Fan Fiction Story Time August 2026 #1 - Light and Dark: The Adventures of Dark Yagami ch. 21 - 24

The joy in Arin for getting the day yagami payoff

That list of demands was like getting punched in the gut every single time, but it’s a different punch every single time so it’s impossible to put your guard up

Dark and light always toucheling and kisseling

everyone is taking physic damage

This one in particular makes me feel like I'm having a stroke

The story feels like I'm being beaten to death with words

Almost a minute before 41:44, it looks like we were seeing that YT short that just went up recently, Arin's toes are blurred, and the sync with the audio is way off. Right at 41:44, we're in step again. If I read right.

31:21 It has been feeling like that for me since the start, and it hasn't changed. This series has been, to my brain, something I will not be really hearing while I do retain the memory of Arin laughter. And that's just about all the appeal for me. It doesn't have the flair of Sonic High and even less plot. I don't understand what everyone else likes about it. The Light Yagami Adventures can keep coming if this is still fun for y'all, but I'd be fine for them to stop whenever.

As soon as there were two Marley equivalents, I was like "Oh no....this person has only ever seen the Muppet version". Glad to see I was clearly right. (for the record, actually a great adaptation that keeps the important themes intact, but it's still a very specific version)

make these downloadable!

I love my monthly trip into the inner monolouge of a 13 year old boy

I love the idea of this author using his fanfic to vent about not getting guitar hero for Christmas.

why did the episode break like 4 minutes before it ended?

I feel like as soon as they cut, a scene played out like Event Horizon.

28:33 the list of demands

The little snippets of the writer’s real life are my favorites, like him being mad over not getting Guitar Hero or him getting his heart broken by Christie.

Is this the first week of that cleaned up intro? Nice. Not sure it needed the xylophone sounding bit tagged on at the end, maybe I'll grow to like it.

Aside from everything else, it's so heartwarming that Dan will still pull out that "whaddyathinkh?" bit and it'll always drop Arin to the ground

Trying to knock on a front door while in a helicopter is next level lol

“That tiny dude from the christmas ghost thing” you mean JIMMINY FUCKING CRICKET?

omg everyone is just noting everything back and forth. nothing has any consequences

This one definitely lost me until the list of demands, he went off with that one dog

That list of demands got me literally crawling on the ceiling for ten minutes.

Lord, these are so good

The knuckle dusters (brass knuckles) joke was pretty funny.

This is getting painful to watch

I wonder if the author of this ever read the things they'd written before submitting it to whatever site "we" got this off of or if they just hit a bunch of keys on their keyboard and sent it the minute they were done Was that grammatically correct? I'm not sure, I feel woozy after listening to this

Chapter 24 is one of the best in this whole fic, the way it nails comedic anticlimax from the title to one of the most straight up absurdist character exchanges of all time between Dark and L are part of why it's still got several of my most quoted lines.

Do you think this fanfic and Jenna's Link Life would be friends at the school cafeteria

I think this needed more time being edited before being posted. The opening being the wrong tone and also that weird bit in the end where it goes completely out of sync and has some footage from maybe a different video. Like what?

I love the touch that the Christmas Carol film that the story is referencing (the Marley and Marley song) is specifically from The Muppets Christmas Carol.

The new opening theme slaps! I love the dynamics of the different instruments and the continued jingle.

What a special journey. I feel like I've experienced ego death...

So this is definitely written by a 12 year old with an older brother, probably 15. The sex themes are definitely a little too strong for 12, but an older brother would absolutely introduce those things to their younger brother early. It's probably written to emulate his cool older brother, who is also writing stuff and introduced them to being a fanfiction writer and anime in general. That, to me, explains all the repetitiveness and the different types of "notes."

This session had such deranged energy lol

I just got the Patreon and was curious about this, but I couldn't bring myself to start from chapter one. How I feel now is like how I felt when I was awake for 30 hours straight and trying to listen to a physics lecture. I'm just recognizing words while my brain stutters through scenes and I feel all floaty

the demands list was just haymaker after haymaker

His man thing got all scratched

am I crazy or is the intro song slower and lower pitched than before...

What the fuck are you doing you freakish son of mine has to enter my vocabulary somehow, it’s too good

Wtf the opening theme is in a different key WHAT IS HAPPENING

Arin getting so excited was genuinely amazing. Felt the exact same way.

I can't believe they missed L eating the remote

Knuckle dusters... That's not what they're used for

Why my state, KY, catching strays

The song is Marley & Marley from the muppet Christmas carol. It’s going to be stuck in my head for months now 😆 objectively it is the best version of a Christmas carol, tho

Besides the brass knuckles, duster doesn't mean a jacket, they meant like a literal cloth used for dusting shelves and such

They're dusters but they can't dust because they aren't made of cloth

I'm going to tell my children that this is the Bible

Christmas "past"? There is no past, because the past is over with. All there is is the present. You can deny anything in the past.

Scott Pilgrim facing off against the boyfriend made of money.

mewwy quistmis!