Liquid mercury Re ch2 P13-116
I'm very sorry for very late post but here is another 4 page done!
I wish I could work faster. At least i've fixed my sleeping schedule not my attenion span thought lol
As always if you have any suggestion or found any mistake feel free to post it in the comment.
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Ever since the first chapter been hoping for the equivalent of iron to come about, nice to see it is. :)
อยากรู้ไวๆแล้วสิว่าสุดท้ายแล้วยัยตัวร้ายเราจะโดน(อดีต)มิลเลอร์หักหลังแล้วทำให้หลายเป็น Liquid mercury ตามต้นฉบับไหม :3
น่าคิดแหะ เห็นว่าคุณนักวาดเขาก็กำลังคิดอยู่เหมือนกันว่าจะไปยังไงต่อ แต่ผมอยากให้เซ้ตคุนดายังมีบุคลิกเหมือนเดิม เหมือนใน Demon Lord
You said you messed up your sleep schedule. Restore if necessary. After all, if you undermine your health, you will no longer be able to please us with your wonderful work.
@Ibenz009 Can you at least slip in one more page with Silver having big boobs?
The Mistress isn't looking for more potential recruits is she? As I'll happily volunteer as tribute! Make a waifu outta me xD
I absolutely can not wait for the colored pages!!!
Page 1: "AHHHHHH!" "Second Unit's muscle density reduced." "Registering new appearance..." "Stand by mode. Appearance registered." Page 2: "Ahh." "Ah." "Restriction of second unit's nanite usage is engaged, mistress." "Doesn't she look great, Prima?" "Yes, Mistress..." "Fufufu, I surprise even myself sometimes." "What an adorable little thing you've become, miss June." "Ador...able?" "I think I will call you Secunda Silver."
Notes: you did a good job this time around. Not too many corrections to make here. Page 3: "Wha...wha...what did you do?!" "What is this body?!" "Damn you, I'll..." "You'll do what, Secunda?" "How did you?! Grrr, let go!!" "Awww, so cute. How does it feel to be the short one now?" "You bitch!" "Oof" "Ahhh, your hands are so soft. I think I overdid that setting a bit." "Right now, your chassis is in safety mode. As you can see, it renders you completely harmless to me." Page 4: "Now to get rid of that brutish personality of yours." "Prima!" "Yes, mistress." "Miller?! Ahh...!" "Please stay still, Secunda." "Your old commander here is going to teach you how to behave like a good girl." "Miller, stop! Damn this weakass body!" "Preparing personality core access..."
cute
Awwww she is absolutely adorable
Secunda Silver. I love the name! It'd be cool if Silver can morph her body more freely but her new form is pretty cute too. Personally, given how they're literally robots and the mad scientist loves obedience, it just makes sense for thier personalities to be reprogrammed. Plus it makes the eventual, sudden betrayal in the original satisfying! If you want to keep June's personality, how about having the scientist able to switch June's personality on and off. A maid mode and Mimicry mode. Either mode, June is still forced to obey her mistress.
น้องคิดว่า(ความคิดเห็นส่วนตัวนะ) บุคลิกของเซ็ตคุนดา ถ้าเก็บเอาไว้จะสานต่อเรื่องราวได้ไปไกลกว่า หรือจะล้างสมองเธอก็ได้ แต่น่าจะให้หลงเหลือบุคลิกภาพของการต่อต้าน ที่จะสร้างความน่าสนใจและมิติของตัวละคร เหมือนกับเอเรียใน Demon Lord ที่พี่วาดไว้ก่อนหน้านั้น ที่สำคัญมันจะทำให้เซ็ตคุนดากลายเป็นตัวปรับและสร้างสีสันให้เนื้อเรื่อง
ใจเย็นๆ ครับยังเขียนไม่จบรอดูก่อน
Her personality should be kept, bro. it will make story to become Interesting and we become supportive with her
Grammar check “your hands are” and “doesn’t she” you also wrote “ro” instead of “to”
Can her personality be saved
I Agree with you Her personality should be kept. If it's all taken away, it's too hopeless. Also she like aria
nice！