Demon lord: Latex demon p32-33
I've managed to finished two pages before the end of month. I've change a lot if thing from the draft. Anyway as usual if you find any mistake or have any suggesion feel free to post it in the comment.
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@ibenz009 Happy end of the month! What's the next story comic series you have in mind? Also, are you alright? There was the border war ...
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@ibenz009 Here are the grammar changes, marked in uppercase: Page 32: Rhys: CEASE THIS DEBAUCHERY, Fang! THOUGH WE WERE BUT COMRADES, I SHAN'T WAIVER! Fang: How adorable. Do you truly think you even STAND a chance AGAINST me? A high demon? COMPARED to a demon like me, you INQUISITORS are nothing but GLORIFIED CANNON FODDER. HAHAHAHA … you're barely HOLDING FIRM AGAINST my charm. DOES my new look PLEASE you, Rhys? There's no need to be ashamed. I AM a demon of charm, after all. Hmm… WHAT PURE, untainted desire. I HAVE NO DOUBTS you'll become A splendid paladin in the future. But we CAN'T allow that to happen, NOW CAN we? or: But we WON'T allow that to happen, NOW WILL we? Page 33: Rhys: What DOST THOU DO!? Fang: Turning you into a demon, of course. Rhys: WHAT DEVILRY IS THIS!? Tail: Hell yeah! Finally , a body! EHEHEHE! Nice to meet you , lad! Are you ready for a wild ride , baby? Rhys: ZOUNDS! Fang: HE'LL NEED A LITTLE BIT of work. But please , take good care of him. Tail: HEHEHEHE! NO WORRIES, SISTER FANG! THE LAD AND I WILL GET ALONG JUST FINE! Good thing SISTER FANG gave us ample energy for your MAKEOVER! YOU AND I, LAD, WE'LL MAKE HER PROUD!
we become a new villain hehe
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Format: Original quote ↴ Modified quote without notes. Notes shown in [square brackets] Multiple possible modifications shown in {curly brackets / braces} ―――――――――― [Page 32] "How adorable. Do you truly think you even have a chance agains me? A high demon?" ↴ “How adorable. Do you truly think you have even a chance against me? A high demon?” "Compare to a demon like me. You demon hunters are nothing but a glorified foot soldier." ↴ “Compared to a demon like me, you demon hunters are nothing, but glorified foot soldiers.” "Huhuhu, you're barely holding on again my charm. Do my new look pleased you, Rhys?" ↴ “Huhuhu, you’re barely holding on against my charm. Do my new looks please you, Rhys?” "Hmmm, what a pure untainted desire. I've no doubt you'll become splendid paladin in the future." ↴ “Hmmm, what pure untainted desire. I’ve no doubt you’ll become a splendid paladin in the future.” "We can't allow that happend don't we?" ↴ “We can’t allow that to happen, can we?” [Page 33] "Kekekeke! Nice to meet you lad! Are you ready for a wild ride baby?" ↴ “Kekekeke! Nice to meet you, lad! Are you ready for a wild ride, baby?” "He will need take little bit of work but please take good care of him." ↴ “He will {take a little bit of work / need a little bit of work}, but please take good care of him.” "Kekekeke! No problem, Big Sis Fang! Me and the lad going to get along just fine!" ↴ “Kekekeke! No problem, Big Sis Fang! Me and the lad are going to get along just fine!” "Good thing Big Sis Fang gave us ample energy for your make over!" ↴ “Good thing Big Sis Fang gave us ample energy for your makeover!” "Me and you lad, we are going made her pround." ↴ “Me and you, lad, we’re going to make her proud.”
Thank you so much for your help!
Thanks for the update!
Yay! We're getting two latex demons soon! ^^
Pg 1, bottom left panel should be "Do my new looks please you, Rhys?" Or "Does my new look please you, Rhys?"
Very Nice