Fire Inside II - Page 7
"Mmm, tastes like... As if I were born for this..."
Jeje I understand you Maya, I really do, Hello everyone the next page of this story is now ready
Comments (5)
Maya taking a real inward and outward reflection of herself seeing the beauty of what she is, but thinking how it feels at the same time. Seeing how this may of been what she was meant to be all along. Awesome immersive character resolution coming to light here in this Jane as she feels and thinks.
I like that development in Maya, I feel that awakening those kinds of powers in you would make you rethink many things, I've always wondered, when I fantasize about all this, if I were really capable of eating someone whole, would I still be me?
Jane, Fantastic. The switching to Maya's thoughts in the first person added a real depth to the experience
Thank you, Michael, I wanted it to be as if she owned the whole scene, Besides, I've been wanting to add my thoughts as they occur to me when I'm imagining all this
By the way, I've re-uploaded it to Dropbox, Sorry, I didn't notice that it hadn't finished uploading 😣😣