Liquid mercury RE p29-30
Another 2 page done. Redraw some panel too.
Only 6 page remain.
And I thank you for another month of support. I hope I can make it worth it.
As alway if you find anymistake feel free to post it in the comment.
Comments (11)
Pity it's only 6 remaining
Good to see people have been loving the post on deviant art. I can't stress enough how your hard work paid off. And while you should sharpen your craft I would still advise you to take a break so you don't burn out. I'd love to get to my commission at some point XP i'm as patient as the Rock ;)
so in the second panel on page 29 I think "my apology" should be " my apologies" as the phrase uses plural. Same with "Belief" it should be "Beliefs" as the reprogramming changed all of Miller's beliefs, not just one.
I'd be touching her! Y'know, for science...
I think that last panel should say “on my body” not “his body”
Fantastic work as usual. Wonderfully done. Did notice one problem in the last dialogue bubble in the second panel of page 29, it says "andremoved" when I'm assuming you meant "and removed". Didn't see anything else out of place.
Awesome stuff! We're approaching the finale now!
My favorite part is coming up 😎 wish it was the 1st version though but still good
What do you mean the first version and where can I read it
Well it's hard to deny she looks beyond amazing
Will she kill them or transform them, perhaps something else? gaaaaah!! The pressure is killing me I want to know!!!