Demon lord chapter 2 P4-5
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Page 4 and 5 and monor edited on p3
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Comments (9)
The various glow effects look really really good, and as do Demon Lord and the spell book materializing out of thin air. Capes may be a little silly, but they sure do convey an air of regal authority when done right like Demon Lord's is. Possible Corrections Did you mean to have Aria say "<b>the</b> Hero" at the top of page 5? Also, here's another version of the 4th panel for the sake of variety: If you really must know, his body and soul were fused with the untold generations of past Demon Lords to create the "me" you see before you. Who can say what parts of him truly remain though. I remember the adventures you had together, yet all I feel are his darkest desires <b>heh heh</b> As for the rest of his personality...
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Admittedly I did sort of wonder where the cape came from, I suppose the Demon Lord uses it for special occasions😁. On another note I still found a couple of grammar errors on page five. The word fused should be used in place of fuse and create instead of created.
Some typos in the dialogue on Page 5, second panel from the bottom: (suggested corrections bolded) "If you really must know, the <b>remains</b> of his body and <b>soul have</b> been <b>fused</b> to the untold generations of Demon Lords all to <b>create the</b> "me" you see before you. "Who can say what parts remain though<b>?</b> I remember his adventure with you<b>, but</b> even then I'm not sure how much of his personality still <b>remains</b>. <i>heh heh</i> Maybe I'm just his <b>darkest</b> desires made manifest<b>? Who knows.</b>"
It could probably be either one, as in this context it's as much statement as question.
Fantastic! The contrasting colors work really well!
Wow, love the Demon Lord's cape. And Gilda is just the silliest and best servant.
Your work, as usual, is on top! How do you feel about this project, maybe you are already bored with it?
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