Demon lord chapter 2 p26-27
Another two page is finished. Sorry it's take longer than I expected.
Only 2 page left! I will finally be free!
As always if you found any mistake or have suggestion feel free to post in in the comment.
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There are so many lovely little touches on these pages that it's hard to choose which to point out. I especially like Aria and Gilda's expressions when Demon Lord offers to give up the sword. She just offered a dog a bone, and Aria's antennae glowing serve as good stand-ins for her ears pricking up.
26.4.3 {stray quotation mark at the end} 26.5.1 you are to weak => you are too weak or You are so weak you cannot even turn yourself into shadow and escape. {The dialog box flow in the last two panels is a little awkward. Both of the second bubbles are placed such that the eye wants to read them first. Really hate covering up your amazing artwork, but they could probably do with being moved down and/or over, particularly the one in panel 5.}
Looking real good; we're so close to the end now!
Out of curiosity, will you be doing another poll once this is finally finished, to determine your next project?
I really want to do liquid mercury reboot. I may skip poll just this once.
Is the gold on Gilda’s right shoulder not supposed to be visible in any way with her WAHOOOO!! panel? Perhaps you decided it shouldn’t be in the coloring (I noticed that detail on her right shoulder was there in the sketch but not here) process since she is raising her right arm high.
Take as long as you need
Seems like Gilda shows the most cute side fan service humor when she feel bodyshamed by Aria while Hero and Aria is dead serious to each other
So good! You should make a print version of this once it’s done
these look great
Man these are the best pages for Gilda and her expressiveness, she may not have been a main focus but she has been so damn sweet this whole chapter😏.
One thing I have wondered is whether the Demon Lord is unable (if so why?) to corrupt the sword again or that she simply chose not to for the sake of a challenge? Either way I’m not gonna lie I’m still a little salty that the Demon Lord doesn’t have her Dark Sword anymore since Hero’s sword changing along with himself was one of my favorite aspects of chapter one. Well at least I know she will have a new weapon at some point.
Since the sword was linked or bound or whatever to Hero at the time, mayhaps that was enough for it to be caught up in his transformation. Could be that Aria's spell severed their link in the process of purifying it and now Demon Lord is faced with an oil and water problem.
Love how Gilda is hugging her with her hair.