Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 9
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The gentle piano is peak.
I get this impression that this author was the type of girl who would suddenly stop speaking to you and pout trying to get you to ask her why.
As a writer, I find these stories inspirational. Who am I to say my writing isn't good enough to share? If these people can do it, so can I.
“she writes about clothes the way george r. r. martin writes about food” will be burned into my memory forever
they sure make stock footage of anything huh
I love how in my immortal everyone who turns out to be a vampire 'converts' to goth automatically and switches to slytherin without a second thought 🤣🤣🤣
The Goofy fic made me want to end it all, but My Immortal then gave me the will to live again. In other words, it brought me back to life...
Why does Arin's Pete sound like Homer?
The chocolate croissant was HEINOUS😭😭😭😭😭
ABSOLUTELY DIABOLICAL
Whoever THE FUCK picks these stock videos has traumatized me. I need to go to my Grumps anonymous meeting now.
Arin laughing so hard he’s kicking his feet during my immortal was worth the trauma of that goofy fan fic
Yaknow, gotta say, i have to appreciate the goofy pete fic. Its a romance with two older men, ones plus sized. Theres some real honesty there and i think its sweet.
Grow up as a my immortal kid, live long enough to become a heartfelt queer
I was drinking my apple juice when Dan read the scene where Enoby (honorable misspelling) walked in on Snap and Loopin (also honorable misspelling) and thought Dan said, "snart" instead of "snarked" and I just about choked.
I suspect the person doing the Goofy story got so horny that their lizard brain kicked in an obliterated all their spelling and sentence structure knowledge. It gets noticeably worse anytime Goofy and Pete are in a scene. I wonder if they re-read the story and kept having the same effect or if they posted it immediately after the first draft. Like Dan said, there are some sentences that are impossible to understand.
That’s beautiful kind of
Am I the only one who noticed the Immortal writer made Filch the cat and 'Mr. Norris' the caretaker?
"I was so turned on. I love sensitive bi guys"
Episode 9 and the foundation is definitely crumbling
Why is it ... I hear how this guy 'wanted to write this since forever' (in first episode) and on this one, he's so exhausted that he wants to throw it in on writing long things. And, uh, it's not good. In fact, I dare to say that I could write this poorly without getting painfully tired, if I had that considerable 'just write bad' barrier gone (It does take a lot of work to get around that, tho). Why does his great struggle in making awkward art Comfort me? Because ... if I whip out something I've waited so long to do that I feel guilty about it, and try until I'm tired, and it's like THIS BAD, what if I posted it anyway? He did. It wasn't good, but we clearly found a way to enjoy it.
I need the soundbite of Arin reading "It's called masturbating." As Goofy.
I often need the soundbites of this show. Let's home they're looking for B-Roll for Patreon trailers. Does YT not like the word 'masturbating'?
Okay, on my third listening of My Immortal, it is really annoying me that this girl doesn't tell me what Linkin Park song she's talking about! Do you even know them well enough to say? Why do you not care? I so would have called this girl (assumptions) a lame bad goth and a borderline poser back in the day. An actual Linkin Park song I'd fuck to doesn't come to mind easily. I detoured to a Bennington (RIP) solo project; he closed Dead by Sunrise 1 Out of the Ashes with a cool, relaxing track with a few eerie lyrics about being too close, In The Darkness. That's the best off the top of my head.
Leave Out All The Rest could work
"... It was Goofys Dick." Holy shit dude im dyin over here
When Dan grabbed the blanket, I grabbed mine, too. But I tucked it under the bottom of my glasses so I could protect all of me as I listened to this and did my Creative Writing Midterm. It is near IMPOSSIBLE to focus on writing an original concept while listening to Arin voice-sex himself as Peter and Goofy. Goddamn.
I really needed My Immortal as a chaser after what I had to listen too...
THE VIDEO OF THE SPLITTING OF THE DOUGH WAS F O U L.
God, we all deserve combat pay for suffering through that goofy fic. All of us, including Arin and Dan and everyone in that room.
The fucking imagery during the goofy fic was the worst part omg
"He was depressed, not about his ex-wife and daughter, but something more serious." His daughter KILLED HERSELF in this story bro.
"It feels like I'm having a stroke" - Arin So are we...
I’ve supposedly watched this before, but my mind must have blocked out the entire Goofy story….
The amount of times I had to pause during the goofy fic just to take a deep breath to keep pushing through this is unreal.
That was *RUFF!*
If I had a nickel for every time that Arin qualified that a line was read "as written" then I'd almost be able to buy something from a vending machine just from this one reading session.
How many times can they have the same concert?
about as many times it can be that prep voldy in desguise
Dan praying in his chair through the goofy fic sent me
My immortal legit makes me feel like I’m losing brain cells.
I retreated into myself at that goofy fic…
Shaking it off usually only makes my elections bigger... just saying 😏
Oh gosh, actually had to skip the goofy one. Too much cringe lol.
That “rough cheeks” edit was criminal 😭😂😂
My immortal really is in a league of its own
The fucking bread when Goofy pulled Pete's "rough cheeks" 🫣😳😳
i think my favorite part about the goofy fic is that the author is clearly in high school and has no idea how college works (there's no periods, bell, or tardy slips lol)
If anyone was wondering, arin said "I'm getting married" in Japanese when he opened the book
I always forget that Ike is there for all of thisXD
Since when is Arin SO uncomfortable on camera?? Makes ME nervous.
Arin: Leaning tower of cheese-a! Captions: Leading Tower of Jizz!
Paused at 20:22 for something and the pain on Dan's face is also how I feel
Dan’s hands clasped in prayer is sending me 🤣🤣🤣
that author's note about sex scenes being hard to write is so real. i can make robots fight for hours but having them put their robodicks in each other really tires you out
Arin is so good at doing these voices, it's like I'm really there
Insane that someone got "Pauly Shore" from "leaning tower of cheese-a" lol.
There is something so incredibly forbidden about the Goofy voice acting 🤣
She literally went from cheating on Draco with Harry, to accusing Draco of cheating on her with Harry (despite KNOWING he never did) in a span of like 5 seconds. She wasn't even deflecting, she didn't even acknowledge she was cheating on him. The double standard is baffling
Dans ability to read utter nonsense with complete sincerity is incredible.
I laughed so hard I choked on my chocolate then cried, my cheeks hurt so much. My immortal is literal gold.
What a horrible day to understand english
STOP FLAMMING U PREPz
Watching this one by candle light
I joined Patreon after the little fan fiction teaser on the channel and this is the best $5 I have ever spent.
This is why I joined your Patreon finally. The fanfics, been watching these back to back Started at ep one and now I’m here, think I might get thought the rest today. We’ll see! Wish you guys did more of these. The world is full of fanfics. You’ll never run out, of that I can assure you also nice to see some body positivity in the goofy story. Dans face is hilarious.
"She writes about clothes the way George R.R. Martin writes about food." Omg that's soooooo legit. Also...Winds of Winter when??
@12:27 why would you do this to me
I so badly want the goofy story to get animated in the old egoraptor awesome cartoons style
Why does Arin's Pete voice sound like Plankton??? 😂
I was getting Homer vibes
arin looked too fuckin happy reading the goofy one hahahah
UM was really freaked out to sit down to watch this with my bowl of lucky charms to then SEE A BOX OF THEM CHILLIN WITH THE BOYS
Binging these are such a treat, also my brain hurts
Well anyway!!!
ah yes, legally distinct Mr. Filch and Mrs. Norris: Mr. Norris and Filch the Cat
*Filth the Cat
Why is Arin looking at me like I'M the one reading it
I constantly forget how good of a voice actor Arin is. That was a PITCH perfect impression of Goofy propositioning Pete, and now I need to go sit and stare at the wall for a while.
Im astonished by Arin’s Bobby impression with the LeAnInG tOwEr oF cHeEsEuH
I've heard these laughing fits for so many years, it's a ton of fun to get to see them now. :)
Tardy slips in collâge - classic
"invincibility coke"
Thank CHRIST for the My Immortal pallet cleanser 😂
Whoever decided the chocolate croissant thing was a good idea needs to pay for my therapy bills please
I've never been so jump scared by pastry
despite everything, im the most shocked by the fact goofy is a top (fanon usually doesnt let this happen (i hate that i know that))
I needed a minute after “Boulevard of Borken Dreams” 😂
The Goofy story made me so uncomfortable, but I just couldn't stop listening to it. It was like watching a car crash: you just can't look away.
Nothing can be worse than the E.T episode...
master has presented Dobby with a show.
It's funny, I found game grumps through a fan fic reading channel. Finally it all comes full circle.
The hyucking chocolate croissant edit just made me sit up straight with how uncomfortable yet hilariously used it was.
Need more of this in my life
ah yes my favorite Green Day song "Boulevard of Borken Dreams"
Here's the fabled demobaza coat
Cardigan: owl union? That the closest one I could find on the website
"maccin on his girl" am i in 2004
Oh Dan. All of the fics have "DON'T COME IN, MOM" energy. Also I hate to break it to you but there is a very high chance every single one was written by a girl, ESPECIALLY the gay sex ones.
I’ve been laughing so hard I can’t feel my spine
I just read today that Goofy's full name is George Geef. Not Goof but Geef. Apparently he is not a dog either. He is a cow.
I love that My Immortal will setup the most batshit insane scenarios, and then say "well anyways" and transition to something entirely unrelated and never talk about it again.
god My Immortal just wears me down. I have a headache from laughing. Boulevard of Borken Dreams.
I wish we got this every week instead of month, it’s SO good. I love how she explains her outfit to a T and then when it gets to the plot she’s like anyway whatever so dumbleydore asked me about my purse and I slit my wrists 😂 You can also tell her editor is letting more and more slip by because it’s hilarious
The goofy story makes me wish for aphantasia
I need that blanket
The fact that Pete sounds like Homer doesn't help things...
That FUUUUUUUCK by Arin before he started reading was so visceral. Really wild to be gooning and hear that
“I asked in a gothic way” and “run out of the place in a suicidal way” is so funny, dis writer is rly gud!!1!
Serious question why aren't Arin's toes out?
I'm going to need you to stop tickling my balls and do chapter 6 and 7 of Sonic High School
They're just blowing air at them. Cold- cold air to turn them blue.
Oh my god ‘Mr Norris’ fucking killed me
My only real problem with My Immortal is the Remus Lupin slander lmao these videos are the highlight of my month
So true, I don't fw the franchise anymore, but he was my very first blorbo ever
The visuals are fucked up... but hilarious...
Six dudes in a room reading Goofy x Pete smut sounds like a dream come true.
My Immortal has me in tears. My favorite part about the writing is when Ebony is being edgy/rebellious everyone else is timid and sensitive until it benefits her seconds later for them to be rebellious and then back again. The violent swings between how she wants to be portrayed every few seconds is fucking brilliant to me😂
Fun fact: the writer got Filch and Mr(s) Norris, his cat, switched around. So now all I can imagine is a little hairy cat waving a flashlight around while yelling at invincible horny teenagers while a greasy man next to him meows.
Thank you. I don't know a lot about HP, but I was very confused why the cat was named Filch. I thought the author meant filth
The blonde girl in Goofy Movie was Lisa, amateur writers, smh Pauly Shore was Bobby, jeez, Boody, oof...
Boulevard of Borken Dreams truly sent me.
The typos in the Goofy/Pete sex scene made me think the author was getting way too eager to start the hotness and just sped through the typing.
My daughter wanted to watch Mickey Mouse club house today… My wife and I watched this last night… I can’t fucking hear Goofy without hearing this anymore. GD.
You may hate this Dan but we're loving it, even more so because you hate it
Pauly Shore’s character is Bobby, not Bodie.
i love the lucky charms down in the lower right corner during all of this
im sorry pete having no idea how sex works even after two kids is not very believable. come on game designers. what were they thinking?!
I did this to myself. I paid to hear Goofy x Pete erotic fanfiction.
Jeez, I wish she'd leave Billie Joe out of her story. He's probably one of the least goth people out there. Any true Green Day fan knows he's a total goober who doesn't ever take himself too seriously. I don't know anything about Gerard Way or the other guy mentioned, so can't speak to them, but Billie's a lovable dork. I gotta say, though, "Boulevard or Borken Dreams" is pretty hilarious.
OMFG STAHP FLAMIN
i love how the goofy/pete fic is so clearly written by a kid who has no idea how college works. a bell to signal the next class? in college? it is genuinely quite endearing.
10:00 I'm sorry... it wasn't because of his wife leaving him and his daughter's SUICUDE, but something "more important" ?!?! Based on the rest of the chapter he probably means his self-esteem, which is important, but not really on the level of half your life being ruined! Trauma? Naaw, he just wishes he weren't fat 😭
I mean what can I say I eat this shit up so hard
This is genuinely the funniest content… not just the fanfic, but A&D’s reactions to it… it’s truly unparalleled!
Legitimately in pain from laughing so much
This is what I needed today. This is why our independence was fought for
god, 15:05 is a legendary sequence. the quick arinism, the way he reads the line and that absolutely treacherous visual from fucking nowhere killed me
Just two bros, fuckin’ in a hot tub. 10/10 I don’t know anything about MCR but apparently it’s like the opening of blade with the amount of wrist slitting going on.
God bless these videos
In front of Dobby?! Now that's messed up.
Whoever put in that stock video of a chocolate filled bread needs to be promoted and then immediately fired
The GoofyxPete story had me laughing so hard I was crying
Throwing a wound is a very effective tactic
First Gerard now Billie Joe...Ebony just sees blue eyes wherever she wants to i guess lmao
THE RETURN I HAVE BEEN BEGGING FOR ON EVERY SINGLE FANFIC PATREON EPISODE!!!! "Is that canon?" NO, SHE COMMITTED SUICIDE IN THIS FIC AND I NEED TO SEE THIS THROUGH TO THE END SIMPLY TO SEE IF THAT IS EVER ELABORATED ON BC ITS INSANE. So disappointed that its been so long between chapters that the grumps forgot this loony detail, but so happy we're back in goofypetetown baybee!
i kept wondering, "are they in a public hottub?"
they ARE OH MY GOD YOURE RIGHT
i still think they need to get one of the fancy bound volumes of my immortal
Visual editor needs a raise. 10/10
I absolutely love that Dan is under their own merch blanket. Something about that just cracked me up.
shoutout to the editor for adding the stock footage of the chocolate filled bread. that was cursed!
I hope that their book gets weirder and weirder every episode, till eventually Dan is reading off a stone tablet or some shit.
i really hope one of these days they read some legendary fic out of a bible
My Immortal is my guilty pleasure and I keep coming back to this video to giggle
This is definitely two stories
It's my birthday next month. I can't wait to hear them read for my birthday.
Can I double my Patreon pledge to get double the fanfic???
This is a wonderful way to start each month 🥰
Jesus the chocolate crossiant visual at 12:30 😳😬😆
“She writes about clothes the way George RR Martin writes about food” absolutely sent me
my uni professor started reading us a snippet of my immortal in class as a bit the other day and now i’m convinced i’ll never be able to escape that fic
We gotta know how that Goofy x Pete story ends! 😂
I had the best night's sleep after falling asleep to this
Ok but why am I genuinely invested
Arin pookie when are we getting those water bottles back in stock on game grumps.com/merch
"The castle where Drukula was flimed" is my next tattoo. Probably gonna be a tramp stamp.
When you get a stroke from reading something.
hehehe they said my name during the goofy story
Mr. Norris and Filth is a great character swap
Arin being totally convinced Bobby's name is 'Bodee' is killing me, lol...
Also i’ve seen people like take fanfiction and print it out and then bind it into books…. I need to do that with my immortal.
I’m fucking CRYYYYING at the part in my immortal when she’s in the bathroom smoking pot and Hagrid out of fucking nowhere and her reaction is to look at him and say “You gave me a fucking shock!!!” And throw her pot on the floor dramatically 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 that moment really deserved more attention
i want dans blankie so bad
My brother overheard the Goofy/Pete fanfic and had to ask what in the fuck I was watching. I told him the truth. Porn 🤣🤣🤣🤣
The image of the bread being torn apart during the goofy fic made me choke on my soup
That edit at 12:26 was so cursed, thanks for that
As shoddily written as the Goofy/Pete story is, it's actually kinda nice to see some surprisingly deftly handled themes of body positivity thrown in against the public exhibitionism & deteriorating grammar
"I am in no way fat shaming"
YAY YIPPEE YAHOO bedtime stories!!! perfect pick me up at the end of my day :)
I don't need any more fics, I just need the next episode to be like an hour long My Immortal dedicated episode for the remaining chapters! 😂
I'm actually getting tired of My Immortal, I feel like it's being too drawn out. 😅 So having an extra long episode dedicated to finishing the rest of My Immortal might be a great idea, because then they'll have more time to focus on other fics!
I love these! My Immortal is too good to be true every time!
Boulevard of Borken Dreams is a fucking FANTASTIC line, I’m losing it
I need that on a T-shirt! 😂
Some people should not be allowed to create
I can feel Walt Disney rolling in his grave as they're reading this
I'm ready to get so hard
Mr. Noris and Filch the cat is fucking killing me
The stock footage during the Goofy & Pete story was on another level
aight whoever added that b-roll at 15:15 is so diabolical LMAOOOO
please start doing two monthly fanfiction story times. i beg of you.
Boulevard of Borkin Dreams fucking DESTROYED me
you guys are great but patreon is such a shit platform the videos are barely watchable
What do you mean??
I like how infinitely happier Dan is when they’re reading My Immortal as opposed to the Goofy and Pete story lol.
Homophones will not be tolerated, fuck off you preps 😤
Their band 😤
I SCREAMED WHEN THE NOTIFICATION DROPPED LETS FUCKING GOOOOO
My Immortal cured my depression. 🖤😂😂 "Died instead of dye"cause im gothic.
i have many things on my 2024 bingo card, Goofy telling Pete he's jacking off was not an expected one
What did they censor at 31:26?
“Are you gonna come r*pe me or what?”
NOT THE CHOCOLATE FILLED DONUT 💀💀💀
*stoned wheezelaughing* that clip wrecked my lungs aaa
I’ve never ran so fast to watch this as soon as I could. I’m ready. Fanfic me.
At 14:45 Dans expression was also my expression.
I was so excited for story time but after the Goofy story I'm not sure how to feel
The bread stock shots killed me. Whoever is adding those in for these videos really amplifies the comedy
Boulevard of Borkin Dreams is my dogs new theme song.
The goofy story is finally back! I've been wondering how it ended?!
Just bought V Rising and thought “damn I need something good to listen to that can make me really feel like a vampire” Like an answer to prayer, here you are with My Immortal
That goofy story that Arin read made me have goosebumps and my heart was racing. Idk why. I love these videos so much! They look so cozy every time! I wonder if it’s cold in that room!
Omg perfect timing I JUST finished episode 8 cuz I missed it. Back to back Fan Fiction Story time!
YIPPEE!!!!