Hermann Date 5 (First Draft from assisstant writer)
Haven't had time to properly review the manuscript yet so it might get quite some changes. Option 2 at the end is for next month.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1rAjrjz6WTFUu23pFpanKw2qQrWYU_0xJ0BulyZLFYQc/edit
Comments (6)
Idk I guess im the odd man out here. I think it needs some work..
what wuld you like to see imprufed ?
Love the bimbo direction and the giggling. Let's see if it sticks to the future normal dialog in other story line.
Didnt think that it would evolve in this direction, but im pleasantly surprised!
Love it, though the ring gimmick had me a bit worried it was going be too forced and too much of a departure from Hermann's theme of buying off Aura's dignity piece by piece. Good idea to still have a choice, though I'm guessing it's going to have gameplay consequences similar to withdrawal.
Oh this looks so delightfully evil. especially with the "behave in a manner" since he really seems to think A's a bimbo.