Demon lord comic page 12
Page 12 is here! Hope everyone stay safe and healthy. We live in intersting time people.
If you found any error or have a suggestion for dialouge feel free to tell me in the comment.
Comments (6)
Typos in the dialogue that I noticed (corrections in bold): Panel #1 (top-left): "It's a Demon Seed<b>. Looks</b> like your Holy Armor <b>is</b> trying to fight it. [...]" Panel #5 (Bottom-left): "[...] Next time you talk<b>,</b> I'll cut your <b>tongue</b> out."
“I’ll cut out your tongue.” is a more aggressive and correct phrasing. Could end the first panel with, “[...] How futile. Hehehe” or “Such futility. Hahaha”
i looove it
I take it the armor kind of solidifies and keeps him immobile in that state?
Well damn so much for Holy armor guess he should not have gone in without a helmet
It’s looking amazing. Love the combination of white and gold.