Fan Fiction Story Time September #2 - Sonic High School ch. 21 - 23
It's getting incredibly real.
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This story is something else, man. It's mostly weird, crazy nonsense and even the ridiculous sex stuff is funny. But then it randomly hits you with aggressive homophobia, or racism, or sexual assault. It's so bizarre.
I wish you could sober up just by being kicked in the nuts, that would make life so much easier
All I was able to retain was something about a shiny jew... sssoooo, dan? Cause he doesn't really sweat
very strange that people WANT them to read the rape scene. like?? what do you get out of it? humor?? this show is for fun and laughs. you want them to read that and laugh??
Well its the first week of the month, and you know what that means, I accidently forgot to cancel my patron subscription and get to listen to GameGrumps fan fiction for another month! Let's gooooo!
Dan getting sucker punched by the Bar mitzvah inclusion in the sonic high school fan fiction is so goddamn funny. These stories really are like getting punched in the head by words 😂
Imagine potentially getting triggered by something as ridiculous as Sonic High School. Stick to Brendaniel's reading of this fic, at least he actually reads the whole thing.
My guy it’s a rape scene. Some people respect that it’s a triggering topic and also may not be comfortable reading it themselves.
Baby Knuckles and Knuckles' baby have very specific voices. He is doing it wrong. Knuckles Jr. Sounds like a man, like adult Knuckles, but Baby Knuckles (Knuckles as a baby) talks like a baby. Gotta go back and read it ALL again with this in mind
I just lost my head with ‘Panera’s box’, I was literally eating Panera as that line was read!! 😂😂😂
Yaaa good call on skipping that paragraph ya'll. Even though this is hilarious that paragraph covers a topic very triggering.
I read through the comments a bit I just wanted to reiterate, thank you game grumps for taking into consideration some very serious lines that should not be crossed for entertainment purposes. I like putting these on and getting a good laugh in after a hard day and it's very nice to be here seeing your cool shows with fellow lovelies :3
"Blood diapers" is DIABOLICAL.
Please please I'm praying they'll read the sequel fic that absolutely took me out 😭✌🏻
Im glad they said they were gonna not read that part. I was worried it would just jump cut. Im glad they have some boundaries with these stories :)
The boys read these ridiculous stories because they're so absurd and can find the humor in it for our entertainment. There are some topics that *are not* and *will not* ever be funny, and it's a shame authors want to include them. If they choose to skip a short part or word, they're doing it for their comfort and for others. They don't get paid to do things their uncomfortable with.
While I agree with the sentiment of your comment, the assertion that some topics "are not and will not ever be funny" is absurd. All topics can be funny. This is just true. You just have to be funnier than the topic is dark and/or disturbing. Just becomes more difficult as the topic gets darker.
I can understand why some people might be upset about the censoring on a paid subscription but I think it's worth keeping in mind that Arin and Dan are also human beings with feelings and perhaps they censored what they censored because they themselves were uncomfortable reading it. No matter what amount of money is given to them I think that's totally fair that *they* have boundaries they don't feel comfortable crossing, and I wouldn't dream of forcing them to do such a thing even for paid members.
Seconded!!!! I'm baffled that people are upset with them honestly, it makes me mad on their behalf, because no one should be trying to force someone to do something they're uncomfortable with even if they're paying them; It's not "Take my money and do what I say jester", it's "Here's money because I support your cause as a human, I'll watch what you decide to do because I support you"!!!
Ah yes. When I’m on marowana, I too go to my ex’s house, dolphin dive through his window and beat the ever living shit out of him.
The way the "high school drama is crazy" line keeps coming up is my favorite part
damn i just subscribed to the patreon a few days ago and im already almost done with this series
Where's the next episode? Am I crazy?
I dont wanna stir anything up here, I seriously love you guys and the fanfics yall read are crazy entertaining. But, we literally pay for the extra service to hear you guys read the full stories. And even on here, theres censorship? Whats the point D:
There's some fucked up stuff. Slurs, sexual harassment, etc. Things that cross the line.
"Black Sonic on Drugs" is an awesome band name.
if they don’t finish this i’ll cry.
How bad was the sensored part 😭 like the benchmark for bad has got to be so far down considering everything else that has made it through this fic.
It involved Shadow raping Cream while she was unconscious, I think. I may be remembering it wrong, or not.
I love how this has somehow become the favorite after it’s gone to incredibly dark and dehumanizing places. But Kokichi’s piss fetish? THAT’S too much…
This is becoming so stupid that it’s causing psychic damage. Setting aside the skirting the edge of racism, and casual domestic violence? Why TF would be there a security camera IN THE WOODS?
Trail cam to catch Sonic doing cool shit in the woods lmao
we're almost free from sonic high school
What do you mean "free"? It'll be a great tragedy when this dumpsterfire ends
that amy scene put me in a weird place
the sudden stop of the background music....
And… here…. we…. go…!
the author's command over simile is unmatched
This comment had me choke on my drink. You’re so right.
Starting this fanfic series was truly like opening Panera's Box
I do truly enjoy this story, I think it's the voices that do it for me. But I also understand why people would wanna stop - home invasion/SA is not an epic topic for a fanfic. I'd be pretty satisfied if canonically it ended with Sonic running off the cliff, taking his ball disease to the grave with him. "Ass!" Would be his final word.
The baby stuff was just as bad 👎 😩
Looks like this is going the way of the "Tails Got Trolled" fancomic. Getting so "cool and edgy" that it's kinda not being funny anymore. 🙁
Pro tip…don’t paint your nails while listening to this. I dropped the brush while laughing at the bar mitzvah joke and there is blue nail polish everywhere.
That’s such good advice that I’m definitely going to forget and fuck up my gels later.
I get why you didn't want to read the paragraph about Shadow ravaging Cream's unconscious body, but why did you skip the final two paragraphs which contain nothing offensive and have the actually important plot detail that Tails flies into the room and sees "the situation" and says "It is okay. I know exactly what is going on."
Okay FINE if you think it's cool that I wrote fic then I'll submit it!
Damn. Now I have to go look it
Back in high school in the early 2000s, my AIM name was ZestyLanceBass for about three months due to my hair. Thank you/fuck you for unlocking that memory.
I wish Patreon actually gave me notifications for the fan fictions like the power hours and everything else!🤣
Well now I gotta read the part you took out
it's rape
Ugh yeah the assault on Amy sucked. So would've sexually assaulting Cream, I'm sure. Definitely has the potential to ruin my enjoyment of this...
"Haggard bitches." 😂😂😂
Ok you guys can stop reading now. This shit is trash, feel like the author is being weird just to be weird. Before this chapter it was funny, now not at all. So yeah next fan fic please
Yeah, I just went ahead to read the rest. Nothing interesting in my opinion other than spoilers I obviously won’t say. Stopped being funny. It’s just weird and grotesque.
yea fuck the sonic story
Just imagine if real funerals ended the way this one did. “Ashes to ashes, dust to dust. Okay, here goes.” THUNK!
The silence at 4:47 was so loud lmao
Honestly kinda wondering if this story is starting to go....well, I guess it was going too far a long time ago. But somewhere in between the violence against Amy and, like, the rape scene it just feels... I mean, there's only so far "it's just some stupid kid on the internet" will get you before it's kinda your fault for reading it out loud, right? I dunno, still conflicted, kinda wonder if that makes me a horrible person, kinda getting tired of asking myself that question :/
Just remember this critical detail before you judge them: Arin or Dan literally had ZERO idea that these kind of moments were gonna be in this story. But the people who submitted this fanfic did. Either way, I don't think there's anything wrong with skipping those parts and laughing at the rest of the fanfic.
I did you all a favor and checked what he wouldn’t read, basically shadow….finished the deed while cream was knocked out, hence the ghosts
"Hence"..? How does any of that explain GHOSTS coming out of his penis??
This story gives me gifted, sheltered child energy; clearly the author is intelligent, but their grasp on reality and the way they view situations is so incredibly bizarre I just cannot fathom it being an intentional artistic choice made by an adult, it's so genuine
If I crash my car while listening to this I hope my radio doesn’t survive because HOW am I going to explain this shit while they cut me out of the wreckage?!?!?
I'm probably in the minority here, but could we get some stories that aren't poorly-written hardcore porn? I'm not saying get rid of them completely, but I'd like a little variety, and I know firsthand that there are plenty of different ways to ruin a fan fic.
I suppose you could submit one
This author works in simile like some artists use oil or marble. A true master.
They are my favourite part by far.
Arin New haircut giving NSP-6969 villain role vibes 😂
Nooooo! I don't want this story to end! It's too weird!!!!
Absolute. Fucking. CINEMA.
Crazy stuff happens to you when you're black. 🤷🏾♂️
i want to know what was so bad that they didn't want to read it but i am afraid to put this in my Google search history
He knocks her out, and then continues what he was doing
I gotta say, when the simile started 'like a Jewish person', I was quite frankly relieved it only ended with Bar Mitzvah misinformation.
Bar Mitz-information?
I want a conga line of being sad at my funeral too 😭
TBH, the smilies in this story are off the chain
This has been my favorite thing ive watched this week and Skate came out
Love that skate slaps also love the luz pf pic
I had literally just taken a giant gulp of my ice tea when he read the part about the pregnant penis looking like an anaconda eating lunch at subway... Oh boy that was a struggle for me 🤣
dan hiding beneath the skinned dinosaur is the only comfort i have during this truly terrible 38 minutes and 40 seconds
Homer wishes he could make similes of such beauty and pathos as these.
I think they meant to describe Shadow's junk as "turgid" and not torrid....
Now I have to Google this and read what Arin refused to lol
I really wish they’d read it all tbh we are paying for this 🤣
... right... ... the disease, or whatever... 😐😐😐😑🪦
Man, the author REALLY likes metaphors
I can’t get over Sonic watching videos of cigarettes and knives holy shit
George bush clip was brilliant
”Looking at videos of cigarettes and knives”
This story is rated M for MATURE content...which is exactly why it takes place in a setting where the majority of its characters aren't legal adults until around graduation, of course 💀
New NSP video AND fan fic story time. What a great gift on a Friday
Oh perfect, always when I'm well hydrated...
here before it got real
Today we have been blessed, my friends.
Oh GOD what fresh hell awaits me
I came as quick as I could No not like that
I didn't expect that to happen