trauma wasn't enough 😩🤣

So glad this was the first video I watched after joining. I thought I had been desensitized to fanfiction. But that ET one made me realize..... *Obama voice* Not so. But My Immortal is still so worth it :3

So glad I finally subscribed this is epic cringe but epic

A TINY bit of constructive criticism (Not about E.T that was perfect 👌🔥) The audio kinda cuts in and out a bit and it keeps making me adjust my earbud volume and now I feel slightly schizophrenic lol

BEST EPISODE 🤣 10/10

"Pink ass juice" killed me i had to pause to collect myself

I'm so glad I finally subscribed to see this absolute horror (all that I see)

I'm so excited for my immortal! As a die-hard drarry reader in my teens, and as a lover of mcr and gc 😜 this foray into my fandom's cultural history is long overdue, for me. And also that ET fic really is rivaling for the worst thing I've heard/read and that is saying a LOT Emotional Rollercoaster on this one, boys! I love it

I was eating mashed potatoes while I watched this 🤮

The fact that I was expecting to be more disturbed by the first story shows how desensitized I have become. And honestly I should feel ashamed but guilt is a useless emotion.

The first story is even more hilarious with the sound off

*Dark'ness, lovelies. Lolololol

Dan has probably the most cheerful Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way voiceover I have ever heard.

Quick to add that my immortal only describes things that can be placed on a body. She never gives a real physical description. Arin, Dan. Are you boys ready to be Ebony Darkness Dementia Raven Way?

"I can pull the plug on this show" is fucking me up I'm laughing so hard I'm a mess I'm just not used to normal, everyday folks experiencing A/B/O hypno feminization and I'm a sobbing giggling mess I'm so sorry dan

Dans face during the incredible amounts of unnecessary detail lmao

“Cummed?” “What would you have said” “Came?” “Smarty pants over here” 😂

There needs to be a version of this with the entirety of the ET story bleeped out, so we can just watch Dan become more and more horrified

Equal cringe for very different reasons

Whoever wrote that ET fanfic is not seeing the gates of heaven

Honest to gods, I got the Patreon for this specific episode of this. I just got to the part where Dan starts to read and I'm nothing if not hopeful for the best experience of my life

really hope they read all of my immortal 😂

Just subbed to the Patreon, can’t wait to see the rest of these

Really wish youtube would let you monetize shit like this lmao

Any time I think I'm ready to hear the entirety of My Immortal, I get about 2 chapters in and my body screams at me to stop.

Finding out there will be an ET sequel next summer really changes a lot. Maybe...

Ike. Give me my money back. I can't get passed 5:58 without dropping my phone and hiding LOL

I quite drunkenly read "My Imortal" to an audience at an author's convention a few years ago. It always goes down a treat. You should have a look at something called "Crappy Pastas" like creepy pastas, but intentionally bad.

All I can say is Ike, wtf man

I can’t believe y’all were reading my immortal the whole time and I didn’t know… right under my nose. I should have known… I’m such a fool

The slow page turn in silence was AGONIZING

I wonder who's gonna be strong enough to submit the milk fic

Uh hoping that first story was in fact not viewed by either of your parents lolol

First one still isn't as bad as that one One Direction one

I don’t care how many times I’ve read My Immortal, Dan reading it just slays me in a way I can’t describe

listen ive read some pretty crazy fanfics, so the content of the first story isnt that bad to me. but to have a person read it OUT LOUD?? and its ARIN?? im shriveling up from the cringe hhhsdfh

I hate that my name is Raven

I'm safely getting through the first story while reading the comments.. hilarious misery loves company lol

Now that I've heard the E.T. story, that's all I ever want from this series. What, after all, is Game Grumps without extensive descriptions of semen?

Also, I loved this...I'm just not gonna be the one to break 666 likes. 🤘

Me at 00:00 reading the description: "Could it REALLY be that bad?" Me by 16:25: *thousand-fan stare*

666th like. Normally I'd be stoked... But when it comes on ET Day, it is but a hollow victory...

The best part of My Immortal isn't the story, but the drama between the author and Raven. The Sweater Debacle.

This episode made my body hurt

Dan is so disappointed 💀

wAS GUUDER

Just listened to "the story" yesterday, and today I see this?!?! NO WAY it's just coincidence! https://www.facebook.com/photo?fbid=980403770322318&set=pb.100050581115679.-2207520000

Great googly moogly, what did I just listen to?!

Next time Ike says, "Not fit for human consumption", please take heed. Good Lord.

I'm with Dan on this one. At least I can skip if I choose... lol

This is soooo cringy

It's named after a evanescence but she's all about mcr

It was a mistake to sit down to dinner and watch this

I want a refund.

i'm a jaded ao3 user and that et fic literally made me nauseous. i'm thoroughly impressed

Dan's expressions make the first one so worth a watch. 😂

didnt expect hypno-feminization when signed up for this, but here we are

This ET story alone was worth 5 dollars. 😂😂😂

Takin me back to highschool with the my immortal reading

I'm gonna need more of the ET story. I need more, please. It's terrible and hilarious.

I'm so happy to finally be apart of this so I can hear these! I wish it would play til the end but that's probably my phone bad. 😊☺️😂😂😂

Dans fucking slow blinks in the beginning 😂😂😂😭

My husband is judging me because I have sbassbear compilations going in the bg while watching this. I gotta put throw on gg in the background so I can watch gg

I have some memories of reading My Immortal with someone who is no longer in my life. This is more cathartic than y’all know. Nature is healing. 🦇

really rethinking watching this one while eating dinner and I’m only 6 minutes in 😭

Those are certainly all words I had to hear

But fr, I lost count of how many times I had to pause to process what I was hearing before the 5 min mark. Now at 9:39 min in, I'm horrified that it has only gotten worse LOL

Still a better love story than Twilight.

I joined patreon just so I could watch this stuff. Been waiting for the fanfiction episodes since Sonic playthrough xD thanks lads!

I need them to read more chapters from both of those stories.

As a m/m fic writer I hate "ass juices"

My Immortal is such a perfect slice of internet/fanfiction history simply because it blurs the lines between parody, trolling, and sincere love for 2000's teen mall goth culture and Harry Potter so perfectly. I am such a fan of it, and am a connoisseur of dramatic readings of it.

Nooooo I wanted Danny to read the good charlotte concert scene

For some reason I keep rewatching this. It's like, I need to see if it's just as weird each time. And so far my conclusion is that, yes. It's still weird. More research may be required though. Edit: Further research has revealed that it will always be weird....further research may be needed to make sure.

That first story was crazy. Not fit for human consumption indeed.

The first story is Ike’s revenge after the boys dissed on his green bean casserole in the thanksgiving 10mph 😂

I hate that I wanted to know throughout this entire story who Kamackla (don't correct me I don't care about the spelling) is

When it's so effed up you have to watch it twice.

I will say, do not eat anything while listening to the first story, as it can make you physically gag while eating even the lightest of yogerts

>Reads the warning "Oh, come on - it can't be THAT bad." Spoilers: It WAS that bad

I am wheezing 🤣

I love the twilight music in the background.

I paid money to hear this. I'm having nightmares while awake now.

I feel like I need a shower.

Dan’s face is just done. He’s over this.

So Timmy what was your favorite Patreon post ever? “I have no time for your childish banalities father. Things are DIFFERENT now”

I love how the ET story would give almost poetic descriptions of his orgasm only to immediately break it with something like "His dick was rock hard!"

I’ve never taken so much psychic damage in my life after hearing that ET fanfiction

if we're doing fanfic classics we gotta suggest the milk fic

Never have I read my immortal, I have only heard wispers, so happy I got to hear my favorite little guys read this as my first experience!

The gentle music behind ET fanfiction is so insulting to my intelligence lmao

Joining Patreon to hear Danny read My Immortal is the single best $5 investment I have ever made in my life. Please read more

I need them to read all of My Immortal

Like quite a few here, I just joined GG’s Patreon for My Immortal. Please keep going!

More My Immortal pls, but also Hans Von Hozel's Dragonball Z fanfiction

where tf is zabe? they need a doctor

PLEASE READ MORE OF MY IMMORTAL!!!! XD

I love how it's just the Hyrule Historia lmao

I need more My Immortal, it just gets better and better

It's nice to know that in the year of our lord 2024, My Immortal is still being read.

I haven't heard of my immortal now I have to go look it up Please keep reading it seems interesting!

Yeah I don’t usually get uncomfortable just from hearing a story, but man that first one made me want to vomit immediately, but it just kept getting worse. I agree with Dan, that’s the worst piece of literature I’ve ever had the misfortune of experiencing.

Do you think they've seen the giving tree fan fic? I can't remember if I heard about it from them first or from the McElroys 💀😂

I'm only a few minutes in and Dan has already gone through the 5 stages of grief several times

I almost tapped out watching during the first one that was horrible LOL edit: PLEASE CONTINUE MY IMMORTAL

Why is it pink?!?!

That first story is *absolutely* not fit for human consumption.

Putting in my 2 cents to say I JUST JOINED YOUR PATREON TO HEAR DAN READ MY IMMORTAL. PLEASE READ MORE

That first story....I have no words. Genuinely disturbed.

Long time Game Grumps fan, but I'll be straight I only made the move to Patreon just for My Immortal. The only thing I was disappointed about was you didn't read nearly enough. I'm glad everyone else in the comments feels the same way.

I'm kind of amazed Arin hadn't heard of My Immortal.

Please, I joined the Patreon just for My Immortal. I need you to continue it! I'll stick around, I won't cancel I promise just read the rest of it I beg you!!!

god bless

Please please please continue reading My Immortal! The way Dan read it is perfect and I need to see their reactions to the later parts of the story!!

I need more my immortal read by Dan. It gets so crazy.

That first one was truly a hard listen.

Hey guys! Please read Loud House Revamped! It is longer than all of Shakespeares work combined. If you look up ‘longest piece of literature’ you will find this.

More My Immortal please! I never subscribed to a Patreon faster in my life.

Please finish My Immortal. It gets so beautifully insane I consider it art because of how good/bad it is

Please just continue to read My Immortal, you haven't even gotten to the best parts. It goes waaaay off the rails.

Worth every penny.

Did I subscribe to the Patreon specifically to hear you guys read My Immortal? Yes, yes I did.

I adore this, please never stop.

Oh my god this was worth every penny I am in pain from laughter. This is NOT safe for human consumption.

The vibe in this really makes me feel so warm and happy. They both look so good. Lighting is perfect. - I brought my mom to your live show in El Cajon and when I yelled "I love you!" She asked me how I meant it and I explained to her that I meant it like a daughter to her fathers. You each have basically raised me alongside my mom so it was a really special moment to get to share it with her. Thank you both !! - My childhood is being healed by these lovely and super innocent bed time stories!

Saw Dan reading My Immortal on today's grumps episode. FASTEST $5 I've ever spent in my entire life.

Arin’s face at 9:44 after realising “came” is the correct past tense, fucking, floored me 😂 Awesome video!!

Im here for this

I was hoping they'd eventually get to My Immortal 🤣

That first fanfic was probably the worst thing I've ever had read to me but it was worth the wait for My Immortal

I literally cannot wait for more of this

As horrific as the first story was, I am loving this series. Also wouldn’t be mad if y’all did a my immortal chapter every episode haha love to hear their full read through of that classic but also being exposed to insane fics like the first one is quite culturally enlightening

Ive watched this, and I loved it <3

As soon as Dan said classic I thought of my immortal and idk how I feel about being right

I don’t really love it. I spent money on this

Quality content <3

Confused as to why they have "please like and subscribe. Thanks for watching." In Hangul subtitles but big fan of them reading the infamous my immortal 😂

Wellllp, made it about halfway through. Love that you guys are doing this, but I’ll definitely be skipping from now on 😵‍💫😅 Edit: nvm I skipped ahead to My Immortal, please finish that entire story I will watch every episode

ouroboros cock.............

The whole time I was just thinking "I spent £10 to see this content" but you know what? Worth every penny 10/10

oh this is SO worth 5 dollars

I was choking laughing the whole time at the ET thing, but that being said let's never revisit it again.

God, this series needs to continue...imagine if/when they get to MLP fanfic.

Disovered "My Immortal" around the time I discovered Game Grumps. Now, at last, they have come together, and I want MORE!

I literally cried because I laughed so hard, these are fantastic. I subbed for this, hope we get a lot more of these!

I was eating a bagel during the first one, thanks guys 💕 Also you guys HAVE to read more My Immortal, I’ve read it a few times and it’s a MASTERPIECE

Steven Spielberg: Man, I’d really love to make a film about a little alien guy befriending a child! 40 years later: THIS.

You know it’s rough when Arin literally has to stop before reading something 🤣

I can't believe this is the crossover event for my special interests.

Guys… I just signed up for this expecting a silly goofy time. This was my first thing I watched as a patron😂💀 WTF

That ET one was... um... whoa

I can not express the horror of the first one

Best Christmas present ever. Please do more My Immortal, it's so horribly bad and wonderful

I was one of the people that submitted My Immortal, might have been one of the first, so BLESS you for reading this!!

My Immortal’s author’s notes really are the hidden gems in that car crash of syntax.

When I saw the commercial on youtube of y'all reading My Immortal I immediately bought a patreon subscription.

My Immortal is too much of a masterpiece for a one-off. pls keep going

As an elder goth, sweet. Jesus. HALP.

Keep going with My Immortal! Heck, do a chapter or two in each fan fic video!

Kinda jelly of the flower smelling cum tbh. I’m good never hearing that story again. 😭😂

I have to applaud the editors for the stock image choices. Hilarious

I can't express how much I need the grumps to read more of My Immortal for when Dumbledore shows up, I need it like water.

*Please* make a special segment for to you guys finish reading My a Immortal?

God, I don't think that first one could have been much worse. One of the ugliest creatures in any movie mind fucked a character everyone only knew before as a child, and said character starts to turn into a woman while leaking disgusting fluids from every orifice described in great detail

This is exactly the kind of content I wanted from the game grumps

I am equally horrified and fascinated at the escalation of this episode over the last.

I'm a simple man, I see that the GG Patreon includes fanfic reads, I subscribe. I've been on the fence for a while but you know what, I've been watching GG since the very first ep back in 20whenever, so it was inevitable I suppose. So happy to be here, love the stuff!

We all know the E.T one was written by Hifumi yamada, the ULTIMATE FANFIC CREATOR

Hey guys, just wanted to say first time being on your patreon and i wanted to thank you peeps for helping through alot of hard times. Been going strong on chemotherapy since i was 15 years old(Currently 22) and whenever they pump that sucker through my vein i pop on a good ol game grumps video. Pretty crazy to see how time flies by. from super mario sunshine, to pokemon, mario maker, sonic riders etc. Thanks for the memories fellas and keep up the good work!

Wow that ET story was truly vile, why was there cock vore and ass juice? nvm I already know and I wish I didnt

That E.T. story is quite possibly the most upsetting thing I’ve ever heard. More please.

I… hate this xD WHYYYY?! 😭😭😭

Imagine if you laboured a full-term pregnancy, birthed a boy who you and your partner pour your entire souls into the effort of loving and raising him, watch him grow up to even cheer him on as he walks the graduation stage to accept his diploma, be so proud of him and excited for his adult years, to then discover he, the one you delivered into this world, wrote E.T. and Elliot - Coming Back to Me.

Please read more My Immortal, it's so much more fun and less uncomfortable than E.T. fanfic

This episode was such a rollercoaster of emotions for me!!!

Please finish reading My Immortal in future episodes! I would love to see Danny and Arin react to the creative spelling and unique storyline.

I love this shows intro

My first exposure ever to My Immortal. Dear god.

i love this so much

I cannot form words for how utterly... I can't watch ET again.

more of my immortal please

3 and a half minutes in...yeah I'm gonna skip to My Immortal. Elliot was a literal child, no thanks.

i'm sorry for enjoying how miserable Danny is

I would love a spin off of just the two of them reading through My Immortal

I once read a Care Bears fan fic that had a sex scene. It was intense

i would like to never hear arin say the word cunt in this context again. nor any of the words that prefaced and followed that word. i wish i could go back to 22 minutes ago before i heard that story.

1:43 Dan's realization that he may dread what he's about to get into

Please dear god I can't believe you went for My Immortal in episode TWO 😭☠️☠️☠️☠️

If you dare to do My Little Pony fanfiction, the classics Rainbow Factory or Cupcakes would be great (don't worry, they're horror, not porn)

yeah reading my immortal in its entirety is now a requirement. thanks for this !

This is a moment in my life and now it has passed.

Very descriptive and not descriptive at all for the ET one lol Danny I really hope this isn't suffering for you :)

Please no more ElliotxET😭 I beg of you. But I need a full episode of My Immortal with wigs and multiple speaking parts ASAP

Oof, that first one is too weirdly personal for human consumption but My Immortal is classic. I love these episodes.

Yeah...im gonna need more of Dan reading My Immortal with Arin laughing uncontrollably in the background.

I'm gonna need no more of the first fanfic and the ENTIRETY of the rest of My Immortal, please and thank you

Poor Eliot's mom. That laundry isn't gonna do itself.

i HATE this

Those author notes killed me

YEEEAAAAAHHHHH MY IMMORTAL LETS FUCKING GOOOOOO!!!!!!

This is so fucking good

Not My Immortal 😭💀

Well. That first story was certainly a thing.

Honestly the ET one could have been a whole lot worse. Or the internet has just desensitized me to shit like that

I'm a huge fan of fanfiction and a writer of fanfic myself, and I take the craft of writing fic very seriously. And this series is my favorite thing Game Grumps has ever done!

I am your mama.

I definitely skipped the first story after getting maybe 2 minutes in, but the second story was great 😂

how did this get so intensely terrible 😭😭🤣🤣

Oh fuck yeah, this is what the people needed in this holiday season

i am curious about how many people submitted my immortal, i imagine it was a popular one