Liquid mercury RE Chapter 2 p5-6
Sorry that i took so long to finish this. I got into baldur's gate hype train. Anyway another 2 page done. I redraw some of the panel too.
If you find any mistake or error feel free to to post it in the comment.
Comments (9)
When you say rudimentary and mentioned a wild animal like a dog. It would be awesome and stand to reason Miss June is made into a guard dog, or antro styled dog. Part human part dog
Oh I am looking forward to seeing June's new look ^^
Any thoughts on making a Baldurs Gate themed comic? Lots of fun characters that could be... Twisted...
It's okay, Baldur Gate is peak and so is this series
Great stuff as usual!
You said “too” twice on the second page
A few comments from my side for page 2: >"June is too invaluable as raw material for disposal" => double negative? "too invaluable for disposal" would imply not worth enough/too cheap to throw it away. I would say "too valuable as raw material" would be better "accept evolution": "receive" instead of "accept" maybe? It's not like she's got a choice after all :-D Alternatively, "A good candidate to be evolved", i.e. using a verb? "has not yet installed": if something else is doing it, "has not yet [been] installed", if it's developing on its own, perhaps "has not yet formed"?
Lol so much for composure
I think we all have~ How are you finding the game? Stimulating? Overwhelming? Engaging?~