Liquid mercury RE Chapter 2 p3-4
Another 2 page done.
As alway if you find any mistake please feel free to posti it in the comment.
Comments (6)
Brilliant, as usual!
I think you meant “imbecilic” and “you’re in for a surprise”
The coloring is really well done! A few things: Page 1 You['ve] made me blow him []to bits. You['re] in for a surprise, Ms. June! Page 2 ("Subjugating target." if it's still in process; but it looks here like she could already be restrained here? So "Target subjugated." might be better?)
Gorgeous work as usual. I saw one minor grammar problem. The second to last word bubble on page 3 reads, "You in for a surprise, Ms. June!" I believe you meant for it to say "You're in for a surprise, Ms. June!"
Always like the changes you add in the transition from sketch to final draft. It think adds to the scene to see Prima's face up close in p4 before she grabs & subdue June. It makes the action panel in the middle feel like a natural progression to the bottom panel
Holy cow this is gorgeous