Liquid mercury RE ch2 p25-29 sketch
I manage to draw 5 page this time. It become longer than I want but I don't want to end it to end on cliff hanger. Well can't help it now i suppose.
Anyway if find any grammar mistake and want to help fixing it feel free to post it in the comment.
Comments (12)
@ibenz009 Ever considered an editor for the story?
I hope they assimilate more~ I love how you design each character and how they change~
some grammar corrections! love these pages. "What you are doing" -> "What are you doing" "Perhaps he's trying to keep me occupied" "Damage are minimal" -> "Damage is minimal" "nanite mass is neglectable" -> "nanite mass is negligible" "is register as" -> "is registered as" "Prima Secunda capture and eliminated that" -> "Prima, Secunda, capture and eliminate that" (or "Prima. Secunda." depending on tone of voice) "bio metal life form exist" -> "bio metal life forms exist" "your will are absolute" -> "your will is absolute" "successfully retrieve the" -> "successfully retrieved the"
cool
So June is in the missing fragment. Hope she gets her body back.
Lol, love how she's rather rough but still obedient enough to apologise for it
Ooh, so the June fragment is probably in that stolen sample. I hope the sample gets away or atleast the doc finds out who sent the assassin which leads to the woman who will become Iron & part 3 one day. Cool action btw! Love the fun dynamic the doc & prima have
tasty sword
Yeah All hope has lost like the wind in summer But I hope her personality are survived in the Darkness of Control System แต่จบแล้วใช่ป่ะ?
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I'm beginning to be a big fan of the "mouth gets cracked when they open wide" style. It's unsettling in a cool way, like when Gilda did it.
Caint wait for the full colored Release...
