Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 10
This time, more My Immortal, a fan fiction about a shipping incident, and a fan fiction about a shipping incident. That's a joke you'll understand after you watch the episode!
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StrangeAeons made a video where she recreated some of the most iconic outfits (some from scratch)!!
HE RIPPED HIS DICK OFF??
Reading these comments, I'm starting to think a lot of you might be Prepz.
Going through these in chronological order, and this has to be the greatest one yet
The first story was uncomfortable during my carpool this morning
Who is Crab 😭
Unironically gasped in shock at the reveal of the incident being a dream of a memory
Draco, Ebony and Vampire are just the worst polycule in the world lmao
The evergiven story was legit good wich made it absolutely hilarious to me. I love it when absolute talent is used to create something nonsensical
The second story sounds like it was the kind of thing written on a dare or in a game of chicken with someone else in fandom. my best friend was infamous in a small fandom for doing this kind of monkey's paw writing for fic prompts. incidentally one of them was also a steve and bucky fic lol
My Immortal was relentless this time 😭 "Your alzheimer's is dangerous" killed me
“Okay bitch.” I said sadly Dumbledumb asked calmly.
The best part is the chain reaction. Danny breaks, arin breaks, we break, that makes people watching with us break. And it's utterly spellbinding to witness.
"You've never had your dead robot boyfriend show up and rip your dick off?" - Arin 2025
Okay, I also haven't read up to this point in My Immortal, and I am CRYINGGGGGGUH.
This is my 5th/6th rewatch and only just clocked that Tara put Crabbe and Goyle as Fred and George in this
This episode has everything. Highly researched ABO Boat/Canal, 'I Wanna shit next to her', heroin, a guy gets his dick ripped off, Dumbledumb. Best combination of fics imaginable. 10/10.
The character ref sheet is stunning lol
that stucky fic new bottom surgery dropped
I always thought it was forced feminization, which is such a horrifically dire fetish. Like, forced body mod/amputation shit.
I'd love an edit of My Immortal where the words appear on screen as written while Dan reads, like an oldschool lyric video.
What is Arin wearing???
Every time I read or listen to someone reading My Immortal I catch a new line that just completely takes me out. This time it’s “he converted to stanism.”
... ABO nautical fanfiction... now ive seen it all 🤣
I’m rewatching all of fanfiction story time and. Oh god I fucking forgot. I forgot about this one
Dan's facial expressions make these episodes for me lmao. absolutely priceless
What the FUCK does "Frenching Passively" MEan Ebony!? I dont care which one of the people who claims to be her is the real one, just explain, PLEASE
someone mixed up passionate and passive oopsie woopsie doopsie
“Bucky tried sticking it back on with force.” I want you to know I will never get over this.
Bro Arin is dressed for the occasion! Just like Hagrid!
they asked so fucking nicely for me to fucking pay them, i'm so happy to do so. and im also loving the swearing keep it ass up boys
The number of times I've rewatched Dan wheezing over Dumbledumb is, in itself, dumbledumb. 🧙♂️
I’m very confused about the first story….
I need a compilation of Dan reading every My immortal chapter
I’ve read a lot of Omegaverse fanfiction, I’ve never seen anything quite like EvergivenxSuez Canal
27:43 "Darth valar said evilly" I can't believe they didn't comment on volzemord being a sith as well
we have a fanfic based on the seuz canal incident. this is rich. OMG, all the grammatical errors in this part of my immortal are killing me.
https://static.wikia.nocookie.net/myimmortal/images/0/0f/Enoby-0.png/revision/latest?cb=20190921224731 enjoy
Just came back to this a year later, and the Suez Canal story still holds up.
The suez canal one being an omegaverse fic as well punched me right in the mouth lmaooooo
"YOU'RE a cunt." "Hahaha. Nice."
"He took out a heroine cabaret and spiked it. And gave it to me - to spork. She started to fly the car into a tree." Whhhat..?
The double twist in the Cap x Bucky fanfic was something out of an M. Night movie lmao
I was NOT ready for omegaverse Evergiven/Suez Canal.
The one-two-three punch of "you fucking bustard. I want to shit next to her!" "No I do!" shouted.
im so hard
The Stucky fic was actually kinda nice until Cap's dick got ripped off. 😭 Also "Dumbledumb" destroyed me
What do you mean it was nice 😂
Truly cannot believe he ripped off Captin Amernica’s peanits
I had to unsubscribe to the patreon for a few months but I've come back and started relistening to these (mostly to re catch-up on My Immortal) and I had pleasantly forgotten about that Stucky one, until now... By the way you CAN reattach a penis, IYKYK.
"They are all into Stanism" took me TF out. I just imagine them all being hella fans of Ebony
To quote Firefly: "I'll be in my bunk"
The way Tara describes outfits in My Immortal is eerily similar to the way that Patrick Bateman describes outfits in American Psycho. I can't tell if this is intentional...
As an Australian I am beyond pleased with the use of the word cunt. :)
As an American, I'm pretty partial to it too lol
I literally laughed so hard I made myself ill
My Immortal may be the best piece of fiction ever written!!!
Best $5 I’ve spent in a looooooong time. Arin was beaten into submission this session lmao
I was wondering how long it'd take them to reach the Omegaverse
She definitely accident wrote Darth Vader when she was talking about Voldemort at one point
My Immortal just wears you down until you eventually snap... like the teacher!
“I hate that this is pretty beautifully written.” Yet another Dan gem.
"...and a fan fiction about a shipping incident." I see what you did there...
Arin absolutely broke and it's the funniest fucking thing I've ever heard 😂
the captain america one was so normal for so long that i was lulled into a false sense of security and when it happened it genuinely gave me whiplash
I figured out why these very sexual (gay) fanfics make Dan so uncomfortable... the characters aren't furry enough!
The laughter was really contagious on this one! I laughed more at them cracking up than the actual stories!🤣
I... Was not expecting THAT type of sudden turn in the Captain America one...😅
anyone know where to find the captain america one i need to show a friend who would find it hilarious
Dan: the professional brand-hiding cup hold Arin: I AM EATING LUCKY CHARMS
"Hand me my immortal, I need a palate cleanser" has to be the funniest thing I've heard in a while.
Omg "that happened months ago"
The captain America one was actually really good 🔥. Also seeing Arin absolutely crumble under the weight of laughter and kicking his lil legs was so relatable, i couldn't breathe.
Listening to this at work and trying to keep a straight face while I work is an impossible task. I can't 😭
Aaah, the return of "frenching passively"
My favourite "My immortal" trope is "turns out their real parents were vampires"
And they killed themselves 😵
Ngl, I was not expecting ABO Suez Canal
I NEED someone to make this into a show or something, this fucking amazing!
The back-to-back-to-back assault of “Dumbledumb,” “I wanna shit next to her!” and “ ‘No, I do!’ shouted.” is stronger than any man
Followed by all that buildup to “VOLZEMOURT!” And then “….Eboby, thou hast failed”
The "I want to shit next to her" bit is really great to listen to when you've been having a bad day because Jesus that has never failed to make me laugh lol.
"You guys making martinis in there?"
This is fucking magical, I haven’t laughed this hard in years
“You fucking bustard, I wanna shit next to her”
I just realized I’m paying like, $5 a month to hear Dan and Arin read me porn and idk how to feel about that 😂😂😂
I’ve listened to 30 more seconds and I CHANGED MY MIND THIS ISNT PORN WHATS HAPPENING
Best 5$ I ever spent to see both of you weeping over your first reading of My Immortal! I assure you this gift keeps on giving. This is the kind of genius humor that is still funny even after reading it 100 times.
My therapist really likes Harry Potter. We were talking about something from the movies and she couldn't remember Dolores Umbridge. I was proud to say I remembered because of how consistently it was misspelled in this chapter.
PLEASE do a my immortal special in like some kinda gothified cosplay
Best five bucks I've ever spent.
NeVER FORGET!!!! 🇺🇸
This month's patreon FFST will be number 11. September.... 11
They should read “Harry Potter and the tumbling towers” it’s sadly exactly what you think it is
We need more of these episodes. 😂 I couldn't stop laughing at this.
Please i am begging you read more garfield effect it gets so "so bad it's good"
more of these 30min+ ones
Omg their first yuri…
Honestly this series alone makes the Patreon worth it
Well. Boats and Canals fucking was not on my bingo card for 2024
i'm so glad i joined patreon ftis month
I don't think I've ever seen arin laugh that hard
If you want to see someone make/wear Ebony's outfits, check out Strange Æons on YouTube! She has a video called Recreating The Fashion Of My Immortal where she recreated some of Ebony's outfits and it's great, would recommend watching
Literally trying to get ready for work and I can't when there's tears on my face
I literally cannot drink my coffee while listening to this
I'm so glad that this series exists
With all the typos, My Immortal could be split up into multiple different versions. And they'd all make as much sense as what was originally intended. That's some serious skill.
Honored to be the 420th like. Dumbledumb approved
When y'all finish My Immortal, PLEASE do a supercut of the entire story!
Pls x2
I CANNOT believe there's omegaverse boat smut.
The cap/bucky fic had me confused for a second bc it was fine ,not my taste but it’s just a fic — and now i will never be able to unhear this fic
"This is a perfectly normal Cap/Bucky fic, why are they reading it?" I thought before the universe showed me why they chose to read it
random Ville Valo mention lol
After the boat one I thought “there’s no way this next one could be weirder”
I. COULD NOT believe my ears
I haven't laughed this hard in weeks
What a wholesome horny boat story
I NEED a link to the Stucky fic so I can send it to my friend and get their reaction
I popped a FUCKING blood vessel in my eye laughing at this 😆
I CANNOT BELIEVE YALL ACTUALLY READ THE SUEZ ONE. WESLEY AND I WERE CONTEMPLATING WHAT TO SEND IN FOR *HOURS* BEFORE DECIDING ON THAT ONE. i’m glad you got a kick out of it at least, sorry for the trauma it may have caused 😭
if they don't make a supercut video that's just all of my immortal I will be terribly distraught
I just wanna say fangs 4 these. I've watched all uploads two times, and laughed equally hard both. Just pure joy and good vibes (except to ep2...)
We speak not of Komakla and Elliot
Literally said “Steve wouldn’t do that, that’s so out of character” out loud during the stucky fanfic, I think I’m too invested in this lmao (edit: WOAH THIS TOOK A TURN, OKAY THEN)
I will be consumed with emptiness until another episode comes out 😂
I would 100% pay cash money for a list shirt of all the ways dumbledore gets spelled wrong.
Dumbledork is my favorite.
Man these half hour videos last me about two weeks, can never make it 5 minutes in till I'm crawling the ceiling over here.
You're telling me you've never spiked a sporked heroine cabaret before?
You spork it, I thought?? Am I doing it wrong?
That Stucky went in a direction I was NOT expecting...
i am once again asking for bimonthly fanfiction story times i will pay more money
Laughing into tears, I can't wait for the next one
22:18 close captions auto-generated, the last line is "okay her own name" and I thought it was gonna be "okay hermione" but spelled the my immortal way, forgetting she renamed hermione
Fangs 4 da storytime u preps
HE SAID THE COCK WORD!!!!!!!!!!
The Dumbledore typos will never not be funny
Those first two stories really threw me for a loop, like how are these the best written two we've had that haven't been My Immortal and they're about a boat and two Marvel characters? Bless you two for reading more My Immortal, it just gets better and better, I was DYING. Thanks (or fangs) to whoever went and found the outfit drawings lmao, you rock and are not a prep!!1!
Don't lie Dan, you always have a blanket to hide that chub these tales give you
“Oh god this is niche!” Birches love niches! 😚👌
Omegaverse is a blight on fiction
The Suez Canal one was flippin wild.
I’ll be honest, while listening to My Immortal I gradually lose the will to live, and then the moment it’s over I crave more.
I want Danny and Arin, and only Danny and Arin, to bring back "preps" as an insult
This was tops the best episode. Also I'm begging you to compile every My Immortal reading into one video when it's all done.
Not only does the author of My Immortal detonate basic grammar, spelling & proper usage of adjectives to advance her Hot Topic Mary Sue fever dream, but this also might be the first time she didn't even include the name of a character who's speaking a line of dialogue. This is the legacy the incredibly successful Harry Potter franchise truly deserves
JKR is quivering in her phobic boots
“I WANT TO SHIT NEXT TO HER!”
My Immortal really does chip away at your psyche. I couldn't help but join them when they were losing their shit over Dumbledumb 😂😂
Not only is it a fanfic between a boat and a canal, but it's ABO?!?!? Wild
I lost it when the fic referred to Suez as an “omega”. I did NOT expect the ship/canal fic to be omegaverse of all things.
All of Dan's training and years of doing comedy did not prepare him for dumbledumb. I lost it at him losing it, and my cat was upset and meowed about it. Dhut up munkustrap you prep
This was a great episode, I was laughing so hard! 🤣 That Stucky fanfic was such an emotional rollercoaster (even better that it was a fandom that I personally recognized), and the Suez Canal one was one of those moments where I knew, but I also didn't know, what was happening. 🤣
God, just when I think I'll get tired of My Immortal, it keeps being funnier
I love this. Thank you grumps
The freak out at 26:10 is one of my favorite gg moments ever
YOU CAN GET A PAPER BACK VERSION OF MY IMMORTAL ON AMAZON FOR $10 YOU’RE WELCOME!!!!111!!
so fun fact that winter soldier story is actually canon
The scream I scrumpt at the first fic title!
this series has replaced everything else as my bedtime stories Damn Arin really lost it during My Immortal
Villi Valo? She start watching Viva la Bam? lol
Getting to SEE these hysterical laughing fits just makes everything infinitely more funny!
I put this on to listen to while making dinner…I had to stop making dinner because I was crying laughing and almost peed myself
the windows movie maker lyric video was a beautiful touch
8:32 never has a colder chill run down my spine when I know this probable repeat of an arm that ends the person it's on..... and the strategic homeland(er) intervention, enforcement, and logistics division. Now question is if it's Bucky or not lol
I read all the comments beforehand and still lost it at Chapter 23
I somehow did not expect a story about a boat to provocatively use the term "knot" 🫥
I listened to this while I was working and it took every ounce of strength I had to not fall down laughing at Dumbledumb
This is what they're talking about when film snobs talk about the camera being a character
The camera is a character in a lot of old Nintendo games- and it is constantly murdering you
Nice to know there's another Quinn on this Patreon because I definitely don't remember submitting the CapXBucky story (though I totally would have)
"You've never had your dead robot boyfriend show up and rip your dick off?" Please make this a sticker. I WOULD BUY TWO.
the absolute giggledicks these two become when it's My Immortal time
As soon as Arin said the words “robot arm with a mind of its own” I immediately knew it was a Stucky fic
I think Enoby needs to get her eyes checked, that’s a lot of crying blood
i swear i never laugh as hard as when i watch these
"real life shipping incident" AYYYYYY
Once again, this series proves itself to be the absolute best and absolute worst thing on the internet
Is there a word for when a deus ex machina trope gets subverted like that?
I was laughing just as hard as Arin and Dan when Dumbledumb came up 🤣 it had me in tears!
Imagine listening to this while making dinner, because that was me trying not to pee myself
The Suez one, was not only insane, but also a fucking omegaverse! XD
Loooooooooooooooove the fanfics!!!
I wasn’t expecting that second story but I knew exactly where it was going
I had a feeling that the robot arm would tear the dick off, and I stayed and had it to be revealed as true 🙈 Skipped right to my immortal
Wholly expecting them to have to stop at Dumbledumb.
My Immortal readings are my favorite part of a new month now. Thanks Dumbledumb
Ugh this is the best so far I was nearly in tears omfg😭😭dumbledumb... I can't wait till next month ‼️🔥
I’m so in love with you guys reading these. Never stop!!!
If I have to go longer than a month without hearing Danny read My Immortal, I swear to Satan I will slit my wrists! And after that I might do something really crazy!
I don’t even know what is happening in My Immortal anymore but I’m here for it
I don't think I ever did
not gonna lie i was hoping i would get to watch someone on the staff explain A/B/O dynamics to them after that first fic
That stucky fic was something else LMAOOO
Gosh, All this time Dan has really held onto his composure while reading My Immortal, and now Dumbledumb broke him 😂😂😂 God, everytime Arin just explodes into writhing laughter fills me with so much joy.
"...your former best friend you thought was dead..." necrophilia plot twist...? "..especially when he has a robot arm with a mind of its own." *freaky* necrophilia plot twist...?? "SHIELD was compromised-" OH MY GOD NO
was anyone else really hoping the second fic would be a postgame komahina fic 😪…
Their laughs are so contagious. 😄
I haven't clicked anything so fast
Never in my life did I think I'd hear an ABO fic about the Suez Canal blockage but here I am.
We’re so back
Hey that stucky fic sounds like a regular fic to me- hoH MY GOD
my favorite thing about these is before the fan fictions go crazy and dan is so sincerely listening to the stories
Dan don't cover your lower half up with the blanket with one hand underneath 😂 No live gooning!
The shriek I shrumped when I saw this notification. I’m so excited!
Based on the description I’m gonna guess they’re reading fanfic about that Evergreen ship getting stuck in the Suez Canal.
Is there a way I can watch this on a chromecast easily?
time for gooning