Liquid mercury RE ch2 sketch 31-35
Sorry for very late post. I want to finish the chapter 2 in one go also redraw page 31 a bit. If you find anything wrong with feel free to tell me in the comment.
And thank you for support last month I want to post before the end of may but unable to finished it on time sorry.
Japan is really fun travel around kansai is quite diffrent from tokyo.
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@ibenz009 What is the name of the executive?
I love the last page, but Prima's chest is a bit small in her maid outfit compared to the other pages
cool
Wonder if Mistress will ever "wear" one of the two like symbiotic armor?
Hope you like the hot springs
@ibenz009 June's original personality is still alive? Will she get her own body?
Looking forward to seeing those last two pages colored in. Especially the last one
Really love the story so far! Here's a few corrections from my side (corrections in [brackets], rest for context, by page) Page 1: If you do not comply[,] we will use deadly force. We prefer to finish this as [efficiently] as possible. The debris hit one of my arm[s]... (or alternatively just: Some debris hit my arm) [This time you don't have Mistress to take advantage of]. Surrender. (or alternatively: [You can't exploit Mistress] this time. Surrender.) No, not yet[.] I still have on[e] card left. Page 2: He's blowing up my [ancestral] home! I've plant[ed] a few explosive[s] in this vicinity to cover my escape. I know this manor hold[s] sentimental value to you. So let['s] not do anything we['re] both going to regret. [A] few?! [How many] bomb[s] did you plant?! Tell you[r] machines to stand down. Page 3: Why should I believe you? What stop[s] you from trigger[ing them later]? But if you refuse[, I guarantee] I can't believe that work[ed]. That bomb [was] the only one I['ve managed] to plant. [This] thing better be worth all this trouble. Order[,] Mistress? Page 4: I indeed [stole] their research funds to create my mercury. It will be unpleasant[,] but I still need Apollo['s] resource[s] for my plan. [In their paranoid little minds they think that I am going to defect.] I'm going to [tell] them what they want to hear... Beg and [grovel] like they want [to] see. Offer them a small bit of my work. They [will] probably slap me on the wrist, then [demote] me. Don't worry about you[r] existence Prima. Even if I told them the truth[,] they wouldn't believe me. Still[,] I should have anticipated that woman would sen[d] her own minion along with [the] corporate grunt[s]. My mercury being stolen [is] certainly [going] to be a problem. Prima[,] Secunda[,] begin searching for [the] explosive[s]. 2 week[s] later. Please wake up. Your morning report will begin in 15 minute[s]. Please wash your face. We will help you get dress[ed]. Page 5: Dr. Amelia[,] need I remind you that you are under house arrest? You must report to me three time[s] a day, [on time]! [The] only thing that stop[s] Apollo from put[ting] a bullet in your head is that brain of yours. Hmmm, you [are] quite cranky today. Still mad that I got off easy Princess? How's your father? Stop talking like we are friend[s] Amelia. We [have] know[n] each[ ]other since we [were] kid[s,] right? That doesn't [mean] that we are friend[s]. No, that['s] enough Prima. Those drone[s]... Aren't [they] too sophisticated for simple service drone[s]? I already got a few idea[s] what they really are.
I'm pretty sure it should be "grovel", not "gravel" (the former is the act of begging for forgiveness; the former is a bunch of rocks).
IRON!!!! 😆 WOOHOO, HAVEN’T SEEN HER IN YEARS! This was a awesome finale, very cool & sexy to see Prima & Secunda here. Can't wait for the finale version. Also, awesome to hear you enjoyed Japan! For robot name suggestions, how about Thea or Theia Iron, since the name is Greek for "Goddess" & resembles the number 3.