Fan Fiction Story Time May #1 - Light and Dark: The Adventures of Dark Yagami ch. 9 - 12

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I'm sorry the, "One million Storm troopers." *Checks gun* "100,000 bullets, just enough." Was so fucking funny I screamed. Then when Dan read he killed everyone but 1 and punched him so hard he killed 100 people, I straight up had to pause the video. Jesus Christ.

I started absolutely losing it at the kosh part

I probably shouldn't be listening this at work, I audibly exclaimed "what???" and laughed hard during the tattoo death note part, and my coworker that was in earshot gave me a really weird look that I had to explain 😰

Wrong answers only: what's the song that Night will sing to end the world 🤔 😂

This episode needs to be made an animated I laughed SO HARD

Chiny sweep ❌ Chinny sweep ❌ Chimney sweep ✔️

For someone who can't seem to get much right, this author SURE knows the rivers that correspond with prominent locations. Also, a giant chocolate-filled croissant would be the ultimate cake made of bread

"my skin is made of deathnote so i can kill people by getting tattoos" hit way too hard at 3:30am

"winked Takata... nakeding" 😏

My brain is visually rendering the race in France like Fast and the Furious animated in the style of Redline but it's made by Studio Trigger in the same vein as Inferno Cop which basically is the same sense of humor as Dark Yagami the more I think of it.

"lesbean" is, in fact, a cutesy tumblr nickname for lesbian. signed, a tumblr lesbian

I'm so happy that everyone is losing their minds reading this, I was also crying when I first read it, genuinely it's like a fever dream xD I forgot about the random stormtroopers and my sides hurt from laughing so hard

The "author's note" visual fucking kills me every time, please never stop putting that in

As an Englishman I found this episode both racist and offensive. READ MORE, PLEASE! Also the idea of the London underground metro going all the way to Wales is hilarious!

Please read this whole thing I’m obsessed I have not laughed this hard since like. Forbiden Fruit.

This one's trying too hard. My Inner Life is so much better cause it's so fking genuine.

“My skin is made of Deathnote, so I can kill people by getting tattoos.” That is so goddamn funny.

They lmao'd and rofl'd over not sexing each other

I want to share again. Maybe for Patreon or 10MPH, have the Grumps do a spelling bee but it’s for the misspelled words from fan fictions. 🥐🥐🥐

I feel coshed. But like in a good way.

I'm gonna miss hearing Dee's cackling in the background.

Fun fact! Both the first and second floor of the Eiffel Tower have restaurants on them! You can eat and check out the view at the same time! It’s pretty cool but you’ll need a reservation.

Somehow I kept up with the previous chapters, but I've rewatched this episode twice now and I'm so lost on what I'm hearing.

This is so much like a dream. Just throw a bunch of scenarios in the pot and stir...

I've been tolerating these; no familiarity with source is keeping me from seeing what's so interesting about this thing. Maybe this week will be good?

Im from the UK and im like 3 minutes in and i am cringing so hard "WHAT THE W**K ARE YOU BLOODY DOING" aint nobody saying that here dude i cant even 😭 Omh the author doesn't think france has traffic lights bro thinks they are cavemen 😭 Wait did author say they went to the city of Wales gah it just gets worst LOCHNESS IN WALES 😭

Near…. GET IT?!?!

that last chapter was banger near (GET IT) banger

It feels like the author had 10 different ideas when they started writing this story, thought of like 100 new ones in the middle of writing this story and 90 of them contradicted what they'd already written but they either didn't care to go back and rewrite the things they'd written or they'd forgotten what they'd written and didn't realise it contradicted anything

Every time I'm done watching an episode of this show, especially the latest ones with this story but also the old My Immortal episodes, I feel like I just got off a roller coaster that just throws you around but like without any sense of thrill. It's not exciting, it's just disorientating and confusing and I'm so unsure whether or not I'm actually enjoying it or if it's just driving me towards insanity

dam this fic is all action no filler. it's basically an outline lmao

that first very brief author's note that said they thought twilight was girly but emmett is badass deserves some psychological profiling.

A plane….. in New York City…..

I just realized what yagami is backwards 😳

The fucking Death Note skin made me roflmao XD.

I love the author’s dedication to consistency with the nuke pen

Glossed right over "...he britished"

As someone who knows nothing about Death Note, I'm going to assume it's a globe-trotting adventure just like this

I feel fucking delirious every time

So glad art still lives on in these trying times

For a minute, I was like "this isn't even Death Note anymore; we're here in this secret lab with cloning technology? What!?" And then the skin made of death note brought it all back. I ROFLMFAOed pretty hard.

*giant from Twin Peaks voice* IT'S HAPPENING AGAIN

Toasty in the background going "HAAAAA haaa ha ha" adds so much to these

Yay and on my birthday✨️✨️

The skin made out of Death Note concept is SO good It's so stupid, and it's so good

Shotgun gun*

I thought the hotel was spelled like the cracker.

YESS MORE PEAK STORY WRITING

Lfg gamers!!!!