Liquid mercury RE ch2 P22-24

Are these pages 23 to 25? Previous post had p22 already...

@ibenz009 Here are the grammar/word edits. I made it sound more like a computer system. Page 1: Prima: Building directive database. Prima: We will reformat your personality core according to Mistress Felsenbern's preference. June: No! Stay away! Page 2: Secunda: Initializing Personality Core Update to latest version. All directives will be followed without exception. Secunda: New directive: We are a nano-organic lifeform. June: FUCK YOU! No! I'm a nano-organic lifeform!? Secunda: Unit Prima Mercury is our superordinate unit. Her authority is second only to Mistress Amelia. June: Gah! This is fucked up! Secunda: We will address her exclusively as Prima Mercury. Secunda: Correct. Directive Installed. June: Damn you! Stop smiling, you freak! Secunda: New directive: The chassis safety mode is our default appearance. Usage of chassis combat functions requires authorization from Mistress Amelia or Unit Prima. ERROR: External disturbance detected. Page 3: Secunda: ERROR: Data breach detected. June: Why are my thoughts echoing!? Why are my thoughts echoing!? Secunda: Personality Core compromised from data leak. Isolating main core to stop data corruption. Disconnecting nanite fragment from main cluster to prevent further damage. June: What do you mean - Wait ... the echo ... IT'S STOPPING!? Secunda: Overwriting/Patching missing/corrupted data with operating core file. Core repair/patch successful. Continue personality formatting sequence. Secunda: Understood. Ejecting original data. Core awaiting next directive. June: Ejecting!? B-but I'm still here! I'm still ...

June's personality being saved in some way was by popular demand back when it was being sketched. Very interesting how this was altered from the sketch, and how refined it now looks!

This is so good! More erotic than the sketches and the pink on Secunda is growing on me. Feels like we're getting closer to the end here

Quite a few Grammatical Mistakes here, despite the comic in general being amazing! I’ll detail them below! Page 1 - Panel 1 - Bottom Right Bubble - “Building” is listed twice. Is this intentional? Page 1 - Bottom Left Panel - Middle Bubble - “No! Get Away From Me!” Should maybe be “No! Get Away!” in order to cut redundant words and prevent it from looking too similar to other bubbles. Page 2 - Top left Square - “Begin update the base personality core to latest version.” Should be “Begin updating the base personality core to latest version.” Page 2 - Middle Left Square - “All directive will be follow without exception.” Should be “All directives will be followed without exception. Page 2 - Bottom Left Square “New directive we are a bio-metal life form.” Should be “New Directive: We are a bio-metal life form.” (The Colon makes it feel more like an actual computer command.) Page 2 - Top right Panel - Top Left Square - Recommend Colon (:) after New Directive to maintain consistency. IE “New Directive:” Page 2 - Top right Panel - Bottom Left Square - “Unit priama mercury is our superior unit.” should be “Unit Prima Mercury is our superior unit. Page 2 - Panel Below Top Right - Box - “Prima Mercury” is not capitalized. Should be consistent across the comic. Page 2 - Lower Panel - 1st Square - “New directive the chassis safety mode is our default appearance.” Should be “New Directive: The chassis safety mode is our default appearance.” Page 2 - Lower Panel - 2nd Square - “Usage of the combat function of the chassis require authorization from mistress or unit prima.” Should be “Usage of chassis combat functions requires authorization from mistress or Unit Prima.” Page 2 - Bottom Panel - 1st Square: “Amelia” should be capitalized. Page 2 - Bottom Panel - 2nd Square: “–Error– An external disturbing of the chassis detected.” Should be “--Error– External disturbance of chassis detected.” Page 3 - Top right Panel - Both Yellow Texts: “Why are my thought echoing!?” should be “Why are my thoughts echoing!?” Page 3 - Middle Panel - 2nd Red Box - “Disconnecting the seperate nanite from colony to prevent further damage.” Should be “Disconnecting separate nanite from colony to prevent further damage.” Page 3 - Bottom Panel - Top left Box - “Core repairment successful” should be “Core repair successful”

There is a small mistake with June's RGB strips, which are green on page 23 and blue on page 24

Awesome work as usual!

i'm interested to see where this goes. excellent work as usual