Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 7 - DOUBLE LENGTH!
We're making these longer and reading more chapters!!! This month it's more My Immortal and Sonic High School. Enjoy!
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Im starting to think she has dementia in her name for a reason
"A C-R-O-S-S, there's no way I'm writing that" rewind a couple chapters when she talks about putting in her cross earrings hahaha
My favorite thing about My Immortal is the heated debate as to whether or not the author is sincere. There are so many things that seem too stupid to be unintentional, but then... I agree that it walks a very fine line. I would believe either explanation, honestly.
the presence of a gun just destroys me. WHY does she have a gun. WHY is it there
She got it from Voldemort... for some reason.
This is 100% not serious 🤣 the sheer amount of extra mistakes and way too intense 'im a true goth' character are true gold
Flowers for Enbonnihy- as if someone took the Clock Drawing Test of a severe dementia patient and made it into a story. That's what it reads like. That's what it feels like. It's perfect.
Girl not Allah Kadavera 💀
Ummm Hagrid would be support staff. How dare. Totally different union.
I haven't read My Immortal in so long I completely forgot about the gothic version of a song by 50 Cent line and I genuinely had to pause and laugh for a good five minutes at that alone xD
50 Cent lowkey proved diddy killed Biggie & Tupac, he might also do goth covers of his own music
Arin being proud of Charmy for saying "DO not hurt my feelings!" made me smile.
I'm blown away by this girl's desire to claim she's a Satanist and then censor the word "damn" like it's worse than the slur she led with.
As someone who was once one of these people, it was majority *really* segregated white kids who learned about being goth from the internet and from like, brand loyalties. This is a “yeah I’m goth I watch onision” perspective on the concept. Weird sort of mix of kids who were insanely sheltered with no concept of actual human pain, to kids who were actually dealing with some pretty fucked up stuff but with no access to resources to process it beyond, like… this. Writing from someone who was mimicking the style and someone who was actually experiencing abuse were, at least from the kids’ perspective, impossible to tell apart (I’d imagine adults would have a better understanding, but I also don’t know who was like, looking out for kids in those spaces. Tbh idk if anyone is now either :/)
Jesus Christ I'm literally stacking stuff from a ladder and that whooshing sound early in the Sonic story had me thinking something was gonna fall and kill somebody 😅
Man, that girl was devolving writing My Immortal. Her spelling was falling apart
She used her life essence to make this story that’s why nobody can find the author. She’s immortal through the written word and the code now, like the serial experiments lain villain
I’m binging these episodes while rearranging my room, and I almost dropped a shelf on myself during “SEE, WAS THAT SPELT WRONG?!?!?”
Not your username on TOP of all this madness and chaos LOL
i use the word prep as a slur regularly now
i love how at this point we aren't even bothering to spell anyone's names correctly anymore
I sincerely wish it was "u miht thing ima slot, n yood b rite."
I know I'm late, but her coffin is hot pink with black?! She said that. SHE DID!
She also talked about cross earrings in Chapter 1. She really did. She was rocking crucifixes and the colour hot pink, then decided those things weren't goth enough. She seeeeems like kind of a poser.
I’m so glad “old Japanese man” Arin is here to stay.
Love how she'll drop the cigarette slur before the fic even starts but REFUSES to type the word c-r-o-s-s.
The cigarette slur
we've reached the sweater saga...
The author of Sonic High School has a way with words. A poetically terrible way with words.
i dont know if im just high but is the music getting louder throughout the video
How did Draco jump out from behind a wall with ebony but also was in his room killing himself??
St. Mangos 🤣
I'm literally just here for Dan's beanie
Arin with dem dogs out for FREE?!?
for 5$
My bed is a coffin and I dress it up in pink and black stuff. My coffin wears black combat boots. But it's not pale so I gotta put foundation on dat. Noe muh coffinz is da bomb.
the way Dan said “you might think I’m a slut, but I’m really not” fucking killed me
Knuckles is fuck goes hard need that on a shirt
Yes please
Thank god these are getting longer, worth every one of the dollars 🤘
I was so confused what SBO in the captions meant until I realized later it was supposed to be Espio🤣
Sigma Beta Omega
I guarantee you, as a former maladaptive fanfiction reader, My Immortal is genuine :')
Can someone please fucking animate this. Or can I just do it? (My immortal specifically lol)
I’ll be the little devil on your shoulder whispering “dew eet”
Knuckles IS a fuck.
"I may be a student, but I am also a Satanist!" - Hargrid
POV me in college
Y'all are as high reading these as I am watching them
a: i thought draco was dead d: * genuine look of disrespect * ... no, wolfmort has him bondage. pay attention the level of investment on dan's level is supreme. step it the hell up, arin
love your name lol
Who’s gonna suggest that one mcr fanfic about Gerard being the presidents son and dating frank in a mental institution It was my friends favorite but that shit was wild afXD
Just submit it Ask your friend for the link
Sonic Highschool sounds like it was written by an 11 year old boy that has had a very bad upbringing
I was having a smoke right when he said "Sonic thought knuckes was a fuck" and I almost coughed up a lung
I love a fan fiction so dedicated to the source material that they change almost everyone’s name and character designs. I keep having to remind myself that Bloody Mary Smith is Hermoine, Vampire is Harry, and now Diabolo is Ron? Also, scars aren’t something you just grow out of.
Uh, clearly, youve never had any scars
No matter how many times I hear My Immortal, it never stops giving.
I'm so glad my immortal was made in a pre ai world so there is no doubt a human made it
Are we really pretending My Immortal is a real fan fic? There are a lot of them where you kind of can't tell how real it is, but this one is not hard to see. It's extremely satirical and intentional. I guess it's funny, but I like the one's that are genuine because that's why they are funny. KidSonic (Or whatever his name was) actually cared about Sonic getting laid. The integrity of this show is bankrupt, and it's probably why my life is so bad. Hopefully this comment will fix everything.
they said like an episode ago that it was satire. they know it's satire. but it's considered the greatest fanfiction of all time, and it's still hilarious, so they're reading it. They're aware, Brandon.
stahp flamn da story u prepzz ᕙ(⇀‸↼‶)ᕗ (get it?)
I won't soon forget the line "you poser muggle bitch!"
The “I love her for her body” line caught me so off-guard, I just sat there with a blank face for a solid two seconds before I finally fully processed it and fucking cackled
My jaw actually dropped
Uncut AND longer?!? YES
My immortal is amazing- I've never been so hooked into a story like this before.
bless y’all for making these longer you don’t know how happy it makes me
I hope this continues, it's very fun
Love the longer episodes! Since they're only once a month feels more fun to watch
Hey ur like, me when I harven’t
It's been a full month since this video was released, are we ever gonna get another installment of this series or is it like dead forever from now on?
I don't think it has a set date. Just once a month. Nothing could stop them from getting to the bottom of Sonic High School and My Immortal
How often are these posted? I need to know what they think of the end of My Immortal
Is this a serious question? Its the patreon subscription. It's every month.
I 've watched you guys for like 10 years and joined just now for My Immortal. Love!
I want more of this :(
Espeo going "oh" after being told you can date someone outside the one night of a high school prom makes him my new favorite character. Just a dumb jock with a heart of gold
God, I was eating while watching this, and I had to pause the video because I kept almost choking. 'Sonic thought Knuckles was a fuck.' "I am going to try for the football team." ... But he had a horn on his nose and that was good for attacking people in front of him. THIS TOOK ME OUT oh my god the juxtaposition of these bizarre sentences
"No, volfmorph has him bondage, pay attention" is one of the greatest responses ever.
This is banger! They're only getting better and better! Keep it up, you PREPZ!
I never thought I’d say this but I want to hear you read the goofy screwing 🪛 Pete
This has to be satire
Good to see arin showing feet.
This would lose so much if anyone else was reading it aloud. Dan has a certain special something that really brings out the author's true spirit
"STOP IT NOW YOU HORNY SIMPLETONS!" needs to be a phrase I adopt into my life regularly XD
I don't know why but it makes me so mad that they keep calling MCR a goth band ☠ like blawg 😭 like "Omg yessss MCR is my fav goth band how'd you know 😍" I would die on the spot if someone said that to me
No volfemore has him bondage, pay attention 💀💀💀
They stopped right before my favorite part with “Snaketail” I’m living for this right now.
The outfits in My Immortal would have been my dream clothes in middle school honestly. Lmao Also, congrats to Sonic for recovering from itchy balls!
This brings me so much joy.
FLOWERS FOR ALGERNON 😭😭
So my theory on My Immortal is that it started out as a semi-sincere self insert fanfiction by some middle school girl. I say this because the attention to clothing and little "gothic" details is just so in depth that it doesn't feel like it was written by someone who wasn't into those sort of things. I was also a middle school girl around this time, and my (thankfully unpublished) self-insert Pirates of the Caribbean fanfics were about the same caliber as the early chapters of My Immortal. However, I think pretty quickly, the author realized that the worse they made their story, the more attention it would get. Thus they, and possibly a group of friends, worked to make the story get progressively worse and worse. I then think that the hate for the fanfiction spiraled a bit out of control, which is why the author suddenly stopped writing it and never returned to it.
I agree. Also when I was an edgy middle school teen for some reason my fanfics often involved the protagonist being upset with the handsome man and the man pursuing them to make amends, which My Immortal is FILLED with.
Wait...so 'Lupin' (sp?) was *checks notes* chewing while watching 'Ebony' naked/dressed...and then the school "constipated" the camera...got it.
Normally I can fall asleep to Grumps content in a comforting way. I think this time my body is just shutting down. I think 'Ebony' may just be a psychic vampire
Got the membership so i can listen to these while i work. very worth it
I need the end of that goofyxpete fiction. It wouldn't feel right reading it myself
Honestly and truly, I wonder what the author of "My Immortal" is up to these days. 🤣
The way Dan just accepts the insanity of My Immortal and keeps going even when questioned is immaculate
Probably the best patreon exclusive. I need to know how the Goofy fic ends 😂
I love "Dumbleydore"! it soulds like the shitty cartoon version! XD
God I love these. I'm so glad I'm giving these idiots 10$ a month to listen to them read shitty fanfics.
idk what it is but I really love the way Dan says “you might think I’m a slut, but I’m really not 😏”
I'm so excited to listen to more! :-)
Just my head cannon My immortal was definitely written my a horny, *edgy*, pre-teen. Sonic High school was written by another pre-teen to whom English wasn't their first language. Judging on all the butt and dick jokes, they're a boy.
I thought SHS had surprisingly good grammar, so it struck me as a young native speaker who hadn’t worked out every grammar rule yet.
Aww, Arin left out the best part of Roger explaining the voice direction. After the voice director was like, "Perfect!" Roger went in that deep voice, "You gotta be fucking kidding me." Like, I don't mind the deeper voice acting, but him saying that was hilarious.
There is no way the author of my immortal is not intentionally trying to make this as badly written as possible.
This is my second time watching this and it won't be the last
I can't wait for the grumps to read fan fiction that's been written about them
Arin said it. "I feel like My Immortal is gas-lighting me."
everytime a fan fiction story time is posted it makes my whole month.
Thank you for all you guys do, even when it’s silly funny stuff like this it’s just nice to feel your essence
Can we get more of "Sonic's Ultimate Harem"? That was some good stuff.
Fangs you so much for do0bling the lngth of these vids (get it) ;3
I live for this series. As long as I get My Immortal I'm happy 😭
Read more My Immortal and you'll meet Tom Bombadil!
Wait are you shitting me no way that blue-coat-yellow-boot mfer shows up
Wow.
I just have a small request, can Arin put those dogs away?
I have a small request, show feet
Arin havin’ the dogs out is the *real* Patreon content Also pleeeeease continue the Goofy & Pete story
triumelephantly 😭😭😭
If theres anything we can value in this crazy world, it's that Sonic's balls no longer itch
So thankful for story time, and for the extra length story time 😻
I still think it would be worth getting one of the fancy bound versions of my immortal
exactly my thoughts! I added one to my cart.
I will give anything for more extra length videos PLES
so glad for the longer episodes, but would love for a little lightning round of shorter ones
My Immortal: Join Us As We Dance Madly Upon the Lip of the Volcano
this is my favorite thing in the inter-webs right now
fill us up with the long epiosdes, zaddies (im sorry)
If they ever manage to make a film adaptation of My Immortal, the costume design for Ebony better be PHENOMENAL
They won't lack any detailed descriptions, thats for sure !
cried laughing several times during this, thank you grumps for making my day!! 👏🖤
Have they read "Cupcakes" yet? I forget.
I don't think they have yet :)
this was an absolute treat. shout out to 'triumelephantly' and 'enistein'
It's a hilarious story, but I'm genuinely lost and have no clue what's going on.
Sonic Highschool absolutely feels like satire, no way it’s genuine!
My god I should be in bed right now for work early tomorrow but I feel triumelephantly ! Thanks Grumpos.
"sandly" made my drink come out my nose thanks.
"Sonic thought Shadow was a fuck." Is the best line in any of these so far
Longer episodes are just what I need!
The "author" of "My Immortal" confusing emo for goth is just as cringe as their writing. lol
Triumelephantly is the funniest fucking thing I've ever heard oh my god
Is it just me or does Sonic highschool sound like it's written by a deeply closeted homeschool kid?
This is the least comfortable comfy content I've ever experienced.
Chapter 6 of Sonic High School is going to be the greatest moment in Grumps History
This is both the best and worst thing on the internet
Phew, these boys have NO IDEA what they're in for with Sonic Highschool. It's like the Evangelion of Fanfic stories.
Lupin was masticating to it might be the funniest typo in this whole thing, just the image of Lupin standing there just chewing at something
Longer episodes?! My prayers have been answered! 😆😆😆 Can you guys finish the Goofy x Pete story next episode? And maybe read some other new stories that are shorter (like single-chapter one shot kind of stories)? Because the biggest reason why I was hoping for longer episodes was so that we can have more variety with the stories. I get wanting to read as much of My Immortal as possible, but now that the episodes are longer, you can still read plenty of My Immortal and then maybe read two or three (depending on the length) short stories. Full disclosure, I'm not sure if the submission I sent in was completely rejected, or if you just haven't gotten to it yet. I'm debating on whether I should submit it again.
Give us this day our daily fanfic
“gamer words for homosexuality” lmaooo
40 MINUTES? :D
Fingers crossed we will get a whole video edited for just the my immortal readings. I need it to be all put together
This is my favorite series of all time I think I'm gonna throw up from laughing thank you (AN: an if ur a prep fk OFF!!1111)
just me, a beer, and trying not to spit out the beer cause I’m losing my shit
This was amazing especially "No, Volfmort has him; bondage. Pay attention" which slayed me. PLEASE go back to Goofy and Pete I really wanna know what happens
Why does this feel like a punishment? lol
My Immortal came out while I was up to my eyeballs in pharmacy school; I'd never even heard of it. Extra long episodes are gonna reduce my temptation to read ahead and going in blind has been a treat. Thanks 💜
I love this series so much. It brings so much comfort, cozy relaxed vibes, and lots of laughs. Fangs guys (get it?)
Omg please keep doing the double length ones, it makes my whole day. My cheeks and stomach hurt from laughing.
This series brings me so much joy. Turns out there was a lot of insanity that I managed to block out and forget about in My Immortal, and this has been a great way to experience it all again. Hope y'all get to Legolas by Laura at some point, but I could ride the Sonic Enoby wave for a while!
“masticating” is chewing, by the way 😭😭
What a blessed time to be aliv
I don't mind you riding this wave at all. Fangs guys (get it?)
the editing is 10/10, y'all
Double length?! Let’s GOOOOOOOO
Would love to see the 2 sequels to Garfield Maximum Speed be done
As a writer ... it is literally painful to listen to this 😬 And yet it's great 😅
god this made my day thank you grumps team
Oh yes. Please do this for 1000 years. It's so ridiculous and yet so comforting to listen to you guys. Such a weird combo! 😂
I think I pulled a back muscle laughing
I also am coming to understand why My Immortal is so iconic... I thought the joke would get old after the first chapter or so but. I am riveted.
The way Dan said "No, Volfmore has him bondage" with such a straight face when Arin asked if Draco died is absolutely hilarious
“really? are you sure that’s the analogy you want?” LOL
I feel like we've learned a lot about the author this week
God I want these stories animated so much. Nonsensically of course
Doing eyeliner while listening to all the misspellings of Dumbledore, entitles me to a purple heart.
I love this series so much! Thank you guys
I like listening to these while I work and the "No, volfemort has him bondage, pay attention" bit had me screwing up my face in tears from trying not to scream laugh in the middle of the office.
“Abra Kadavra” is one of my favorite My-Immortal-isms
Thank you, Dan for suffering through that reading. I feel like Im having a stroke just reading it.
You guys rock. This series is why I joined the patreon and its not disappointing in the slightest.
I'm also where an MCR shirt today. Very my immortal 😆
my favorite part was the main character essentially going "I started crying. he started crying too. what a little bitch"
I cannot BELIEVE I forgot about triumelephantly. The pure joy I felt when Dan read it was something else
YEEESSSSSS. I'M SO EXCITED.
Oh no...
This is exactly what I need to get through the rest of my day :)
Please do the goofy story next time please??
Something to look forward too when I get out of work
Ahhh Let’s Go!
as soon as the notification hit me i yelled im so ready for this
YIPPIEEEE
just in time for my lunch 😘✌🏼
We are truly blessed today with this double length episode