Liquid mercury RE sketch p14-18
I'm really sorry for very late post. My monke brain can't concentrate for the life of me.
Anyway here's update sketch for liquid mercury remake.
And few more commissions that's i just finished. Sorry again and thank you for still support me despite my inconsistent post schedule.
Hope you guy have a good month ahead.
Comments (12)
Yep, she’s definitely a perverted lesbian
I cant wait to see the finished product!
when do you think that you will begin to color the pages?
Edits! :) Page 1: 1: What has she done to me?! My body... it's all metallic! And are these my breasts?! 2: It doesn't seem real. But I'm able to hold them in my hands! 3: Kyu!? They're so sensitive! 4: I know that she turned me into a girl and all but to see these boobs with my own eyes... And then there's this female voice coming out of my mouth... Grrr! (I altered the ordering of these lines because it doesn't make sense for her to talk about her boobs, talk about her voice for one line, and then go back to her boobs again) I feel so humiliated! 5: What's wrong, Prima? Taking an interest in your new body? Kya! Hehehe. It seems that your sensory input is still adjusting. Don't worry, it should become more tolerable in a few seconds. Let me show you the full extent of my gift. Drone Mirror!
Page 2: 1: Take a good look at your beautiful new body, Prima. Do you like it? Much better than that old, obsolete, flesh body, isn't it? No way... This girl... is me? 2: This face... These eyes... Everything that was me is all gone... It's like I'm watching someone else's reflection. Am I even still Miller at this point? (Again, reordered these lines for better flow) 3: I'm not even flesh and blood anymore. All of this is just a blob of metal. I'm just a living metal goop shaped like a woman! No, I need to calm down. Take a hold of yourself, Miller! You're still you dispite this form!
very nice
Really good; I like Miller's approach to their new self and am looking forward to their impending mental changes and what the scientist might get them to do to their former comrades :)
cool
Is it bad I kinda wish all the team gets converted? Anywho, on the second page, top right corner. “I’m even Miller anymore?” Should be “Am I even Miller anymore?” Am I and I am are annoyingly different when writing. I’m only works for I am, not am I
monkey see monkey do
Alas here comes the mind control part and my least favorite the read about. I'll wait for the next comic to start. Great drawing as ever! Love your work
Wow, love how he's given more time to react to his Mercury body before the programming kicks in. Another amazing chapter.