Ninja and the cult part 2 1-6 with *fix text
This is not on comissioner order. I just want to add dialouge for fun. Criticism are welcome.
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Can I translate this comics on the Russian language?
Sure go ahead.
The art is obviously amazing, but hoo boy is that some spicy dialog. Definitely kicked things up a notch! For reference, here are the edits I would suggest.
1.1 "My my, if it isn't Young Roland and (Miss) Daisy. Welcome. How can an old woman help you two love birds today?" "Oh stop, Miss Edith, you tease too much. Say, do you sell rings?" "Why yes I do, dearies." 1.2 "To tell you the truth, Miss Edith, we are looking for wedding rings. We've been saving up.' "Oh my!" "Do you... think we can afford a nice pair with this amount?" 1.4 "Welcome!" 1.5 "Could you wait a moment please?" 1.6 "I'll be right with you..."
Mind if I make a story out of this?
Not at all.
some interesting lore there, does make me want the ninja to fall to the crystal though.
Yeah, there are a lot of grammar errors. If need be for the future, I could help with checking for those in the future if need be. Overall though, it’s a good comic to see here :)
good stuff
hmm definitely some grammar errors, I'll see if i have time later if no one else can.
Love it