Seven sins - 11
"I love how it feels when they...slide inside my guts."
In that deep, black hole where nothing comes out that Jill owns, if I could have a superpower I would choose that one, it would be amazing, who would Emily want to call?...
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As much I love those romantic moments of your other stories, just watching a glutton like Jill do as she pleases, is always something I've loved about Preds. As for who Emily is calling... I don't know. You haven't done any crossovers yet, so I can't really say Chelsea or Brigitte, but If I had to guess... maybe you? Though I'm not sure how you would handle that kind writing 🤔. Not that you'd be terrible, just wondering if it's something you would do.
I just realized, though I know the amount of work would be insane, but have you considered doing a POV Vorception? You know, a Pred eats a Pred, then eats a Prey, then the Pred inside the Pred eats the Prey as they enter the stomach with that Pred. That way the Pred has a Pred in their stomach, while that Pred has the Prey in their stomach. And it's all from the Prey's POV. Is that a possibility in the far future?
Wouldn't it be a crazy twist for Emily to consume Jill? She should be careful with the name calling...
hehe I think it will be difficult for emily though....
I absolutely love the size comparison and the POV shot of her coming out the door. What a large, powerful woman. I wish I could be there
hehe I also love size comparisons in my imagination I always imagine that I have those proportions and that someone of normal size is only as big as my leg.
Love love love. Please do more POV shots in the extras! I love being at eye level and seeing what a massive woman with a full gut would be like in real life :)
that sounds delicious, I'll keep it in mind, and you'll love one of the projects I'm working on.
Hmm... Who could Emily call to outconsume or outpower Jil or even punish her? Jill looks like she still could be filled with more. Such a satisfied predator.
That's a good question, one I'm interested in answering.