Fan Fiction Story Time - March #1 - Let It All Out - Letting it All Out During Class Trial
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That was fucking excruciating.
dan just gradually getting more and more visably uncomfortable
this one was juicy
dan should read the korekiyo chapter and do the peter lorre voice the whole time
These fanfics are starting to negatively impact Dan, he’s looking a little horse
everything in this session killed me but what sent me into absolute ORBIT was Monokuma saying "YOU LITTLE SHITS"
I like the ominous/dramatic music in the background.
Read more pals my good old pals I love that you read these and would keep paying monthly in order to receive these nuggets of amazing nuggetness
Can’t we just make fun of the fujoshis without getting into the sexual scenes XD
That was diabolical. Cant wait to see what other horrors await us in the future! Hats off to Arin and his unrelenting commitment
Just realized I can Cast the past few months of FFST & other extras straight to my TV. Hell ya
Read more of this fan fiction or I'm unsubscribing (no but seriously please read more, I've never laughed harder)
You know what? I’ll take this over the E.T. one any day. Nothing this piss loving author has written could be worse than that.
At least we know these two characters are very hydrated lol
We could not breathe through the piss induced laughter. It may be gross but it is *hilarious.* thank you for pulling through! (rip Dan....)
Damn George Harrison has good taste in fanfiction. I knew there was a reason he was my favorite Beatle.
I’d still pick this one over the E.T one.
This feels like an escalation, like a Rubicon was crossed. We can't go back, everything is different now.
pls no more
my favorite story is back i hate it :D
please read more danganrompa fanfictions!
I learned that even though Dan was clearly having a terrible time, it was still hilarious to me...sorry Dan, I guess I'm one of the people these videos are obviously made for...But all of the fanfic readings are funny to me, even when Dan is not having a terrible time! So as far as I'm concerned, feel free to read ones that don't make you anyone extremely uncomfortable :) I'll still watch all of them lol
I loved this. I don’t mind these types of fanfics it’s great to watch everyone’s reaction.
Yup.. I’m good on these 👍Thanks fellas, but lets get back to all-powerful Garfield or something please
Dan looking like he wants to die is the best
I miss Dan
I learned that I've become much more tolerant to gross fanfiction than in my younger days. I don't know if that's a good or bad thing.
Dan walking out was such a vibe.
Love when Dan really phones it in
This might genuinely be the worst one yet. More please <3
Incredible stuff
please more of this pls XD
i feel like i'm watching dan go past a mental event horizon
WHERE IS MY HESGHOG AND SPACESUIT WOMEN KISSING EACH OTHERS DADS FANFIC
Holy shit the delivery of that "Found it!" had me in tears.
watchin while pissin
And may this finally be the breaking point that causes the lovlies to stop submitting gross fanfics. They're not as funny as you think.
I realize it was after a long several days of recording, but I don’t want to keep reading this specific series if it makes Dan want to stop in the future. It WAS funny having him walk out this time though.
just out of curiosity have they read the hat fic/the milk fic etc etc
They have read A milk fic, about Mario, the fetishization of drinking a glass of milk. Which hat fic or milk fic?
this is art
Now *this* is what I subscribed for! Keep the weird shit coming no matter how painful it is to listen to, hahaha
While I'm not really a fan of this particular series of fics, I do really love Fanfiction Storytime. It's the reason I'm a patron and I really don't want to lose this show.
thank you
That was aggressive
I want to cry
Don't stop this show. For every fan this video lost, you guys seemed to have gained ten more. And you know we're the REAL lovelies.
If they keep reading this some people are gonna leave but will be replaced tenfold with the freaks. Can we bring the freaks in I love my freaks
#Myfreaks
You know, when it's so close to a good piece of writing, and yet so cringe-inducingly twee or repetitive or awkwardly phrased, when you know the effort was genuine and that the horrific pillow talk is SINCERE, that is causing me so much more discomfort overall than any body function squick. Petition to take an episode for writing so bad that I feel comfortably superior to it, instead of being reminded of when I reuse words too much, too.
The danish book it’s called “weird story” from 1953 by author Villy Sørensen. And the story im referring to in the book is called “Just a Boyish Prank" or maybe "Merely a Boyish Prank". It’s because there are no translations of the story, but that can easily be done since there are no “you need to be danish to get this” or words or frase that can not be translated. This short story “novel” is the most famous/infamous children story EVER in Denmark, and trust me you are not prepared for it, and if game grumps gets to read it…. It will be everything, the moment.
Thank you for your strength, Arin.
This is the reason I'm apart of the Patreon, the more uncomfortable the story the better as far as I'm concerned! LETS FUCKING GOOOOO
First video I watched when joining the Patreon btw. Fun times 😂
Remember back when these were awkwardly sexual and funny rather than people pissing in each others asses? And when every other episode didn’t seem to constrain SA? Those were good times.
I mean, the second fanfiction storytime literally had forcefemme'd aged-up Elliot from ET dreaming about turning into a giant penis and eating everyone in sight until "it came red cum". So, like, the vibes have been here the whole time.
This title does NOT inspire confidence
This. This is hilarious. Arin power housing through it totally confident in his sexuality with everyone in the room audibly dying inside. My goodness this is the greatest series The Grumps have going.
Me the entire time: HIT ARIN WITH THE HORSE PLEASE I BEG OF YOU
Dan is dying inside
This makes me happy that I hated the series. This makes me hate it more. I'm done. 5 minutes in
okay?? you don't have to watch
Am I allowed to listen to this at work? I don’t think I’m allowed to listen to this at work. Is this worth five dollars? This is definitely worth five dollars.
I listen to it at work. How else would I get through my boring, monotonous day?
Hey guys, big fan, just wanted to let you know that you can kill me now, thanks
When Dan left. I kind of wanted them to stop filming. Then cut to two month later with Dan coming back in. Dan asking what they are going to read today. Then Arin immediately picking right back up where they left off.
that would've been so funny
I don’t think I’ve ever seen Dan so silent and disappointed
Thanks, I hate it 🙂 I can’t believe Dan actually walked out 🤣
I leaned that…. I wish I was dead :D (in pee)
Arin saying; “cum inside me!” Will be clipped and used later.
Dan’s poor little face at 17:01
People getting angry this is better written than the others bc they don’t have the kink and or aren’t in the fandom is so fucking funny to me
Hope everyone enjoyed this final episode of Fan Fic Story Time 👍🏻
This episode alone is worth the price of admission.
The flood isn’t enough, send the locusts.
This makes me question if I'm not actually homophobic.
That comment is quite a thinker.
These ones always make me reconsider my subscription im ngl
No more please 😬
I'm dissapointed in you dan.
Y’all ever heard of the dead dove tag? Cause I understand it now
Absolutely feel ya. 😟
Dans look of pure “get me out of here” is sending me 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Peak Patreon content
First thing I watched as a new Patron, REALLY making me rethink things
This is why I pay for Patreon.
Not even three minutes in and we’re elbow deep in it
finally a good audiobook to listen to while working
God these are my favourite episodes y’all have blessed us today
Ummmm let’s fucking go??? I need to hear the Miu one, I miss hearing Dan’s Miu voice
The kink shaming here is crazy 💔💔💔 leave the pissers alone 💔💔💔
Dan needed a herd of comfort horses
Arin, when you get on a plane to fly out to the office you rent where you employee multiple people to film you. Do you ever consider while sitting in that first class seat: "I cant wait to record the lines sit on your cock!"
Being previously aware of this fanfic made this a terrifying notification
I remember reading a couple of the chapters in high school and the one that stuck with me was the chapter with ouma and kirumi…
tf did i just listen to
Shoutout to the person last entry who stated this would be less gross with two of the female characters 😬 ... Here's my hot take - the piss stuff isn't so bad compared to the cringe of in-game lore tie ins. The series is SO juvenile edgelord coded that a fanfic of it feels weirder from the start than any Mario or Sonic.. or Shrek.
Frankly, I'm just quite confused about the dynamic between Kokichi and Suichi
Opposites attract. I was worried when Suochi started thinking he could pin it on someone in the trial that he might fuck it all up with Kokochi. But then Arin kept reading....
i subscribed specifically to see this when i saw the post on youtube. it is exactly what i feared it would be - great work everyone
This wasn't even the worst thing they've read. Really hoping the Dan thing was a bit because I only subbed for Fanfiction Story Time
Sonic Highschool was infinitely worse 😂
Arin was so funny in this. Him responding to reactions with listening intently followed by continuing to read got me every time
"What did you learn today, Horse?"
If it upsets Dan, I'm all for watching him squirm.
This show is the only reason I have Patreon. 0% interested in Koichi and Shuichi bed wetting adventures, but 1,000,000% engaged regardless. 10/10 for fun and suffering. I would listen to anything if they read it at this point.
I was starting to wonder why everyone said this was bad. Now I understand. I regret everything.
But at the same time it's great, keep up the great work boys
Oh... A classic.... Hm.
ALSO A LOVELY SUBMITTED THIS KNOWING WE'D HAVE TO LISTEN LMAOOOOOOOO
The fanfic characters are embarrassed, Dan’s embarrassed, I’M embarrassed What did I get myself into
I'll understand if they don't do more of this, and it's not my favorite (I like the ones with crazy typos and stuff more), but I definitely enjoyed Arin's performance and thought it was hilarious. Also some of y'all do act like fictional dudes engaging in a pretty harmless and common fetish is the worst thing that could ever happen. I certainly prefer it to the casual misogyny and sexual violence that often should up in bad fic.
Common!?!
This episode had me laughing uncontrollably 😂
This was…. Wow. I’m feeling such a spectrum of emotions haha And I kinda feel bad for Dan. He clearly wasn’t feeling this at all
Jesus christ
I learnt that I should’ve cancelled my Patreon subscription a loooong time ago
But will you?
I learned that Dan will never emotionally recover from this 😂😂
Haa man 60 more of these im so ready for them
This one made me finally sub to the patreon 🤷
The goddamn electric chair photo, the music, Danny immediately being offended has made my first Patreon purchase something special
So worth it for the "ranTARO" callback
I would like to formally apologize for the mental anguish Dan went through this episode. I actually feel bad 😞
"What did you learn, patrons at home?" (Little timmy voice) i learned that... that Arin and dan's friendship is gonna be in shambles for a loooooooong time... ...also that my operation did not go so well....
this one was fucking hilarious, the vulgarity of it and dan's uncomfortableness just made is so funny
The comments suffering brings me great joy on this particular episode 💛
Listen. You don't gotta like watersports. But damn, if the consenting fictional characters are into it, I'm not gonna be mad. Enjoy your piss, boys. 💛 EDIT: JESUS this comment section is rough. Its fanfic, you turbovirgins, get over it
Yeah, I'm not into this particular kink, but I've been on AO3, and this neither shocks nor offends me. Although I'm with Dan on the constant "my beloveds", it's a bit cloying.
God I’m so glad they read more of this. The first two episodes killed me. Wonderful birthday present. Everyone being so in dismay over it makes it even funnier
I know the content was... a choice, but honestly the episode was really funny
NoooOoOoOOOooo not more of this trash :(
Yeah im gonna unsubscribe
Goodbye, beloved!
I decided to brave the whole thing out. That was, without a doubt, too much and too far. Looking forward to never listening to another chapter from this series again. I know you'll do the right thing.
By the right thing, you must mean spamming submissions for the next chapter, right?
Eesh, why is everyone suddenly so angry about this? I haven't even watched yet... will update my opinion momentarily. UPDATE: 8 minutes in, I think I get it. This is a boring slow build unlike the first two chapters, and the shock value is gone. Personally, I would rather hear the entire catalog of Garfield stories. Whatever you do, don't stop this show! This is the only clunker so far.
Arin is braver than us all for being able to read this in front of people
For real, I won't even read this in front of my cat.
Need to change up, getting stagnant
Lets put this show on hiatus. Gettin really samey and bad
*loud incorrect buzzer*
I will sue for psychological damages if yall read another one of these piss fics. I would literally rather hear the ET story on a loop forever
If I have to listen to another one of these fucking piss stories I will unsubscribe
Am I actually in fucking psychosis? I couldn’t even believe they read it a second time! Am I in the fucking piss equivalent of the twilight zone?
Arin can commit to the bit better than anyone 😂
This is probably the worst time to have been drawing Rantaro
....is this.....is this another piss fic? Wait hold on.....let me get my sippy cup EDIT: ............please.....no more piss fics.
I for one welcome this homoerotic piss boy fan fiction. You need a little despair in your life to appreciate the good in it. I'm gonna pour bleach in my ear.
You know what, I'm gonna do it. I'm gonna kinkshame.
Seeing Dan hold multiple things and then swat the script from Arin and finally have for his long-awaited expedition to Mount Everest was hilarious. 🤣 Which fic is worse? This or the ET and Elliott one? Vote below!
Honestly the ET/Elliott one was worse.
Sigh. Not this again... This isn't bad fiction, it's just a kink you're not into, for fuck's sake.
I'm specifically requesting you to NOT ever read this one again, please...
Also never fucking read from this story ever again for the love of god
They have read some truly wretched stuff on this show, this is the first one Dan has actually left
I mean, it did seem like he had a legit time crunch, so I'm not gonna say that it scared him off.
Oh good lord this is..... holy fucking shit kill me Edit: i really, really, really hate this
I feel like this story is defamation against gay men lmao
I watched this whole thing on my living room tv with headphones besides my wife who doesn't understand a word of english while she had no idea of what I was watching, it felt so wrong on so many levels
my brain must be completely fried because this is not as unhinged as some peoples' reactions make it seem. but maybe i'm spared from the horror because i haven't seen their danganronpa playthroughs???
What an incredible journey to see Dan go from being literally asleep, to incredibly upset, to walking out the door.
You can't get this content anywhere else.
...where am I?
I’m watching these out of order is this the first time Dan has tapped out 😂
Physically, yes. I think he's tapped out spiritually many times 😂
Now I feel really bad for Dan lol, but I don't blame him. This chapter was completely unhinged. The only reason I was able to sit through it is because I was working and my brain was half off. That aside, please don't ever stop doing fanfiction story time. It brings me so much joy hearing y'all read weird stories, even if some of them are worse than others... But hey, that's why I subscribed!
OUGH. GOD NO
Now that I've finally finished the video, I actually DON'T want you to continue this story. I am perfectly content with just leaving it here and never even thinking about it again, which should be a very simple thing to accomplish so long as you don't keep coming back to it on this show. So yea, you can just stop reading it and judging by the other comments on here I think the vast majority of your subscribers would agree with me
Wrong
Why the hell am I paying for this
It's been 2 days, I need to know if you're still paying for this.
Thanks! I hate it!
Wait, Dan. Take me with you, away from this story
My mom passed away a month ago today, so today was pretty heavy. Thanks for that laugh
I'm so sorry for your loss, I hope you're doing well otherwise :/
I mean, I liked it, but like I’m gay so. Arin’s delivery and voice acting made it simply hilarious.
Honestly this one wasn’t bad at all compared to the SpongeBob x squidward one. That one was like being consistently punched in the back of the head.
I'd be pretty mad if he waited until after the orgasm, then asked me again to check, do I want the thing I asked you to do a really crucial thirty seconds or so ago? You know, that thing I have a fucking fetish for, which we established before we got here and then you heard me beg for, do you want that forrealtho? Doesn't even seem like he's playing with him, he's just being dense! Damnit, Ouma! Our descriptions were not as strong, and several times there was blatant repetition of the same flowery phrase close together. We seem to be losing all terms of affection in favour of 'beloved' ad nauseum, and we just can't stop overusing adverbs around here. I still enjoyed this chapter, but unless there's a particularly inventive scenario (kind of partial to 'Holding Contest' or finding out whatever 'You Know The Drill' is. Ike, you have to check now), you could be done with this if y'all want. If this was being written one a week for a year, I guess they can't all be as well executed as Chapter One. EDIT: Okay, last week I was a bit mixed up. I'd assumed that the one asking to get pissed in was also the one who was the fetishist originally. I'd missed that the story is evidently actually about getting someone else into it, because I don't know these character names. Long series are intimidating.
I'm surprised this is the one that got Dan. The Spongebob one still haunts my mind.
I’m literally haunted by that one. Finishing the episode was like getting through a battle.
Made the questionable decision to listen to this while grocery shopping and I’ve never had to try so hard to not cringe in horror in public, 100/10 episode
I've never seen Danganronpa (I think that's what this is from) so this was my first experience 😅
Their playthroughs on youtube are pretty entertaining, but not even close to similar to the completely batshit insane things you see here.
Dan getting so flustered during this is EVERYTHING. Can’t. Stop. Laughing. :D
5 dollars well spent.
Whatever Dan wants to pay to take this off Patreon, I will double it to keep it here. Nothing makes me happier than seeing this role reversal of Dan being Grump and Arin being Not-So-Grump. Also, Arin's voice sounded very similar to his Sonic voice.
I seriously wasn't visually paying attention for a moment; I was listening while playing games on my phone. So when Dan grabbed that trophy onto his lap, out of the corner of my eye all I saw was an AR-15 being pointed at Arin. XD
SAAAAME I was eating pita chips and looked up and almost choked laughing lmo
This better not be another piss fetish fanfic. Edit: FUCK!!!!!
Your comment was mentioned on the newest episode lol (28 minutes in)
I genuinely can’t believe I’m saying this, but how is this one so much worse written than the other ones?
Honestly, I agree. It felt in need of editing for sure. The lack of dialogue tags for a story with a billion characters was a mistake (how is Arin to know if he's doing Protag voice, Girl voice, or Sonic voice?! think of the actors!), the overuse of "my beloved", it felt like it dragged on a bit. I still thoroughly enjoyed watching the boys suffer, but it does feel like the author wasn't on their A game here.
I had to watch this in bits. Why is it so visceral
Dan cuddling his 2nd place trophy and his horsey is amazing XD Nothing makes this tolerable, but the guys always make me laugh!
Jesus Christ, why did I listen to this in its entirety?
THIS is the shit I pay for
This...was a lot lmao
My profile picture is very prevalent for how I feel after listening to the equivalent of Satan pissing in my ears
Just stop, i dont even finish the video, it's not even a bit so it's not funny
Dan, is that you? 😂
FINALLY I’ve been waiting for more from this series of ff
I'm so fucking scared
Showing up for a support comment and heart. I'll be back to watch after dinner with my family. Perfect.
There is this one story from Denmark, a children story. But it’s not a fan-fiction story, but it will be “the” story every one will remember.
To what do you refer?
Pain.
Peter what is this
Honestly shocked it wasn't something worse XD
To be fair, the ET one was still worse
To be fair
Please no more of these
Arin reading this instead of Dan is an entirely different vibe 😭 it's hilarious
Love Dan throwing the water bottle in disgust, opening the progress bar and seeing 18 minutes left
P.T. stood for Pee Talk this whole time… (both make Dan leave the room)
Dan packing up as Arin continued reading is too relatable. I also wish I was dead listening to this. 😅🤣
Game uncs more like it
this was probably the worst video to have made me laugh so damn hard that I pissed myself.. Dan's a real trooper for sitting through this for as long as he did
I figured out what Dan packing and leaving during the reading reminds me of. That guy drinking whisky as his wife packs. Same energy
Oh gooood. Arin's enthusiasm for this reminds me of when I was in Junior High and my best friend found a bunch of trashy Harlequin romance novels and we took turns reading the spicy scenes to each other and giggling our heads off. Except there was like zero piss in those. Arin you fucking freak...
I would like you to please not read this again please
Or do, please
This was still only the second worst you’ve read. I remember Elliot and E.T.
This and the ET store are probably up there for the worst things I've ever heard
Thanks! i hate it! (Jk)
Oh dear lord.
ON THE WALLLLL????
I learned that that's a thing apparently
I understand why you apologized in the description now 😭
*sigh* .....I'm so tired
I miss sonic high school
Let's fucking gooooooo (to the bathroom) 🚻
Thanks, I hate it 😐👍🏻
Ahh, it’s like it never left
Watching this while eating and taking gummies. Will update my condition once I’m done
Kinda worried about you bestie pls confirm if you made it
HOLY SHIT I MUST HAVE REQUESTED THIS HALF A YEAR AGO. I MADE IT MOM AND DAD
Are you okay?
Getting a tattoo rn sure hope I don’t piss
Wait, today is birthday? I think I missed that detail.
...I had such a strong feeling is was going to be another chapter of this
Why did I scream YESSS the minute I saw this notification!🤣
I feel so bad for Dan 😅
YESSSSS!!! THANK YOU!!
the way I opened the app to check and it was posted right as I opened it LOL
