Fan Fiction Story Time - Episode 5
This week, our featured pieces are How Did They Get Together and My Immortal (Chapters 5&6). I just want to live!
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Comments (119)
My Reagan x Gorbachev fanfic got taken down so I can’t submit it
"These read like those Nigerian Prince emails- but it's about Goofy and Pete fucking". Jesus, what a sentence....
Chocula, you capitalist swine, Damn can’t relate my closet only has abnormal clothing
I'm 100% serious if the entire series of my immortal was made into some shitty like scary movie like movie, i would watch the WHOLE thing
Man i hope the boys adopt the citrus scale for these fics
i'm losing my fucking marbles over "its not the depression that kills you its the sudden stop at the end" i will never get over this
Them realizing 10 minutes in that Pete was the cat that walked through the door is sending me
then who was phone????
I had no idea Pete was a cat. Learn something new everyday.
"They're not even the same species" wtf did that make me laugh so hard XD
I will never forget the time that I reffered to Vampire as Harry and one of my friends screamed at me "DONT DEADNAME VAMPIRE!"
Question: does anyone else have issues with the video around the 17:30 mark? Every time I play this video it always freezes there but the timer keeps going.
It's not just you! I'm pretty sure this one has always had that hiccup, at least for me as well.
I really thought the first one was gonna be about Bradley and Max 😔
Am I the only one whose distracted by Arins bare tootsies?
The series is the only reason I got Patreon. My immortal is one of my favorite terrible fan fictions. Honestly, I love this whole series.
So I've been walking for the last 6ish months to lose weight (I'm down from 390 to 340) and listening to audio books and my last book finished up the other day. I just found this series and it is my motivation to get up and out of the house. I was half was down the street when the count chocula incident happened and I damn near fell over laughing. I love you guys for this shit, thank you so much.
It's 100× funnier if you see this with the subtitles☠️
I knew immediately that first fic was from Fanfiction.net based on the K+ rating (only site with that specific system) and K+ is SUPPOSED to be like the "PG" rating. I was so surprised that the author's note warned about sex in the fic because that means they should be using an entirely different rating, like T or M 😭
Editor plays league I see
I didnt notice the Goofy and Pete parallels with Dan and Arin until Dan said something, now it's all I saw
Count Chochula? So Gawth LMFAO. I love that cereal.
Why specifically red blood when everything else is just blood? Is she drinking a vampire knockoff of Red Bull? If so, that's some okay-ish world-building.
Dan's dead expression after he says "wait, Goofy and Pete?" is priceless.
17 minutes in or so Ebony apparently knows what a heartboner is. good for her.
the way i just lost it when they realized "the dog" and "the cat" meant Goofy and Pete respectively like 9 minutes in
The stock footage gives a clue 🤣
Hot tip: Do not eat while watching these. You might very nearly die.
Incredible episode, as always. I love this version of Dumbledore who calls students "motherfuckers"
"calmly"
K+ is essentially the equivalent of PG in the fanfiction.net rating system.
Which is wild to label it that because it literally talks about suicide and self harm
Arin’s Pete voice kinda sounds like his Homer Simpson voice
you know ive never considered the similarities between dan and arin and goofy and pete but now that i have my like will never be the same lmao
Emeny’s version certainly had a ring of authenticity to it as I do recall the first draft and not much was altered. She is a smart one. I love that for her. ♥️
its crazy that My Immortal continues to make an impact on my life 10 years after I first read it.
My name being Max is a curse sometimes.
Mmmmayux
People pay a lot more for foot content and poetry
Human constant
I love how Arin gave Pete the same voice he does for Gumshoe
1) Will it be doggy style, or is there even a kitty style? Something, barbed penis, something something. 2) My Immortal...I feel like there should always be an Afterward Author's Note just to bring us down easy.
Ah yes, Count Chocoula. The perfect breakfast that a vampire can totally eat.
That part had me in stitches
I wonder what J.K. Rowling would think about this "My Immortal" fanfiction...
She's too busy freaking out about transgender people
"It's not the depression that kills you, it's the sudden stop at the end." I mean...it's not entirely wrong.
Im a little disappointed the comments aren’t just full of fanfic suggestions. Such as ‘All fair in War and Love’. You guys should read that… sorry, I wasn’t sure where else to suggest fanfics for you to read.
Count chocula is a pretty funny brand of cereal for a *vampire* to decide to eat
I’m tempted to suggest my own my little pony fanfiction I wrote in middle school LMFAO
I wrote a Hocus Pocus fanfic when I was 14 that still exists on a obscure website lol. I think I would die of cringe, embarrassment and laughter if I had Danny and Arin read it.
it's giving #nobetareaders #wedielikemen
If I'm not hearing Arin read goofy x Pete smut next episode. I'm going on strike.
I'm not a bully but I think I wouldve been if I met the person who wrote my immortal
Why would you bully that Icon? shame on you!
Arin's Dan Castellaneta impression is on POINT
The Homer voice for Pete took me out
Please continue the wildly irreverent Goofy/Pete one, I gotta know if Pete beats his depression before beating Goofy's meat
Pistol ... The child toddler killed herself?
I don't have a sample but my heart says a well rated Optimus Prime x Megatron would hit 😂
Oh.....that sounds prime.
If someone were to write a fanfic, can they just copy-paste it into submission form entry section or does it need to be in the form of a link like the form says?
I'm also asking this for a friend. Although a temp solution should be to send the link in the form of a google drive viewing only invite. Just some advice for you know, your friend.
I live for these
Someone sells physically bound copies of My Immortal on EBay. Y’all should get it to show it off in the office.
are you for fucking real?
I literally only subbed for my immortal and it was so worth it
Oh you bet your ASS I'm submitting something!
The editing for this series really brings out Arin and Dans being playfully with each other but not to the extent of touchling each other. 10/10
After watching internet historian read through my immortal I can practically recite the whole story along with Dan and i am cracking up waiting for him to get to certain lines
Hi guys. Long time listener, first time commenter. Just a quick question, at the end of the video you were elucidating as to where one might be able to submit fan fiction for your consideration. I understand it is to be done in the comments. As this is so, you WILL read Half Life 2: Full Life Consequences. Yours emphatically, Patrick
I like the idea that his scar is gone as if he's been drawing it on
THE GOOFY VOICE HAS ME SENT
The author of my immortal could've called him Vampotter. Missed opportunity smh 😔
Wait but where do I submit my fanfic? In the comments?
There is a Google form
God damnit! How could you stop half way! I NEED to know if Goofy and Pete make passionate love! Also thank you for My immortal. Please read more.
My Immortal is the cult classic of all time
The subtitles during My Immortal just included almost the entire screen’s worth of “Ha ha’s” as Arin starts losing it when it says she spray painted her hair purple and when she is eating her cereal 🤣
I was not ready for Count Chocula with blood for milk. Best part of any story ever
I love how the Count Chocula line got the biggest laugh from Arin.
I love that Arin and Dan have brought back “Let’s fucking go!” to be an unironic phrase.
I’m making banana bread while watching this! edit: i don’t want to eat this banana bread anymore. It has been tainted and I wish for gods sweet salvation in the second coming of christ.
Tristana from league of legends jumpscare
What happened to the black flying Mercedes with 666 on the back??? Was it towed to the Hogwarts impound lot??? Dracos dad will be so pissed!!!!
These are amazing. Also, am I the only one having trouble with the patreon video player on mobile? It just keeps freezing and I need to restart the app.
i'd try watching it in-browser instead on your phone, i haven't had issues watching it that way on mobile
Arin took "Show Feet" seriously.
The author’s note pointing out that Dumbledore screamed because he had a headache (which will never matter again) is such a gift to the world.
I love the idea of goofy gradually getting infuriated trying to figure out how the daughter offed herself and getting nothing but cryptic answers
Omg, that's so cool! My friend and I read this story five years ago on my old YouTube channel. I can't express how happy this made us lol.
Stock video search terms: "Dog"; "Two Dogs"; "Cat & Dog"; "Romantic couple in forest"
That's how you make a cat dog.
Critic of the first story, though they have a deep knowledge of Goofy lore they had a gap of knowledge by not remembering that Slyvia actually married goofy at the end of the 2000 masterpiece An Extremely goofy Movie, really took me out of the story as a whole. 10/10 very hot would goon again
Love thinking about the impact of Dracula and vampire lore on our society, including that it led, in one way or another, to that breakfast order in all its glory
So, remind me. What does it mean to be "flaming" in the context of the author's notes?
hating on, essentially
Was super-distracted by the bit of crap in Dan's hair, but fab episode once again. Love these!
It's not Goth!! It's Vamp and Vamp is lame!! Refer to the South Park episodes! Goth is cigarettes and black coffee.
My daughter went down for a nap at the perfect time. I needed this today XD been waiting for them to get to 'Vampire'
Missed opportunity: Harry should've called himself "Vampotter."
“Billy, what’s your favorite episode of Fan Fiction Story Time?” “The one where they talked about the link to submit fan fiction recommendations for A LOOONG TIME”.
Arin will you kiss me
Are you someone's dad? Because if yes then he DEFINITELY will
I need one of these videos every week to keep me happy, healthy and sustained. 🥲
wait where are we supposed to submit fic? 🤔🤔🤔 super unclear instructions://
The link is in the video description. :)
I've never read My Immortal before, and I'm determined to only experience it through the lads reading it to me. Please send more videos, my crops are dying and I need more regular sustainment.
Another great way to intake it is dramatic readings with friends; I keep a copy on my phone at all times for just such occasions!
Ah, the plots thinnen!
If they do not finish My Immortal, I will be so gosh done diddly sad
Love the stock footage of cats and dogs. Oddly weird tone over the fanfiction
I love that they didn’t realize Pete was a cat and they just assumed there was a pet in the room that spoke up every now and again 😂
lol I commented too early. It did take em a minute haha
This series made me want to read the entirety of My Immortal and I've never been so thankful for something in my life.
Hell yeah. LFG guys
A "visit" from Arin and Dan always makr my day oh so lovely
This is absolutely everything to me, I'm so excited
Do I immediately run when I see they're reading more My Immortal? Yes. Yes I do.